Originally posted by: LizzieBennet
Lol no, this author has always been hit or miss for me (more miss than hit actually) and I felt exactly the same about this book. Check my review against my log in the sheet.
Oh, I hadn't realised that you had this book in your log too! I honestly just go in there to log in my own entries, I don't really look at anyone else's 
This is my first time reading this author, although she's been rec-ed to me a lot. When I started reading I really thought she'd done it for me. The whole premise looked right up my alley, and Miles was so sweet right from the get-go. Honestly I'd love to have a guy like Miles in my life. Friend, boyfriend, anything works
He's just so sweet and adorable 
Daphne was very relatable to me in the beginning bcz of her awkwardness with strangers and inability to make friends on her own (all my friends are either classmates from school, or extroverts who later decided to adopt me
) and I loved how she seemed to be getting more confident in her life, finding her own footing. I loved how Miles — and Ashleigh — were directly and indirectly a part of that growth.
I really was breezing along in the early phase... but I think ever since Julia came into the picture, the pace slowed down — both for the book and for me. I... don't really like her, for some reason? Idek why, whenever she appears she either gets on my nerves or bores me. I like her sometimes, but it's mostly when I'm trying to like her 😅 I think I'm the only one who feels this way though 😅 bcz everyone else who's read the book seems to love her. I do love Ashleigh though ❤️ I'm glad she's the friend Daphne made.
Anyway, now with Julia, the dad and his gf, plus all the restrained feelings and Miles vanishing and whatever drama the author stuffed in the last few chapters, it's all become a bit too much for me. I initially liked the vibes for two reasons — it was simple and fun. Now it feels neither, so I'm not liking it anymore. The story honestly feels a bit of a drag atp... is it something about the writing style that changed in between? 🤔 Idk, but a few pages less could've been better for the book, I feel. Less of other ppl, and more... them. Miles and Daphne. Also, yes, I'd like Daphne to contribute something meaningful to Miles' life as well. I mean, he helped with her confidence and self esteem, her social life, he takes her to visit places so she'd be happier here, he helped get volunteers for the Readathon as well. I mean, what hasn't he helped with? Comparatively, Daphne hasn't really done... anything? I guess she's gonna fix the siblings relationship, but idk if even that will feel like enough (if/when it happens)
Although when I look at it objectively, this is still a very typical plot, there's nothing that stands out as too unnecessary or extra. Everything looks normal. Objectively speaking, I guess I should've been okay with the plot? But somehow I'm not - instead I'm bored and this close to DNFing. So is that a me problem or a you (book) problem?
Again, idk 
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