FF : Deewana Mujhsa Nahin!!!!(Chap38 ud/pg68)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey' Was up. . I am viren ' viren sood.. I am here to introduce my story.. I am a software engineer in USA. Actually I am from Shimla. For me Shimla like heaven. Like Demons have no entry in Heaven, I also don't have entry in Shimla.. because Viren is a bad boy. It is about 15 years since I left Shimla.

Hey ' it is not a big issue. Now I am adjusted to all with help of my love. If you like this.. I will tell you who is she and how we united and all'.


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deepti_9 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yes you can share with us .we want to know your story
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Hello Mr. Viren,,,, like to know about your story... Btw welcome to our forum... 😊
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common.. we all are very eager to know your story
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All ears and eyes for ur lovestory
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Hey... I will not make you all wait for too long.. Please see first chapter... it is about Viren's a day!!!!!!

------ regards,
Viren
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 1 - A break fast with Viren

One morning @ Newyork. Viren sleeping peacefully in the bed. The room is neatly arranged. Cute paintings hanging on the wall. It is a one BHK flat. Every where we can see an artistical touch.

Suddenly alarm rang. Viren wake and stop the alarm. He sat on the bed. Eyes are still closed. Then he take a photo frame from the side table. It contain a photo of small beautiful girl. She is around 5-6 years old. Viren slowly open his eyes and place a small kiss to that photo." Good Morning Nivi. Jaan, I love u and miss u lot. Always smile like this." Then he went to freshen up.

After freshen up, he went to kitchen. There also we can see same photo. He started to make bread toast and coffee. "Nivi you know, I am having an important meeting today. If they like my design, I will become the team leader. Didn't you see I am working late night for that? That's I couldn't talk to you last night. Sorryyy.. Naraz math hona. Ok. Nivi, I am little nervous''. Am I??? if you are with me why I am worried, right? "

Then he served Bread in two plates and coffee in two cup and placed them in breakfast counter. Then take a sip from one cup and then from the other. He ate bread also like that. " Please Nivi. Don't start argument again. I am drinking your favorite coffee, right. Then you can eat this bread. You know, I don't know how to make these aloo paratha and all' Hmmm.. actually you know I miss those things'. " then he become sad. After some time he smiled. "No baba' I am not sad' you are with me' that is enough for me."

After having breakfast he went to get ready for office. He opened cupboard. "hey Nivi, what I will wear." Then he bring a dark brown shirt and show that to photo. "hmm' it is not ok?.. ohhh' I forget that. Today I have meeting.. hmmm' good gal.. u r taking care everything.." then he took a light blue shirt.. "is this ok'. As ur wish".then he took that photo in his hand' his eyes filled with tears ' "Hey Nivi' you r fine right? You know how I am eager to see you and know about you. Today it completes 5365 day since I met u or got any news about you. Sometime you will ask y I didn't send a letter to you in these days'. How can I? ur father mad @ me' if he see that letter ur dad will scold you again. I cannot bear that. I could visit Shimla too.. but u know very how Dada Sahib hate me.. he still reluctant to call me.. that is y I didn't come there even for Sid's marriage.. I know sid s happy with your Di' Any how she is your sis right?.. you know Nivi' now I am scared to ask about you' if you have any lover or if you married to anyone'' that will surely end of Viren's life.."

Suddenly he stopped crying.. " No Jaaan' I will not cry any more.. eeyyy no' I promise u' this not like every morning' ok'. " then he get ready and looked @ nivi's photo again and said.. "Bye' Jaan" and give a bye kiss to her.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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res will read later and will comment on it...can't wait to read it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is interesting please continue i want to know the rest of your love story.😊

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Excellent start. Nice change to have story from Viren's POV only.

Hope his lonely life gets filled soon. Can't wait for the follow up!!!

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