FF 'CHANGE' update Part 26 page 38 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
#21
Nice partdear...
Bharti wants to kill Armaan???


Well Continue soon...
Cant wait for the next part

Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
welllll........
episode with a suspense?
I like suspenses only if they are revealed
continue soon dear
And must say
u are an awesome writer
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23
wow guys thanx u sooooooooooo much🤗 for the Awesome comments & vivi entry of Adam Brody. girl keep still he will be coming sooooooooon hopefully if i get loadz of free time 😆 me need to make him very flashy☺️
guys just love the comments Amru4ever said
THRILLER is bit like that but something big is going Chang bharti's life
i'm soooooooo sorry i take time to update when i do get time is all Chang
thanx again guys
take care
naley

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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
CHANGE
PART 2


Tony: while looking at the picture why do you want him dead did he hurt you so much??

Bharti: looks at Tony in anger I want him killed I think you got your answer don't make a mess of it

Tony: wow I can't bare to see a beautiful lady been hurt with a cheeky smile but if it makes me richer looks at Bharti what about my final payment Madam

Bharti: like all men I was not sure about you till now!! I thought you'll back out!!

Your payment will be ready no need to worry Mr. Tony

Tony : but'..madam I need''.

Bharti :I told you don't worry meet me at the old gate in station road within an hour I'll get u the money then

Tony: but'..I ''nee'd

Bharti: looks at Tony he act as he want something more like he is not sure of the payment without any hesitant Bharti removes her necklace witch she had on & gives it to Tony keep this as advance I need you to do this

Tony: eyes lit up when he sees the necklace he grabs the necklace with a big smile your job will surly be done I hate to see a good looking lady in disappointment he put the necklace in his pocket I take your leave madam is pleasure doing business with you meet you in hours time

Bharti: very nervous looks at Tony till he despises in to the crowd out side the restaurant she keeps her self still for while she just had conversation with murderer lost in the revengeful person she has become

Madam your bill

Bharti breaks out from her thoughts pay's the bill & looks at the time she leaves in hurry ...Gets in to the car closer her eyes takes a deep breath her hands shiver she mangers to start the car while driving she is again lost in her thoughts am I really happy now ...then why am I feeling guilty will Armaan's death bring happens to her life will it bring the most important thing she lost in her life is killing Armaan the only way out to feel better

Loud horn bring Bharti to reality Bharti looks from the mirror is truck flashing lights asking her to move Bharti in Armaans thoughts

Bharti : go to hell man the horn blowers continuously Bharti in anger looks at the mirror again the bright light strike her eyes through the light she sees a small boy sitting in the back sit looking at her Bharti panics... Abhinav O my god Ab my baby the small boy smiles and disperse Bharti panics.. looking at the mirror screams No No don't leave me she turns light becomes brighter but this time she sees Armaan Bharti panics Armaan where my baby go away where is Ab... Armaan !! Armaan... !!screams tears poring down where is my baby letting go of the steering wheel

Armaan : I still love you Bharti & I'll always will

Bharti : go away leave me along screams where my baby in anger in few seconds she loses control of the car with out warning the car lurched & she was thrown forward violently biting her head & chest knocking the wind out of her the only sound she could hear was of the raining glass echoing in her ears as the light fades while everything slowly turns black the car rollsover in speed while truck which was behind crush in to the car powerfully dragging the car along the road Bharti still in side it





In a Aviation company in Mumbai

Phone rings continuously guy answers it

Guy : Hello

Caller: is this Mr.Armaan Sinha

Guy : yes this is he

Caller : Mr.Arman I'm calling from Mumbai city hospital your wife has meet with a terrible Car Accident

Armaan : What in shock is she ok ??????

Caller : Sri is better if u come to hospital the Dr. is waiting ''.

Armaan : Ok Ok in panic O my God I'll be there right a way Armaan leaves the office in a hurry He arrives at the hospital he inquires from a nurse a bout Bharti my wife was brought in from a car Accident

Nurse: the car accident sir Dr, Mehra is waiting for you in his office right this way Sir

Armaan : Dr.Mehra what happen Sir is Bharti going to be ok

Dr.Mehra : Mr.Armaan good that you are here Bharti is out of surgery Armaan your wife sustained major head trauma due to the hard blow on her head with very deep cut on her right arm no fracture some broking ribs & good deal of internal bleeding possible collapsed lung big number of bruise !! looks at Armaan your wife is very lucky to survive such huge accident we have to keep her in the ICU she is still to regain conscious if she won't regain conscious in the period of 24 hours we are confirming she will fall in to a coma with this kind of severe trauma we did everything we can to save your wife is all up to her now

Armaan looks at the doctor in shock ...........


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hey guys hope you like part 2 of Chang please leave your comments

take care

enjoy

Naley



Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

Hey.. naley.. m so happy u updated..!! N my my ..quite an intense epi..!!

Btw.. Bharti ..wants to kill Armaan.. who happens to b her Husband?? 😲😲😲😲😲😲😲 .. wow.. now this is one hell of a pulsating twist .. !! Am pretty eager to knw exactly what went wrong between ArBi.... 🤔
One thing i understood was tht ArBi had a son.. Abhinav.. and then he died or smthg?? N it was Armus fault?? Am intrigued!! 🤓
Loved it... quite different.. !! Pls. update.. whenever u hv time🤗
Edited by Armu4eva - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26
great update dear 👏 this is an interesting twist .... why Bharti wants to kill her own husband?😲😲 the accident scene and Bharti's thoughts were described beautifully ... please continue soon ... eagerly waiting to know what happens next ..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow, what a part, really interesting to read, there is so much of mystery though........can't wait for all of the history and hidden reasons to be revealed, really really great part. Can't wait for the next part to know what is going to happen to Bharti and to ArBi...so Bharti wants to kill her husband...?! I wonder why, he seems to love and care for her. Continue soon!!!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤔what is going on????
armaan is bharti's husband because the doctor said 'ur wife' but why she want to kill armaan🤔 and Arbi's son....but what happand to him.... and what atchly happend with Arbi...🤔oh man😵..... plzzzzz tell the mistry 😆...
i love this part
intresting
hope bharti will be fine😒 and arbi will be together soon😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey naley!!!!!!!!!!!awesome part..........waiting to read more girl!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh Wow Naley..I gotta give it up to ya girl..👏 👏 👏..You created such an intense, nail biting episode... I was so lost in reading this part..trying enact out the scenes in my mind...and well i was able to picture it man..!! Way too cool...and so very intense..the was Bharti was lost in Armaan's thoughts..and how she saw the flash of light from the truck behind her..and then that terrible accident..Woah the picture just helped alot..i could so see it happening...
Love it SO much..!! Surely is such an interesting FF..I love revenge kinda story..I want more!!..So update soon yea...But erm at your own pace..(i know i said soon..😆 but off course update whenever you're able too...)....
So now Bharti wants to kill Armaan, her husband...and she lost someone precious..?? Which am guessing is her son called Abhinav...Was kinda surprised to see Armaan coming in at the last part..i thought he no longer was in contact with Bharti..
Loving your FF..😃...and well as for Adam Brody..it's okay girl..take your time to bring him in...😳😆..As for now am already loving it with or without Adam in it...and if he comes in...Woah....🤪......😆.....
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago

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