FF 'CHANGE' update Part 26 page 38 - Page 2

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SomerholicGirl thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#11

hey girl...

Luved ur character sketch

Its awesome.

continue soon

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Posted: 15 years ago
#12
OMG OMG

A new FF and that is also by you?
I am soooooooooo happy😃
loved the character sketch😊
it seems a passionate love story.

Can't wait for the first part😍

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Posted: 15 years ago
#13
Wow another ff😍.....thanks naley
great character introduction👏
It will be a nice and different kind of story for sure😛
continue soon...


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva

😆😆 u actually gonna use the lines...wow.. thats kewl.. 😉😳😳 me like it!!

and if i didnt get extra marks
u will be dead😆😆😆 so pray that i do😉😆😆
just kidding
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Posted: 15 years ago
#15
OMG OMG Loved your Characters..
I love Adam Broddy and you put him in the FF....😊
Awesome introduction...👏
Please continue soon....
Can't wait....
Take Care
Wafa
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Posted: 15 years ago
#16

Change

Part 1

Yet another busy Monday morning in Mumbai , Bharti opened her eyes to the morning sun light witch was falling on her face ,tossing the covers aside,she slipped out of bed and went over to the window to pull the curtain to stop the sunlight coming inn she turn to go from there while she saw her reflection from the huge mirror over the dresser she walked towards the mirror while she stood there staring at her image for several long seconds & went away to take a shower

while the first cool droops of water came down on her face throughout her body she looks down letting the cool water run throughout her body ....looking up again with warm tears running down her face she tries to stop it but it never ends... Bharti screams in anger falling down coddling her self floods of tears running down her face screams God!!! why ..why ...why..did you be so unfair with my life why she screams in anger to let go of her pain....after a long painful shower ..she comes out with a tear-stained face as she sees her image a gain from the huge mirror her eyes red with tears ..her skin all pale for the water ..the anger in her was shown from the mirror it made her mad ..she took a vase that was next to the dresser and dashes it powder fully towards the huge mirror breaking it into bits of small pecs falling allover on the ground ..


Bharti kept on looking at the Broken mirror in anger...............and suddly she heard a noise banging on the door madam madam are you ok ?

Bharti: in anger ...go away leave me along !!!!

Maid: madam please tell me whether you are ok?

Bhart: just go a way damn it..!!

Maid: I will not leave till I see whether you are ok

Bharti : opens the door in anger are you happy now !! I told you to leave witch part of that you dint understand!!

Maid : in fear madam a call came from office they said is very important!!!! something about a contract ? Mr. Bharkar has gone to Hyderabad & they need you

Bharti : call them back & say that I'll be coming to be ready!! leave now

Maid : ok madam she thinks to her self madam is always crying ! she needs to let go of the past someday in disappointment


Bharti : comes down fully dress in black hair tied back... I'm leaving I'll have my breakfast in office she gets in to the car & leaves !!!

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Bharti arrives in office everyone is so scared of her the office is so silent whe is like the employs that are not busy they try to act busy while she is around Specially gyaan

Gyaan : good morning Bharti madam with a wide simile

Bhart : looks at Gyaan for a while & nods her head morning!!Gyaan why did u call me? You better give me a good reason for this !!

Gyaan: madam I''I '..I'. we.. dint get the contract..!

Bharti : what ??? in anger this why you call me....!

Gyaan : madam but'.. but..I'.. know is not your responsibility but madam if you Negotiate we might get the contract pulse with a lesser price I'm sure will get it ' slight smile!!

Bhart : looks at his face with anger are you crazy why should we less our price Just let it go I don't care

Gyaan : but''. but ''.. is'' ......

Bharti : I told you let it go !! if you guys want to work here call off the contract now in anger dashers the contract files on the ground all of you leave now !! Gyaan & the other three guys looks at bhati's face in fear

Bharti: what are you looking at I said leave now !!!

all four of them gets scared tries to leave at once & get stuck in the doorway but they push them self out any how !!

Gyaan: comes out from Bhati's cabin, she is in a good mood today

Guy: what ?...are you ok man you look a bit pale... she was about to fire us dude!! why is madam always like this ?she used to be a very good person !!!Shame that she still cant accept that it was accident!!!

Gyaan : shut up man do u want us to get fired !!! Lets go !!!

Bharti comes out of her cabin & is a bout to leave she gets a call

Stranger: madam is me

Bharti: I'm on my way out call me back after few mints she cuts the line leaves the office while driving !! her phone rings again !!!

Bharti : stops the car hello

Stranger : is me again

Bharti: have you come to a decision yet?

Stranger : Yes madam I have

Bharti : good it should me done ASAP

Stranger : I need some time to get things sorted out ! Madam I need to meet u for the payment where shall I meet you !!

Bhati; No I will meet you tell me the time & place I'll be there

Stranger: ok then meet me at the green eye restaurant at 6.00pm

Bharti : I'll be there she looks at the watch is close to six she turns her car & drives to green eye restaurant ....she hurry's inside ask the reception is there a table book for Bhatri khanna....yes madam right this way please ! she looks at all the people in restaurant curiously while she arrives to the table she didn't say anything kept on staring ....finally she spoke ...are you Tony..?

Stranger : O my you look beautiful just as you sound...

Bharti : this is not what I have come her to discus with you tony ...

Tony: sorry madam, did u bring the picture of the man you want to kill

Bharti : yes ! bharti takes the picture hands it over ...

Tony : when do you need the job done madam?

Bharti : before the morning sun rises !!

Tony looks on at the picture with a revengeful smile ,while the picture was Armaan's!!!!!!!!!!!


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Hey guys thank u soooo much for the comments🤗 !!!! sorry for the late post hope you guys like my 1st part like u luvd my introduction😃 please forgive if there is any mistakes!! 😉

take care,

luv

Naley

Edited by naley4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh wow Naley i gotta say girl this is very intense and exciting!..
Am loving this angry Bharti and the suspense that's going on..!!..Oh boy eagerly waiting for the enterance of Adam Brody...😳.......😆 and what was so funny was when the three guys dashed out of Bharti's cabin but were stucked at the door cos they dashed out at the same time..😆 😆....
Love how Bharti smashes the glass and cries in the toilet..Could really imagine it and She's Ms Scary in office huh..Everybody is so afraid of her, reminds me of the movie "The Proposal" where everbody was afraid of Sandra Bullock in it..In fact i was picturing the Bharti office scene from that movie only..
Loving this very much and pls continue soon girl!..😃
Why she want ton kill Armu..?!....😭
You started off really well!!...👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
Nice part👏
Love ur story......something new and fresh👍🏼
u described angry Bharti very well.........
OMG she want to kill Armaan???😲


eager to know what happens next.....plz update soon🤗


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Posted: 15 years ago
#19
OMG OMG AND OMG
this part made me more restless
why bharti want to kill armaan😒
is it armaan who she is devorsed from🤔
i am going to get mad soon😆
and i like angry bharti😉 but i dont like sad bharti😔
but this part was AWSOME
please please please coun soonn
i cant wait to know more
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
Wow Naley this is like a THRILLER yaar.. me luvd it ...😍
Tho was sad to see my Bharti.. crying n ofcourse. .was 😲 to see her giving Supari to kill Armu.. my janu 😒😒😒
n wow.. Seeing Gyaan scared was 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Gr8 epi.. n really enjoyed it very much..!! Pls. keep updating.. but at ur EASE.. 🤗

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