~ Ajab Prem Ki Ghazab Kahani FF ~ Updt pt 9 Pg20 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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[Recap :
Payal is on the floor and simultaneously Bhaskar screams, "OUCH!!! 😡 What the 🤬??????.!!!" ]
Part 2...
Bharti and Sunny both gasped with theirs hands covering their mouths. They couldn't believed what had just happened before their eyes. Well for one Payal was one the floor and Bhaskar was fuming mad!
Armaan turns around to see what the commotion was about and so does the Invigilator and the rest of their classmates.
Payal :
Ow! Ow! My butt! Gosh I fell down so hard!
While Bhaskar, on the other hand, starts charging towards Sunny. He grabs Sunny's collar and is screaming at him.
Bhaskar (at Sunny):
Bloody fool! Haven't you got any eyes? What playing Basketball here and I'm supposed to be the hoop?? Fancy throwing the correction fluid on my head eh??
(You see Bhaskar misunderstands and thinks that Sunny is the one who threw the correction fluid)
Sunny all frightened BUT thinking to himself..
Sunny's Mind:
Hai Rabba!! Mein marjaaongi..! Bhaskar haath on ME?? Gosh his skin is so bronzeyfied and rough..Roar just like a real MAN!!I swear I could just faint right here on the spot!!.....😍
Bhaskar still holding onto Sunny's collar raises up his hands and smacks Sunny's face to wake him up from his dreamland.
Bhaskar:
Oi!! You're what deaf now too, besides already being blind? I'm talking to you!! You hit me, you get it back!! Oh boy did you mess with the wrong guy or what?!
(Sunny woken up from his senses and starts screaming upon hearing this. He apologises to Bhaskar profusely and starts touching Bhaskar's head asking..)
Sunny:
I'm so sorry darling! I..I.. hope you're not too much in pain..Is it hurting here..? Or here?? Or is it here?? Tell me na..
Bhaskar avoiding Sunny's hands..saying
Bhaskar:
Hey! Hey! STOP IT!! Jeez get your hands away from me!!!
Sunny:
No!! No....!! This is A HUGE Galat Family!!!! It's...it's not me..
Bhaskar:
Goodness!! What??! Wrong Family?? Hahaha must have been wrong I mean look at you..should have been a GI..
Before he could finish his sentence Armaan steps in.
Armaan :
Guys come on stop this..
Sunny:
Oh dear oh dear not family I meant like you know galat family like misunderstanding in like HINDI..Oh gawddd my hindi is so Like very Atrocious!!
Bhaskar :
Dude it's Galatfami!!! Ahahahaha..!!
(The whole class burst out laughing..Sunny turns red..)
Armaan:
Ok stop this! It's childish! Come on Bhaskar leave Sunny. It must have been an accident.
Bharti:
Yes! Yes! It was me who throw it!
Payal:
No Bharti! You don't take the blame! It was me who asked for it so it's my fault.!
Bharti:
No it's me..I'm Sor..
Payal:
Oh just shut up Bharti! It's me sorry Bhask..
Bharti:
NO! I'm..
Bhaskar :
Will the two of you just SHUT THE HELL UP!! In in imitating voice he disturbs the two of them."Oh it's me Bharti. No...no.. Payal it's me..." GOD!! Ladies!!
Armaan:
Oh woah! Come on Dude! That ain't the right way to threat the ladies..! Be a gentlemen ..you know like me..(Armaan Grins showing his perfect white teeth and making the girls in the classroom going "Aaawwww..".all girls EXCEPT Bharti)
Bhaskar:
Yea you mean a FLIRT like you..!
Armaan leaps forward to attack Bhaskar but Sunny blurts out something that made the whole class burst out into laughter again..
Sunny said :
Erm Bhaskar Baba..You're hurting me..Your hands are still on me and it's making me really nervous..I mean it's so rough and....
Bhaskar quickly lets go, feeling all awkward..Sunny becomes so shy..
Invigilator:
STOP THIS!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT IS GOING ON HERE??? YOU GUYS ARE SEATING FOR A PAPER AND COMMUNICATING????? OUT!! I SAY OUT!! THE 5 OF Y'LL GET OUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bharti:
But Mrs Riya the paper isn't over yet!
Invigilator:
Well let me tell you smth young one.. Guess what??!!!
Bharti:
What?
Invigilator:
Well it's OVER!! OVER FOR THE 5 OF YOU GUYS!! NOW OUT OF MY CLASS!! THE REST OF Y'LL WHAT Y'LL LOOKING AT? RESUME YOUR PAPER YOU'VE GOT 5 MINS LEFT!!

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After half an hour later Invigilator or Mrs Riya meets the five of them at her staff room.
Invigilater/Mrs Riya :
Now what you guys have done is totally off the limit! Creating a huge commotion during an examination??!
Bhaskar:
Mrs Riya, it ain't my problem! I was quietly breaking my pencil and Sunny threw the correction fluid on me!
Bharti:
Not Sunny..It was....
Bhaskar (cutting Bharti) :
Yea whatever! Still doesn't change what happened right??!!!!
Payal:
Hey you Bhaskar! Don't be so rude! Mrs Riya I'm at fault, you can dismiss them and give me the deserved punishment.
Bhaskar:
Yea that's more like it! Way to go woman! You did something right for once! Alright Mrs Riya I'm off! Peace!
Armaan:
Erm.. can I go too? I don't know why I'm here..Plus Raina or Naina or actually the TWO of them might just be waiting for me!
Mrs Riya:
Hold it the two of y'll!! All 5 of you guys were involved in that argument that was going on so ALL 5 of y'll will be going for detention!
All 5 of them at the same time
: 😲 DETENTION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Mrs Riya:
Yea today evening! At 5 pm sharp! No questions asked. Not there and you'll all face severe consequences!
Bharti:
Detention?? As in the one where you have horrifying experiences??!! But ..but.. the word detention doesn't even exist in my vocabulary!! No..No I can't go for it!! This is the first time..!! Oh my god!!
Armaan:
Oh man!!! Not today please! I might just have to TWO HOT dates tonight. They'll be stood up for the date by me!! I can't let that happen again!! Tomorrow can? Wait a minute why am I even negotiating? I'm not at fault here!!
Payal:
Ok Mrs Riya I'll go for it! I'll face my punishment with full courage and dignity!
Bhaskar:
I just had one yesterday and you're asking me to go for another one today?? Again?? Oh well, who cares? No big deal. I'll be there. Kinda like my 2nd home.
Mrs Riya:
Have you all finish saying what you want to say? Or Sunny do you want to add on your plight too?
Sunny:
No Mrs Riya. I'll be there. But just one teeny question. Any special dress code for the detention? Because you know I've got a Rep (short form for reputation) to protect..(Starts checking out his hair in his mini mirror)
Mrs Riya:
Hahah Sunny you're joking right. The 5 of y'll sharp at 5 pm at the auditorium!
Bharti opens her mouth to speak but before she could say anything Mrs Riya said.
Mrs Riya:
Ah ah..nada.. Case closed. Full stop! Bye! (And she walks away from there)
Armaan quickly takes out his phone and starts dialing numbers to make changes for his dates while Bhaskar just walked away as though nothing had just happened. Bharti, Payal and Sunny are left standing there..
Payal looks at Bharti who's still in a shocked state.
Payal:
Come on Bharti! It's something different! We've never been to detention! This is like a cool way to end of our examinations! It'll be fun!
Sunny:
Come on girls! We've got a closet to attack! I'm thinking Orangy red as my pants What you guys think?? Help me out na..! Bhaskar will be there! It'll be like an unofficial first date kinda thing between us!......
Bharti stares at Sunny and turns to Payal saying..
Bharti:
Payal, this isn't fun!! It's DE-TEN-TION! Get it??! Oh god! I think my world is coming to an end! I can sense it!! I'm gonna be tortured in there! I've..I've never gotten into such troubles!!
Sunny: Oh shut up babes! Come on Payal lets go..................SHOPPING!!!!!!!!!!
Payal grabs Bharti saying
: Don't worry! It'll be oh-kay! You've got Sunny and me with you!
Bharti turns to Payal and says:
Gosh I thought my throwing skills were good!
Payal:
Well apparently Bharti..It's NOT!.. Woman because of you my butt is still aching!
They burst out into laughters and the trio walked away from there..
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Date: 7th July 2000
Time: 5pm SHARP
Venue: Auditorium
Occasion: DETENTION with MR Lalooo Sam
(Alright guys we'll have a quick overview of this MR Lalooo Sam. Lets bring out his BIODATA!! 😆 😆)
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Name : Lalooo

Full Name: Lalooo Sam

Age : Mid 40s

Attire: Always clad in checkered shirts tucked in..Pants very high up till the waist and always has on his suspenders. Circular shaped glasses.

Profession : A teacher at West-End Junior college. Always handles the students that comes in for detention and has hence gone ,wacko, because of the problem they give him..He's become abit weird from all his experiences..

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Bhaskar and Armaan arrive at the same time and enters the Auditorium.
MR Lalooo Sam:
Oye welcome shelcome ji to DETENTION!!
(He starts playing this song :
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GQ8slKFg_CA and dances the EXACT same way as how Saif dance in this song during the chorus part! 😆 😆)
MR Lalooo Sam sings to both Bhaskar and Armaan :
Ek din ek pal ek janiya
aaj hain kal phir udd jainiya.. Udd janiya..Udd janiya..udd janiya.. Aa mil jaa phir gale, haste haste..
(He pulls Armaan's and Bhaskar's cheeks..) SALAAM NAMASTE!!! 😃
Bhaskar just walks away annoyed and sits down while Armaan smiled and applauded..telling MR Lalooo Sam ..
Armaan : Erm Mr Lalooo very nice dance I must say! Loved it! Thanks for the warm welcome but I think you need to work on that leg movement..
MR Lalooo Sam: Oh you sure?? Which one? Should I do the Twist or the Cha Cha instead? (He starts twisting straight away..)
Armaan couldn't suppress his laughter and he just burst out laughing so hard!
Armaan : Ah Mr Lalooo I think I need to get something from my locker will be right back.. (and he walks away towards the auditorium door.. laughing hard)
Outside the Auditoriom, Bharti , Payal and Sunny had just arrived and are standing outside.
Payal pushes Bharti against the door and tells Bharti "RELAX DEAR!! Your're gonna be fine!"
Sunny : Yea chill darling! You'll make it through!! Hmm I think I should have gotten my nails done! It needs some polishing! Darn it!
Upon hearing this Payal rolls her eyes and Bharti turns towards the auditorium door and slams her head against it. Bharti was about to hit her head on the door once again when suddenly it flunked open! The next thing you know Bharti was feeling something warm but comforting and she could also get the strong Emporio Armani Cologne. (Surprised but Bharti knows her perfumes/cologne well...)
Sunny: OMGEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!
Payal: WOAH!! OH MY Goodness Gracious ME!!! (And then covers her mouth in shock! )
To Be Continued...
(Pls leave your comments!)
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22
Nice part...
Loved Mr.Laloo...
Continue soon...
*Edited*
Well given the name...
Good!!!
Thanx for considering ma suggestion...

Take Care
Zoya

Edited by Zoya_01 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: Zoya_01

Nice part...
Loved Mr.Laloo...
Continue soon...
*Edited*
Well given the name...
Good!!!
Thanx for considering ma suggestion...

Take Care
Zoya

Thank you so much Zoya! Glad you like Mr Lalooo..!😆
No problem abt your suggestion! Me liked it:)
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#24
OMG🤣 they start fighting during exam and love sunny and bhaskar bit.....and love this armaan....he is like bhaskar in BB
contue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25
Well well... so finally ...Ajab BB ki Gazab Vini has found the title of her FF... Congrats bud..👏
well hilarious epi... Payal truly is playing the dumb blonde in ur FF...yet with a heart of gold.. i really luvd how she tried to own up to her mistake... *kudos girl* 👍🏼
n hai... Sunny wit his manicured Nails.. all fida on Bhaskars Bronzed look.... (do i hear SURs...heart break...?)😉
and of all..my Janus..such a hottie..busy shuffling dates... this is the first FF..where Armus the Ladies-MAN...n i m luvvvngggg it..❤️
and ooopppss...the most imp part of the epi..."Bharti fell on ......." i m sure...its my janu.. Armu..with his Armani Perfume..gosh already in drool..state...dreaming of an ArBi ..touch n fall 😍😍😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: ghazal_naz

OMG🤣 they start fighting during exam and love sunny and bhaskar bit.....and love this armaan....he is like bhaskar in BB

contue soon

Aww thank you for liking the exam scene!! I thought i went to draggy...😆
But am glad you like it!! and yea Armu is kinda like Bhaskar but he's definitely nicer..😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
Hii vini🤗
wow u started ff........Great👏
i just loved everything about ur ff.......character sketch,
whole campus atmosphere, storyline,dialogues....
it's different form others and kudos for that👍🏼
very much enjoyed the funny moments🤣
choice of title is superb
i'm so happy that u come up with something like this🤗
continue soon😛

PS: Sorry for the late reply yaara😳.....totally busy with my studies



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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Well well... so finally ...Ajab BB ki Gazab Vini has found the title of her FF... Congrats bud..👏

well hilarious epi... Payal truly is playing the dumb blonde in ur FF...yet with a heart of gold.. i really luvd how she tried to own up to her mistake... *kudos girl* 👍🏼
n hai... Sunny wit his manicured Nails.. all fida on Bhaskars Bronzed look.... (do i hear SURs...heart break...?)😉
and of all..my Janus..such a hottie..busy shuffling dates... this is the first FF..where Armus the Ladies-MAN...n i m luvvvngggg it..❤️
and ooopppss...the most imp part of the epi..."Bharti fell on ......." i m sure...its my janu.. Armu..with his Armani Perfume..gosh already in drool..state...dreaming of an ArBi ..touch n fall 😍😍😍

Dear i loved your titles too..!! but it was kinda deep for my FF..😆 I don't know actually yaar..I really suck at choosing anyways....😆
You know abt Payal am trying hard not to make her dumb..but it just happens. Hoping to not make her as dumb as Paris though...😆 I know man that Sunny bit will surely make Sur blush..! Yea me too loving this Hot side of armaan not like the innocent one in BB..and as for the fall wellllllllll even i am excited!!..Am trying to make it as dreamy as possible..! 😆
Thanks Tanu so much for you lovely and long comments!!! 😊......🤗
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: nehanne

Hii vini🤗
wow u started ff........Great👏
i just loved everything about ur ff.......character sketch,
whole campus atmosphere, storyline,dialogues....
it's different form others and kudos for that👍🏼
very much enjoyed the funny moments🤣
choice of title is superb
i'm so happy that u come up with something like this🤗
continue soon😛

PS: Sorry for the late reply yaara😳.....totally busy with my studies



Hey Neha!! :)
No worries at all!! Studies comes first..Read it whenever you're free but am very happy that you managed to read it though!!
Thank you so much for liking the FF..Glad you like the diff story line..:) Really comforting to read such compliments!! AND some huggies back..🤗................
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Hey Vini ..
Its Awesum yaar ....😃
just luved it ...

This is 4 u ...
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