Dastaan-e-Ishq (Index pg 1) note at pg 89 - Page 60

Abidah I almost fainted that was so romantic ☺️ how do you manage to do it... Thank you sooo much love you for giving us such lovely scenes..🤗

Wowww yoh that was awesome awesome... So much passion, love and intensity. OMG I when back three times to read each part again... And I loved each and every part. Hope to get much more scenes like this from you. I pray that by some miracle CTs see this and give us something like this... I will die for sure after watching KM and NS in a scene like this. You really wrote an awesome scene... Words can't describe how awesome it is... Thanks so much. Love you for this scene.

OMG... I am so touced by ALL of your comments guys :) Thanks a lot... I really check the websites so many times after writing a scene for the feedback, but trust me, every word of yours build my confidence up and makes me want to write a new scene. I might have stopped, but your love and kind words, which I am not worthy of, is making me write scenes after scenes. I did not know in frustration that I will reach so far with my FF, but after God, I have to thank you guys for your love and appreciation... Due to workload and personal commitments I am not able to answer everyones comment, but trust me I read them every time I cannot to get the courage to write further :) Thanks a lot everyone :)

Truly their love is so pure and out of this world. Your Nivren are so different yet so meant to be with each other. One year anniversary and there's no lack of passion, zeal, togetherness and love. Seems like Viren is also teaching Yash and giving him some valuable advice about love... well indirectly thru his actions.

Originally posted by: savera2007

OMG... I am so touced by ALL of your comments guys :) Thanks a lot... I really check the websites so many times after writing a scene for the feedback, but trust me, every word of yours build my confidence up and makes me want to write a new scene. I might have stopped, but your love and kind words, which I am not worthy of, is making me write scenes after scenes. I did not know in frustration that I will reach so far with my FF, but after God, I have to thank you guys for your love and appreciation... Due to workload and personal commitments I am not able to answer everyones comment, but trust me I read them every time I cannot to get the courage to write further :) Thanks a lot everyone :)

It is actually your brilliant writing skills that we cant stop ourselves to comment. But again I hope we are not putting too much pressure on you. Each ff is making us (well atleast me) more greedy and as soon I wake up in the morning the first thing I do is to check if you've updated a scene. Oh my lord please forgive me! But He himself has given us this beautiful gift call love and Love is God!

loved last 3 scenes too. i just love the story too... thanks for writing this ff, hats off to u Abidah!!
can't wait to read more...

It's just awesome...abidah di...continue fast...after reading ur next scene i have to go back to icu with ashly dear...😛...and what a name for nivren's new home.."Aashiana-e-Ishq"...wah ji...wah ji...loved it..and thank u so much for such a romantic.. wonderful..sweet update..!!

Loved all the scenes..the last scene was so romantic. ☺️

abida...luvd ur every scene..u mad both nivren succesful..wow dey r celebratin their anniversary..wat shud isay dear...u r awsom...
it was so sweet of u to say dat it is our commentz dat mak u write mor&mor scenes...bt iwud say dat it is ur scenes dat mak us comment mor&mor..
luvd d name of d house...perfect as alwayz...
a very big hug&a spl thank u fr findin d tim to update as u r busy...
hw cud u say dat u nt worthy of d coments..u defntly r dear..may b much mor dan dis...
may god almighty bless u wit everytin u need& deserve as u mak me happy wit ur ff..
wish ke kash ctz tumhare story padthe,tho unhe patha hotha ki ye story aise bhi likhe ja sakthe the...

Scene 66

Viren was sleeping and Nivedita was awake early in the morning. He looked so peaceful and since he had not slept properly for last two months, Nivedita did not want to wake him up. So she left him sleeping. She had not no new clothes with her, but when she opened the closet she saw that Viren had bought new sarees for her and she kept looking at them and thinking that he is crazy about anything which was in touch with her and then she sighed and said to herself that she wished that he could be crazy about himself too. She had hard time finding a saree for this beautiful morning, then she saw a saree in skyblue/pink color and decided to wear it. While finding her clothes she went over to Viren's side of the closet and found white pants whit black/red shirt for him.

After getting ready she went to see the house. It looked beautiful in daylight. Everything was neat and clean and she loved every bit of it. It had her touch in everything and she loved Viren's accuracy… she was smiling and feeling as if she was flying in the skies. She went to every room but there was one room, which was locked and she was curious to see what was inside. She found a key on the doorframe and opened it. It was a room filled with teddybears and toys. She just stood there and knew what this meant. She had thought about it herself, but was not able to say it because of the circumstances and her shyness.

Suddenly she felt being hugged and Viren whispered that I know it will be a pain you will have to bear and this is the only pain I have to ask you to go through jaan. He kissed her on her cheeks and asked whether she was agreeing and she turned and hugged him. Viren got his answer and then together they saw everything in the room and Viren kept talking about names, schools, future plans and Nivedita kept looking at him and his excitement. He was adorable as a kid at this moment and his innocence was to be seen.

She asked him to get ready while she will make the breakfast. Viren said that he will, but Nivedita told him very firmly that he should get going. He smiled and said that he loved her bossy style. Nivedita had made breakfast and placed on the diningtable, when Viren came down. He looked at it and then said that he was not going to eat this way. Nivedita looked at him surprisingly because she had made everything he liked. Viren took a blanket out and placed the breakfast on it and asked her to join him. She looked at him and he said that the peace he had felt eating like this that sort of peace could not to be found on the diningtable. He wished that they ate like this more than often. She looked amazingly at his humbleness. He had changed; she knew that, but this much… She left it there because Viren was impossible to understand.

After breakfast Viren told her that they were going to Shimla. Nivedita looked surprised at him. He said to her that NT Dadi had been sick and they had to go there for her sake… but this was not the only reason. Viren stopped talking and Nivedita took his hand in his and asked him to continue. He said that they had promised Dada Sahib that they will only be away till they had been successful in fulfilling the promise given to Keshav once. As the circumstances are, they had to go back once. Nivedita looked at him; could he surprise her more… He wanted to go back because of the promise they had made and she knew how much he did not want to go.

He told her to to wait and came back with papers in his hands and gave them to her. He asked her to sign the papers. She asked him what it was for then he told her that everything he owned; he had made sure that she owned it with him. Nivedita told him that she does not need all that and before she could complete her sentence, Viren said that what if something happened to him, what will she do? No one was going to take care of her as he had seen her position in Sood Mansion and he wanted her to be secure no matter what. He made Nivedita sign the papers and now they shared everything.

They arrived in Shimla in afternoon. Dada Sahib was told about it and both Sharmas and Soods were on the port to take them in. They were seeing everyone after so long time and both were touched by the welcome they got until they met Jaal and Divya. Divya was getting anxious about her position in the house after Nivi's entrance and Jaal was not happy to see Viren with Nivedita. All the hatred they had surpressed in one year was finding its way to the surface. Nothing had changed and this was felt by Viren and Nivedita also.

Happiness was back in Sood Mansion and the quietness was substituted by laughter and there was so much to talk about. Nivedita was telling about their experiences in Delhi to VD, YD and NT Dadi. Everyone was listening and Viren was talking to Dada Sahib, Keshav, Pratap and Siddhart. Hemlata and Divya did not like the scene at all and Jaal were not interested in so much closeness between familymembers. In short, nothing was changed.

Viren was talking to Keshav about moving with them to Delhi. He needed someone to take of the publishing house and when they had Pratap in Shimla, Keshav could manage the things Delhi very well and since NT Dadi was getting older and had no one around her, then Nivedita could help her. Yash was already in Delhi so their family could be complete. Dada Sahib was listening and getting the message. NivRen had not returned home!

YD and VD was so happy to see Nivedita and they were talking about all the things they could do and want to do together. Nivedita asked on the other hand them to come and live with them for a while and this was something YD was happy to hear. It would give them some change and with time she had realized that NivRen were not coming back.

Jaal were getting angry at the option of Keshav and NT Dadi moving to Delhi and be a part of the business. They had kept on eye on the growing success of Viren and had decided to offer to help Viren and live with him. Last two months, regardless how much they had tried to meet Viren, he had refused. They even went to his office, but he had said hello and excused. They couldn't use Nivedita in this because every road to Nivedita went through Viren and Viren was not interested in letting them into their lives. They had waited for Viren to come and will talk to him about it. But now it sounded impossible.

Jaal wanted to try this last time to get what they wanted and then CC went over to Viren and said that everyone was keeping her son busy and were not letting her talk to him, so she asked him to meet her in her room because there was so much to talk about. Everyone got irritated but on the other hand, she was the mother, so what could they say… Viren quietly went with CC and JW followed soon after.