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Posted: 15 years ago
#31
Loved it Naley👏

It was really very intense.
There is something very serious between ArBi, may be related to Abhinav😒

You described the accident very well😊
can't wait to read more😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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CHANGE
Part 3

Armaan looks at the Doctor in shock disbelieve


Dr.Mehra : Armaan I know Bharti's family for a long time now

Bharti is very strong young lady she will come through this keeps his hand on Armaan's shoulder

Armaan: Dr.Mehra can I see her

Dr.Mehra: you can but only for little while!! Dr.Mehra lead Armaan to the ICU everything will be ok Armaan, be strong

Armaan takes a deep breath as he pushed through the heavy glass door to see Bharti being fix to various machines to make her breathe easily Armaan almost broke down to see Bharti in that condition !! The room was very quiet he could only hear the sounds from the machines Bharti breathing softly as if noting had happened to her! Armaan walking towards the bed looking at her sit beside her bed he said nothing for a moment just looking at her it took some time to break the silence

Armaan: Hey is been a long time since we done this you & I having a conversion no one to disturb us! wow long time ha!! Kept silent for a while Bharti I know things have not been good with us & I know I'm the last person you want to see when you open your eyes!! O god but I miss you jaan so much touches her head moving her hair coming out of the bandage back her ear sometimes may be deep inside of you must be missing me to smiles slightly...I know you will never forgive me !!

Bharti do you know the last few days I see this dream like all my dreams I see you smiles.... I know I know get to the point ...looking at her face.. you telling me how much you love me & our love is strong to fight all odds, you are always always mine always!! & Every single time I wake up from that dream I see an empty bed & you not by my side touching her cheek slightly I now is stupid is just dream right !!! You know me believing in dreams & all that!! I wish it was real Bharti gazing pensively at her !! touching her hand softly can you remember you always telling that you're not going anywhere well I need to hold you to that right now okay I just need you to come back! Bharti Listen just move your fingers if you can hear me okay just move one of those beautiful fingers & let me know that your still here with me

Amaan keeps on looking at Bharti's fingers Bharti please don't be stubborn now you have to move your fingers looking on but her fingers stay still as it have never moved before!! Armaan takes her hand again holding it tie to him placing it on his cheek jaan I'm right here please move your fingers before I leave kisses her hand gently suddenly it was all to much for him to see Bharti not responding the girl who never stop talking chatterbox he called her !! tears of exhaustion began to sting behind his eyes & before he could stop them they had spilled over & were now coursing silently down his face to Bharti's hand he inter lock his fingers with Bharti's kissers her hand one last time wiping his tears from her hand gently keeping her hand Armaan gets up and whispers near her ear please Bharti you have to come back !!

looking at Bharti as he pushers the door Armaan's hearts keep on telling him look again her fingers are moving he turns for the last time to look at Bharti hoping her fingers are moving but the stillness of her fingers giving him no hope...............

Armaan comes out from the ICU wiping his tears feeling noting at all just his heart pounding so hard it hurts so badly ! walks way along the hospital corridor leading him to the out side balcony putting his hands inside his pockets looking at the dark sky ....clouds trying is best to cover the beautiful full moon lighting the dark sky !


closing his eyes & takes a deep long breath to release his pain a cold soft breeze brushing a against his face as he opened his eyes looks up in to the sky witch was very peaceful !

God there has to be miracle for Bharti please don't take her away from me again please!!!! I need her.. Looking at the sky lost in memories what they had shard together

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L5gl1e8KcSE

Armaan!!! A voice shakes Armaan suddenly ..to turns to face Dr Mehra

Dr.Mehra: Armaan I know you can't see Bharti in this state but son you have to take a rest you been here for a long time now!go home clear your mind

Armaan : No I cant sir I wish to stay with my wife

Dr.Mehra : as you wish...leaving Armaan


Next Morning Armaan was still a sleep on a chair cuddling his jacket the next thing he knew was he been shaken & loud voice was ringing in his ear

Nurse: Sir wake up!!! Wake up!!!

Armaan : blearily he open his eyes waking up suddenly!! what where Bharti !!!!

Nurse: smiles at Armaan as if she woken small child... sir good news your wife has regain conscious she is out of danger smiling at Armaan

Armaan : what Bharti is ok !!! A Smile almost covering his face but the smile disappear bring himself back to reality!! he stands up to leave

Nurse : sir your wife room is this way don't you want to see her

Armaan : smiles at the nurse I don't think she want to see me is better........

Nurse : but sir the only person she asking for is you

Armaan : What!!! in shock looking at the nurse

Nurse : yes sir she is being saying your name ever since she regain conscious

Armaan : O My God turning to all direction massing his hair are you sure !!

Nurse : yes sir I'm sure I was there few seconds go

Armaan : he hug the Nurse in joy & turns her round hugging her again

Nurse : cleared her throat Armaan still hugging the nurse

Armaan : O gosh I 'm sooo sorry I counted stop my self with a very cute smile O My God O My God I cant believe this is happening !!! WOW she is calling me my wife is calling me wow!!

Nurse: I understand smiling at Armaan sir your wife is been moved from intensive care to general ward so I think you can take that as good news!! Armaan almost burst into tears with relief somehow, he held on I almost for got Dr.Mehra wants to see you is regarding your wife condition

Armaan: but she is out of danger now right?

Nurse: is better if you meet Dr.Mehra first!

Armaan hurries to Dr.Mehra's office with out wasting any time he opens the door to see Dr.Mehra having a conversion with guy well dress he look as he is very angry about something

Armaan : I'm sorry sir I thought that there was no one inside

Dr.Mehra: Armaan good that you are here I was just trying to make Mr.bha .........

The guy turns to face Armaan

Armaan : Bhaskar

Bhaskar: what the hell are you doing here?

Armaan : Dr.Mehra called me you were out of town the car accident Bharti !! Why am I explaining this to you! in a loud tone She is still my wife & I care about her more than you ever know!!!

Bhaskar: yeah right have you not hurt her enough

Armaan: I will never hurt her I love her ....

Bhaskar: enough man with your love story if I find out that you have any thing to do with my sister's accident I will not spar you rushing towards Armaan in anger

Dr.Mehra: Stop it Stop it gentlemen please! this is hospital not Battlefield! I know that you both care about Bharti a lot! & the reason I call you here Bhaskar,Armaan is a bout Bharti's condition that you both should know

Armaan : what is it sir she is going to be ok right

Bhaskar : shut up man with your concern

Dr Mehra : Gentlemen Please! Mr.Bhaskar your sister has gone through a major accident she had severe head trauma because of the huge impact on her head the Impact was so severer that I'm so sorry to say this but Bharti has regain memory loss!

Bhaskar : what !!!!

Dr Mehra : Bhaskar come down Please! in Bharti's cause is unusual her brain is trying to remember who she was before but knowing who she is similar to short-term memory loss but is not the same She only recalls Armaan sometimes it must be before the accident she was thinking or talking to him that part was block inside her brain that's why she can only remember Armaan but sometimes she won't know who he is but maybe will recognize him & then know who he is it's very hard to say

Armaan : O My God

Bhaskar : looks at Armaan this cant be happening my sister is going through a divorce with this man & you are telling me she only remembers him for god sake Doctor she is trying to move on with her life !!!

Dr Mehra: Bhaskar please! try to understand this situation is your sisters life we are talking about her! if you try to rush things in to her brain she will loss everything sometimes fall in to a coma back again ! Bharti will remember things but it will take time sometimes years! Is like from smiles, colours, Places, weather, sometimes faces if you give her time looking at Bhaskar if you really love your sister you should let her figure out things by her self, there is no medication for this you have to understand just need to give her time & care, understanding she is lost we have to help her to find her self in her

Bhaskar looks at the doctor in disbelieved in anger!! Yeah sure I understand but I don't won't is man near my sister!! pointing his finger at Armaan in anger !!

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Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#33
Wow! I just love your FF😛, you soooo have me hooked! The first part was so incredibly sad, I really felt Armaan's heartache and pain, thought I was going to cry.......😭
the next part was such a shock, Bhaskar coming in and not liking Armaan and wanting to keep him away from Bharti. 😲
Cannot wait for the next part to see what is going to happen and to see the initial interaction between ArBi...😳I so love the fact that Bharti remembers Armaan and only Armaan. I hope this means that Armaan can get close to Bharti again, refresh all those beautiful ArBi moments and memories and show her his obviously very deep love that he has for her😳. He has the chance to win her over now and I hope Bhaskar gives him that chance.
Fantastic work👏, this part really made my day!!! 😃
Edited by *Sohana*Singh* - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#34
Naley dear.. welcome back.. 🤗🤗🤗 Gosh cant tell u how tense i was waiting for ur update..!! 😛
N thank God... that Bharti is safe n sound despite that horrendous accident..!! I was sooo worried yaar.. 😔 n glad God Almighty heard mine n Armus prayers..!!
But.. but... Bhartis lost her memory.. thats soo sad yaar 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 but still a glimpse of hope is that she atleast remembers Armu.. 😛😛 Am quite positive that with his love n care Armu will nurse Bharti back to her true self...!!
Cant wait to read the next... n well i hope.. Bhaskar n Armus animosity reduces over the time..!! 😊 Gr8 epi naley.. keep rocking ..!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#35
tragdy😆😆
awsome yaar
i love this part
altou it was a really sad part😭......the ICU scean was really sad
armaan really loves bharti and now i am sure that whatever happend betw Arbi is just a misunderstanding......
well bharti love armaan i think that why she onlu remaber him😳
i am happy that she only remaber him so that we will get some nice Arbi scens now😳
awsome paart yaar👏👏
keep it up and cun sooooonnnnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: *Sohana*Singh*

Wow! I just love your FF😛, you soooo have me hooked! The first part was so incredibly sad, I really felt Armaan's heartache and pain, thought I was going to cry.......😭

the next part was such a shock, Bhaskar coming in and not liking Armaan and wanting to keep him away from Bharti. 😲
Cannot wait for the next part to see what is going to happen and to see the initial interaction between ArBi...😳I so love the fact that Bharti remembers Armaan and only Armaan. I hope this means that Armaan can get close to Bharti again, refresh all those beautiful ArBi moments and memories and show her his obviously very deep love that he has for her😳. He has the chance to win her over now and I hope Bhaskar gives him that chance.
Fantastic work👏, this part really made my day!!! 😃




O wow thank u sooooooooooo much🤗 girl ur comment just made my day !!
girl from a Fabulous writer like u thank u sooooo much !! really meant a lot 😃
ArBi love will grow once again there will be loadz of enemies to stop them u will find out sooooooooon
please keep on reading thank u sooooo much
take care
Naley

Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Naley dear.. welcome back.. 🤗🤗🤗 Gosh cant tell u how tense i was waiting for ur update..!! 😛

N thank God... that Bharti is safe n sound despite that horrendous accident..!! I was sooo worried yaar.. 😔 n glad God Almighty heard mine n Armus prayers..!!
But.. but... Bhartis lost her memory.. thats soo sad yaar 😭 but still a glimpse of hope is that she atleast remembers Armu.. 😛😛 Am quite positive that with his love n care Armu will nurse Bharti back to her true self...!!
Cant wait to read the next... n well i hope.. Bhaskar n Armus animosity reduces over the time..!! 😊 Gr8 epi naley.. keep rocking ..!



girl thank u sooooooo much !! imagine me witting it 😆 girl ArBi love will grow in time but will Bharti forgive Armaan keep on reading to find out girl thank u sooooooo much glad u like it 🤗
take care
Naley



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Posted: 15 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: ghazal_naz

tragdy😆😆

awsome yaar
i love this part
altou it was a really sad part😭......the ICU scean was really sad
armaan really loves bharti and now i am sure that whatever happend betw Arbi is just a misunderstanding......
well bharti love armaan i think that why she onlu remaber him😳
i am happy that she only remaber him so that we will get some nice Arbi scens now😳
awsome paart yaar👏👏
keep it up and cun sooooonnnnn



wow thanx ghazal sooooo much 🤗
i really wanted to make the emotional side of Armaan to come out i hope i got it right !!!
yeah ArBi scenes loadz to come
thank u soooooooooo much Girl!!!
Take Care
Naley

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Posted: 15 years ago
#39
WOW!!!! Such a good concept👏
I love the way you write, very addictive😉

Loved the way you described ArBi in the hospital, Armaan was soooo sad😭 Loved the moon pic😃

Thank god Bharti is safe now and thank god she only remembers Armaan, and forgot about the bad things😊

Loved the Armaan-Nurse part, very funny😆

And Bhaskar so angry?

I hope this the oppurtunity for Armaan to prove his love.

Can't wait to read more😍

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Posted: 15 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

WOW!!!! Such a good concept👏
I love the way you write, very addictive😉

Loved the way you described ArBi in the hospital, Armaan was soooo sad😭 Loved the moon pic😃

Thank god Bharti is safe now and thank god she only remembers Armaan, and forgot about the bad things😊

Loved the Armaan-Nurse part, very funny😆

And Bhaskar so angry?

I hope this the oppurtunity for Armaan to prove his love.

Can't wait to read more😍



O wow kaninika thank u soooooooo much u liked it me soooooo happy
yeah girl i was wanting to get ArBi Hospital scene perfect I'm sooo glad u liked it 😃
me like the moon pic to 😳
yeah Armaan will do anything to get Bharti back keep on reading girl thanx again
take Care
Naley

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