~ Ajab Prem Ki Ghazab Kahani FF ~ Updt pt 9 Pg20

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

Well me have been thinking of writing a FF for so long! But never posted it.. Tanu has been bugging me to post it..😆

So thank you Tanu dear for encouraging me like crazyy!! 🤗

FINALLY i present to you Vini's FF! 😃

~Character Sketch~

Bharti - She is a girl who doesn't care about the way she looks. She has on those thick black-rimmed glasses. An average student, in terms of studies, but she's very hardworking. When it comes to attire she's a fashion disaster!! Always seen in boring outfits (very conservative), ties her hair up in a low pony tail. Only because her interest is solely in studies. Call her studious!

Payal - Bharti's best friend in college. Funny as it seems Payal is totally the opposite of Bharti. She dresses to kill! Very gorgeous, alot of boys in college goes after her. Despite the huge differences, Payal and Bharti are besties. They understand each other very well, have similar interests. Well except for their dress sense that is.. 😆

Sunny - Payal's and Bharti's other good friend. They are like the trio! Seen together everywhere. Sunny (as we all know how he is) is like a girl pal to them. He's cute (Kind of like Mark from Ugly Betty) and our sunny dear has a MAJOR crush on Mr Bhaskar..

Armaan - The famous guy in school. Every other girl in college wants to be his girlfriend,well every girl EXCEPT Bharti. He's good in everything, be it sports or studies. He's handsome, got a killer smile that can make girls go weak on their knees.

Bhaskar - He's the BAD guy at college. Always clad in dark-coloured outfits. He's got the edgy side to him. (Just imagine the Eijaz y'll saw in the Sutta song Video that Noori posted. It's the very same dark look BUT MINUS the long hair and beard.. 😆) Very arrogant and hot tempered but beneath this tough look, he's actually very kind hearted.

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So the story begins with their college years and after a few parts there'll be a leap where we'll reach their adult life. The story will carry on from there.

I'm not sure if this is going to be a FF but it'll start off as parts first. I may just round up this whole thing in a few parts, if not it may drag on to be a FF.

So here's the character sketch. Please tell me what you guys think! 😊

PS: At the moment haven't figured out the title of my FF!....😆

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Part 1 --- Pg 2

Part 2 --- Pg 3

Part 3 --- Pg 6

Part 4 --- Pg 8

Part 5 --- Pg 11

Part6 --- Pg 11

Part 7 --- Pg 15

Part 8 --- Pg 18

Part 9 --- Pg 20

Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago

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Sohana Singh

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Vini 😊

So glad you've started your own FF. I absolutely love your character sketch. They all sound sooo interesting. Love the fact that you have put Sunny in, I just love that guy! Hmmm...I definitely can see why Armaan makes girls go weak in the knees. Continue soon. I'm sure it will be great, what with college life and then the leap...If we all love it, I hope you won't end it too soon😊 Looking foward to your intro/next part and all the best for your FF(or whatever you want to call it)😊

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Hasini

@bubblygal1711

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Posted: 15 years ago

hey wow vini dear.... excellent character sketch...
Sunny has crush on Bhaskar... 😆 😆 ...
and Armaan....OH.. the dream boy for all... 😍 😍
lovely dear....do conti soon...cant wait...

Edited by bubblygal1711 - 15 years ago

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Zoya

@-Zoya-

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey there Vini...
Nice character sketch...
Waiting to read furthur...
Continue soon...
Well just by the character sketch..
I can give you a title suggestion...
Hope you dont mind...
How is Ajab Prem Ki Ghazab Kahani???
As ArBi are totally opposite also Payal and Bhaskar so the title suits...
Hope you dont mind me giving a suggestion
Anyways...
Continue soon...

Take Care
Zoya

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tanu

@Armu4eva

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Posted: 15 years ago

Ohh...jaan..u did it...yesssssssssss Vini...luv u luv u ..luv u..for this babes....AWESOME..👏

Btw luvd ur Character sketch.. ha ha...Bharti as the Geek... superb..n Armu as the Hot hunk... wah wah...😍

n girl u made Payal..the hottie...n Bhaskar the naughtie... kewl..😎

dear..can i suggest a name..'Pyar mein Kabhi Kabhi' or "Kyun Hota hai Pyaar"??????

n girl..u gonna make it a full fledged one..i knw u gonna rock jaan..❤️

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Noori Khan

@CrazyNoori

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Posted: 15 years ago

yes sounds fab yaar!!!! do cont soon as 4 name i get bk 2 u xxx

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Immy Khan

@BlessedSexyone

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Posted: 15 years ago

😆 that is for the Bhaskar character, i can so imagin Bhaskar " am so 🤬 high man😆😆😆 at least i don think i should worry on Payal goin with Bhaskar in this FF😳 she toooooooooooo gd for him.

As for other characters👏 look forward to readin soon

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

Thank you all for the lovely comments. Must say it's REALLY encouraging. 😊

But boy, isn't updating FFs a tough work or what?!! 😆

@Zoya: Oh i don't mind at all that you suggested a name! Suggestions are always welcome dear! Thanks for it!😊

@Tanu: Hmm love the names..! Will see which want i'll pick..! Thanks for it!😊

@Immy: Hmm abt Payal not going with Bhaskar hmm i'm not too sure abt that.. 😆We'll see how it goes..

@Noori: Sure take your time for the names.. Don't have to suggest if you don't want to though.. 😆

@Sohana & Hasini: Thank you both! Kinda got me motivated reading those comments! ...........😆

Anways I'll write the first part soon..:)

Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago

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ghazal naz

@ghazal_naz

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Posted: 15 years ago

🤗🤗welcome dear in FFs🤗🤗 and feb startt dear.....i am sure you are going to rock

love it

contiue soon

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Part one..

Date : 7^th July 2000 (10 yrs ago, we're back to college days)

Venue: West-End Junior College, Classroom (seriously I suck at coming up with names. This is just a random name that I created)

Currently going on: Common Test for the final yr students

Invigilator: Students you've got 15 mins more to the start of your Economics Paper. Find your seats and remain quiet while we wait for the clock to strike 8 am sharp.

(During the 15 mins)

Bharti's mind: Mariginal cost= Marginal Revenue when MC is rising..Erm nada scrap that..It's not MC but AC.. Oh no I think it's MC. Oh squids! (She doesn't say shit..It's too vulgar a word for her...😆) How can I forget it now!! Ok Relax Bharti.. Yea that's the way breathe in and out..Yes it's JUST a paper.. Ha! No big deal right??...........

Payal's mind : Pencil?..........CHECK!

Pen that too blue in colour?...............CHECK!

Myself?........................ Duh CHECK!... Man I just love doing this!😆

Oh crap!! Correction fluid!! Where is it??!! Oh man I need it''!!

Armaan's mind: YAY!! It's the last paper!! Gonna have fun tonight! On a date with Raina..no wait was it Naina?? 🤔 Gosh why do their names all HAVE to rhyme??? 😕

Sunny's mind: Like OMGEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! Bhaskar is sitting right in front of me!!! Never in my wildest dreams could I ever EVER dream of a better seating arrangement!! Bhaskar in front of me and suddenly the world seems so beautiful! Oh my gawd!! HOTT!! Hmm nvr quite notice his hair from the back..Oooh loves the way it curls up'Haii I swear I could just stare at him throughout the WHOLE paper!!............😍

Bhaskar's mind: Right..Like what's the freaking point of having this paper for 2hrs and 10 mins?? This 10 mins like it makes a big deal?? Damn this Crappy examinations..!! I better be off working on by body or scaring people!! To hell with these examinations!😡

(15 mins later)

Invigilator: Ok students you've got 2hrs and 10 mins to complete your Economics Paper. The time is 8 am sharp now, you may begin. All the best!

Bharti's mind: Yeh Bagawan'(starts her prayers before turning the page)

(2hrs into the paper Bharti is busy doing the paper and Armaan as well. Bhaskar is trying to break his pencil into two! 😆 While Sunny is staring at Bhaskar, with great interest, doing that.. Everyone else seems fine except for Payal who seems to be in a panick mode.)

Payal whispering: Pisst'pisssst'.PISSSSSSSSSSTT BHARTII!!! I need your correction fluid!! Made a mistake.. need to correct it..

(Now you may think "Why can't Payal just cancel her answers??" But you see Payal is a clean freak. She can't stand seeing her paper messed up with scribbles. Hence she needs the correction fluid desperately to amend the mistake she made. Plus she knows that Sunny doesn't carry one. So the only person to ask is Bharti.)

Before we hear Bharti's reply to Payal's request Lets take a look at the seating plan..😆

Bharti

Sunny

Payal

Classmate

Bhaskar

Armaan

Bharti looks up and hands signals to Payal "What?!" Eventually after what seem like hours for Payal, Bharti knew what Payal wanted. She took out her correction fluid and thinks to herself " Alright woman this is the time to make full use of your throwing skills!" 😉

Commentator (which is me enacting the whole scene. Think of it as a match where the striker is about to hit a goal..)

Ahem! Commentator : So on the left side we've got Bharti with a correction fluid in one hand all fired up to throw it to payal..Payal on the right side all full on focus on Bharti's hands ever ready to catch the correction fluid .. Bharti lifts her fingers up and throws the fluid. It flies in the air in slow motion.. Payal's eyes are moving in sync with the correction fluid. She gets up from her seat, with her fingers in the air and slides to the left to catch it. It's coming towards her at the speed of approximately 1.5m/s.. Sunny is just seated there with his mouth wide open and following the movement of the correction fluid. It's Nearing and nearing..Payal smiling to herself saying "Yes baby come to mama! .."

ANDDDDDDDDDDDD........BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOM!

Payal is on the floor and simulataneously Bhaskar screams : "OUCHHH!! 😡 What the 🤬''..!!!!!

To be continued.....

(Do comment and tell me what you guys think! )

Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago