Dastaan-e-Ishq (Index pg 1) note at pg 89

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Abidah

@savera2007

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Posted: 14 years ago

On Ashley's request, here is the index:

Scene 1, pg 1
Scene 2, pg 1
Scene 3, pg 2
Scene 4, pg 2
Scene 5, pg 3
Scene 6 pg 4
Scene 7, pg 4
Scene 8, pg 5
Scene 9, pg 6
Scene 10, pg 10
Scene 11, pg 11
Scene 12, pg 12
Scene 13, pg 12
Scene 14, pg 12
Scene 15, pg 15
Scene 16, pg 16
Scene 17, pg 16
Scene 18, pg 18
Scene 19, pg 19
Scene 20, pg 20
Scene 21, pg 21
Scene 22, pg 22
Scene 23, pg 23
Scene 24, pg 23
Scene 25, pg 24
Scene 26, pg 25
Scene 27, pg 26
Scene 28, pg 27
Scene 29, pg 28
Scene 30, pg 29
Scene 31, pg 30
Scene 32, pg 31
Scene 33, pg 32
Scene 34, pg 33
Scene 35, pg 34
Scene 36, pg 35
Scene 37, pg 36
Scene 38, pg 36
Scene 39, pg 38
Scene 40, pg 39
Scene 41, pg 44
Scene 42, pg 45
Scene 43, pg 47
Scene 44, pg 48
Scene 45, pg 50
Scene 46, pg 51
Scene 47, pg 52
Scene 48, pg 53
Scene 49, pg 54
Scene 50, pg 56
Scene 51, pg 61
Scene 52, pg 63
Scene 53, pg 63
Scene 54, pg 65
Scene 55, pg 66
Scene 56, pg 67
Scene 57, pg 68
Scene 58, pg 69
Scene 59, pg 70
Scene 60, pg 71
Scene 61, pg 72
Scene 62, pg 73
Scene 63, pg 74
Scene 64, pg 75
Scene 65, pg 76
Scene 66, pg 78
Scene 67, pg 78
Scene 68, pg 82
Scene 69, pg 84
Scene 70a, pg 85
Scene 70b (END), pg 86

Scene 1:

This is was the last night' Tomorrow, 20 days will have passed away and Viren has lost his battle against time. He knows that Nivedita loves him, but she has not confessed her. NT dadi is also having soft corner for him, but it is too late. Viren Sood has lost his battle for the first time'

The past was passing by and he was thinking about all the moments, good and bad ones, he had spent with Nivedita. He was living them over and over. Tomorrow, the rights of calling his love Mrs. Nivedita Viren Sood was going to snatch by the law' Only he was to be blamed. He was sitting there. Watching the moon and searching for an answer.

So many wrong things had he done towards his family, Nivedita and himself. He got everything back but except one thing. His life was leaving him. He was dying a slow death and did not know how to prevent it. Once again, he asked for a miracle knowing that he was maybe not granted one, because he had not made himself worth it. Still he had a hope. He was longing to see her' And then he started walking towards her room. Since he had been living in the Sharma house, he somehow had been to every room, but had never gone into her room. Why? He did not know, but today' He wanted to see her and he had decided that no one was going to stop him. She still belonged to him and he went there as her love.

On the other hand, Nivedita was crying seeing the moon and asking herself whether the decision was right. Viren had changed since she had left him. He was not the old Viren, whom she knew and she just wanted to know this stranger once again. There was something about him, that was driving her carzy. He had been there for her when Yash got in trouble and had taken all the blame on him self. Something which had provoked Keshavs wrath. She wanted to tell her father that Viren indeed was the savior, but Keshav did not wanted to hear her stories and NT dadi was too tired of all this.

She had decided to snatch her and his happiness and sacrifice it for her father. She was dying inside and no one seems to see that. She had unwillingly avoided any contact with Viren for the past few days. She knew that he was going to get more hurt and she wanted to make it easy for him. She was praying silently for a miracle to see him one last time as Mrs. Nivedita Viren Sood. How beautiful didn't it sound' She had wrote this name so many times last few days' Viren Sood' Her love and life' The life which was soon to be over and she couldn't do anything about it.

Viren reached her room and the door stood open. He saw Nivedita near the window looking at the moon. The moonlight was falling upon her and there she stood. He could see a little bit of her face and in the eye, which he could see' He was seeing storm of tears, which was waiting to come out' He gently closed the door and locked it and went inside.

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Posted: 14 years ago

WOW Abidah!!! AWESOME BRILLIANT FANTASTIC love it sweetie. it brought tears to my eyes please do continue its absolutely awesome x

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vids08

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Posted: 14 years ago

Thanks Abidah, I'm so happy that you hv started writing scenes.Very touching. You are so gifted.Your words touch the soul.Brilliant Abidah. Please do continue....

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gmann2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

Brilliant Abidah, beautifully written. Loved the first scene. Glad that you decided to write this. Please continue soon.

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Asma

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Posted: 14 years ago

Aww i loved it Abidah!! Wow, thanks sweetie, first scene was awesome! I dont know if i will be writing this weekend (havent thought of anything yet) but i'll definitly be looking forward to more scenes from u for sure🤗

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Abidah

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Posted: 14 years ago

Scene 2:

There was something in the atmosphere. Niveditas room was just like her... Simple... She loved flowers and he could smell them as well. He noticed the painting over her bed and he decided that once he got home with Nivedita then they are going to an art exhibition to buy a painting for their room... Their room... Was there going to be a "Viren and Nivedita room" after tomorrow?

He was getting tensed and relieved at the same time. He was fearing this moment and still he did not feel any fear. He was fallen in love with her once again' She was wearing the purple sari which she was wearing the day he got caught. He was looking at her and couldn't take his eyes from her. She was the best thing happened to him and he had lost her because of his stupidity. The more he thought about this, the more he got angry at himself.

The anger he get, the more increase in his longing did he feel. He couldn't stop at this moment. This moment has to be lived and he had decided to live it. Nivedita was so lost in her prayers that she didn't realized that someone was in the room. She was just hoping to be granted a miracle so she could see Viren one last time. The only way it was possible was when all of them was at sleep, especially Viren. She was waiting for the right time and praying to get the courage...

Suddenly she could feel someone behind her. She knew who it was and before she could say or do anything, she felt his hands on her waist. His breath could she feel on her neck and before she knew it, Virens lips was touching her skin on the neck. She was so lost in his arms for the first time that she did not wanted to get out of them.

Viren was expecting that Nivedita will try to escape from his hold, but when minutes past by and Nivedita was still in his arms' He was surprised and with her acceptance of his touch, he tightened his grip around her. Now there was no room between these two' They stood like that in the shadow of the moon for a while' Viren had not moved his lips from her neck and Nivedita had her hands on his. Niveditas breath was unstable at times and this made Viren more grazier' If there was a limit to craziness, then Viren was determined to cross that limit today'

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milee1014

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Posted: 14 years ago

Oh my Gosh, Abidah you made me breathless. Please pretty please continue soon.

My hearts beating so fast reading the last part, please continue soon dear.

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gmann2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

Wow Abidah that was one passionate scene, now I greedy for more.

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salekh1

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Posted: 14 years ago

OMG OMG OMG,i just read the first two parts, and im breathless..

AWESOME scenes..

Please conintue soon😛

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Abidah

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Scene 3:

Moments after moments passed away and still these two souls were inseparable. The existence of Sharmas and Soods had vanished and the only thing that was existing was Viren & Nivedita… Two souls in love with each other so much that the need of uttering it was not required any longer. The language of silence had spoken. This language was the language of love…

Love was something which these two had learned to feel and deal with it, with time. Their bond was so unique that these two were unable to understand it themselves. Why was it, that after all that Viren had done, Niveditas was not able to hate him? Why was Viren so crazy about her? All the questions and answers was to be found in this moment…

Suddenly a cold breeze made its way towards the lovebirds to wake them from their deep sleep in the arms of each other. Viren realizing that it was getting cold and standing like that infront of the window could make Nivedita ill decided to step away from her. Nivedita, who was still lost in his arms, didn't noticed the sudden arrival of the cold breeze… She was so lost in being embraced by the love that she was not paying attention to anything.

Viren was smiling in his heart thinking about Nivedita… Slowly he tried to loose his grip on her waist. He knew that Nivedita was holding his hands and as soon he tried todo that, Nivedita tightened her hold on his hands. Her gesture made him realize what kind of gem he was in possession of. He was so touched that a tear found a way out from his eyes and fell on the naked neck…

Nivedita could feel this suddenly fall of a teardrop and she woke up and realized that she was standing in the embrace of love in the moonlight… Her dream had come through… This was the wish she made at the honeymoon when she catched the feather and made a wish.

Nivedita wanted to tell him about it, but was thinking… How? His lips were touching her neck… A teardrop was fallen and she was herself holding his hands tight… She wanted to see his eyes badly today. His eyes always made her feel tensed, because she always saw passion, lust, love, eagerness, spirituality, longing and devotion and she couldn't read which feeling was dominating at oneparticular of time. Today she knew somewhere in herself that his eyes was reflecting all these feelings and she just wanted to drown in all of them, before it was too late…

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