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surveen

@surveen_kapoor

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

WELL DONE JAANU 👍🏼 And nooooo.. it was NOT AT ALL looong.. it was PERFECT MIDDLE😃 not too long n also not toooo short.. how i LOVED the way u describe the scenes 😆😆 specially the way characters ARE!!!

the way poor bhaarti dosent want to see DETENTION face😲😲 poor girl😆😆😆...

the way flirty armaan cnt found out kiske saath date hai😆😆😆

the way bhaskar says i had one yesturday ab phir se? oh doesent matter its my sec. home😆

the way bechaara pyaar ka pyaasa Sunny is

teh way our cute peppy paayal IS BEING ALL RESPONSIBLE🤣🤣just like mother TERRESA🤣🤣

OMG!!!!!!!!!1 GR8888888888888888888888888 PARTT⭐️

but mann WHAT LUCKY HTEY R... they hav got LALLU ram😆😆😉 so no probs of detetions😆😆😆

WELLLL DONE 👏 lalluraam is extremellyyy fun😆😉

IAM of u my partner😛 how desperatelyy im waiting to "work" along with u😉

Iam already despo waiting fro part 3🤣😉😛

oh mannn laughters im having its simply gr8 dear.. lvoelyyyyy 🤗

Urz

Suruu🤗

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413789

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

amazingggggggggggggggggggggggggg & long part u took how much time??????????????btw lovedddddddddddddddddddddd it

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Noori Khan

@CrazyNoori

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

hahahaha too gud dude too gud xxxx

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Hasini

@bubblygal1711

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+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Sorry for the late reply dear.....😊😊
just now read.... i was excellent superb mind-blowing....
👏👏👏
Loved Armaan's attitude....worried about his dates.....🤣🤣🤣
And Mr.Sunny....going for shopping for detention......🤣🤣🤣🤣
Bhaskar is always getting detention....very bad guy huh??.....😆😆
Bharti was CUTE...worried about getting detention.....🤣
Payal also was sweet.....
Mr.Laloo....gosh... professor dancing?????????......🤣🤣 very funny to think.....
excellent girl.....full youth entertainment....
Keep rocking girl....waiting for the next part.....👏👏

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Dew-drop
Hey Vini ..
Its Awesum yaar ....😃
just luved it ...

This is 4 u ...
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Aww Thank you so much shabz!! So sweet of you..!🤗

Am glad that you luved it..!:)

Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago

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N.H.Talagala

@naley4ever

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#36

OMG Vini This is super super funny Brilliant work Girl Loved Loved
it soooooooooo much 👏👏👏 i need to give u a standing ovation
👏👏 Wow you are super duper Write girl🤗
Love the Sunny Bhaskar Moment 🤣🤣🤣🤣
& this Part : (Armaan Grins showing his perfect white teeth and making the girls in the classroom going "Aaawwww..".all girls EXCEPT Bharti) Wow i will Need CPR right a way Girl HOT HOT HOT ..............☺️

Please Post More Girl Love it 😊
Naley

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: surveen_kapoor
WELL DONE JAANU 👍🏼 And nooooo.. it was NOT AT ALL looong.. it was PERFECT MIDDLE😃 not too long n also not toooo short.. how i LOVED the way u describe the scenes 😆😆 specially the way characters ARE!!!
the way poor bhaarti dosent want to see DETENTION face😲😲 poor girl😆😆😆...

the way flirty armaan cnt found out kiske saath date hai😆😆😆

the way bhaskar says i had one yesturday ab phir se? oh doesent matter its my sec. home😆

the way bechaara pyaar ka pyaasa Sunny is

teh way our cute peppy paayal IS BEING ALL RESPONSIBLE🤣🤣just like mother TERRESA🤣🤣

OMG!!!!!!!!!1 GR8888888888888888888888888 PARTT⭐️

but mann WHAT LUCKY HTEY R... they hav got LALLU ram😆😆😉 so no probs of detetions😆😆😆

WELLLL DONE 👏 lalluraam is extremellyyy fun😆😉

IAM of u my partner😛 how desperatelyy im waiting to "work" along with u😉

Iam already despo waiting fro part 3🤣😉😛

oh mannn laughters im having its simply gr8 dear.. lvoelyyyyy 🤗

Urz

Suruu🤗

Oh Sur ajaa my fellow Sunny lover!!🤗..! Thank you SO MUCH dear for you long and lovely comments!! So very sweet of you!! Glad you didn't find it long!...😆 I thought ppl would get bored while reading it..! Hahah and yes Bhaskar is like the cool dude and Payal is so very innocent here! Bharti is too good a child and Armu totally the flirt!.. It feels good to hear that you like the scene description!! Gets me motivated all the more!............😆

Lol hahah arrey it's Laloo sam..not lallu ram..😆 You know i was so close to putting it as lallu ram but then don't wanna offend any PKB fans..!😆 So i made it Lalooo Sam..but he sure is one kuckoo!

Work with you !! Totally surr we'll do it soon ok.. Picture abhi baaki hai mere dost 😉..............😆 😆

Will be updating part 3 soon! Thanks dear again! and Keep reading!:)

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: sukirtiprincess
amazingggggggggggggggggggggggggg & long part u took how much time??????????????btw lovedddddddddddddddddddddd it

Thanks Hina! Happy that you like it!

Erm i took abt 4 hrs plus..! 😆 Tough stuff coming up with lines..! No I understand how the others felt when they had to update their FF..! 😆

But it's ALWAYS fun doing it!:)

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: BlessedCuteOne
hahahaha too gud dude too gud xxxx

Thanks Noori! Glad you like it!:)

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: bubblygal1711
Sorry for the late reply dear.....😊😊
just now read.... i was excellent superb mind-blowing....
👏👏👏
Loved Armaan's attitude....worried about his dates.....🤣🤣🤣
And Mr.Sunny....going for shopping for detention......🤣🤣🤣🤣
Bhaskar is always getting detention....very bad guy huh??.....😆😆
Bharti was CUTE...worried about getting detention.....🤣
Payal also was sweet.....
Mr.Laloo....gosh... professor dancing?????????......🤣🤣 very funny to think.....
excellent girl.....full youth entertainment....
Keep rocking girl....waiting for the next part.....👏👏

Oh no worries Hasini! Take your time to read it!:)

Thanks for reading it though and also loving it! Am very happy to read such comments..Like i've said reading them gets me motivated!..😃

Hahah even i too felt Sunny was so funny as to go for shopping for detention. AmTrying to make him as girly as possible..! But in a cute way..😆

Abt the professor dancing!!..You know i was laughing while writing it...! I've always found the way Saif dance very funny..esp in the "Salaam Namaste" sg his dance moves in the chorus part is hilarious....! What i feel..! Thank god you found it funny too cos i was afraid i would be the only one who finds that dancing bit funny..!😆

Full youth entertainment? Aww thank you! 😊 Keep reading yea! :)

Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago