~ Ajab Prem Ki Ghazab Kahani FF ~ Updt pt 9 Pg20 - Page 5

Originally posted by: naley4ever

OMG Vini This is super super funny Brilliant work Girl Loved Loved
it soooooooooo much 👏👏👏 i need to give u a standing ovation
👏👏 Wow you are super duper Write girl🤗
Love the Sunny Bhaskar Moment 🤣🤣🤣🤣
& this Part : (Armaan Grins showing his perfect white teeth and making the girls in the classroom going "Aaawwww..".all girls EXCEPT Bharti) Wow i will Need CPR right a way Girl HOT HOT HOT ..............☺️

Please Post More Girl Love it 😊
Naley

Vini,
Congo for starting a new FF👍🏼
I am back after attending the wedding. I will read your FF and then comment.
BTW I am glad that you are using siggies :)

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Vini, your FF is so funny😆
every part and every dialogue😆
its really a "Ajab Kahani"😆
Prem ki hai yah nahi abhi pata nahi😆
BTW loved to see the different Armaan but it is hard to imagine him like that😆
loving Sunny- Bhaskar part😆
Continue soon😊

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Vini,
Congo for starting a new FF👍🏼
I am back after attending the wedding. I will read your FF and then comment.
BTW I am glad that you are using siggies :)

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

🤣

Vini, your FF is so funny😆
every part and every dialogue😆
its really a "Ajab Kahani"😆
Prem ki hai yah nahi abhi pata nahi😆
BTW loved to see the different Armaan but it is hard to imagine him like that😆
loving Sunny- Bhaskar part😆
Continue soon😊

[Recap:

Payal: WOAH!! OH MY Goodness Gracious ME!!! (And then covers her mouth in shock! ) ]

Now lets rewind back to a few minutes ago and see what actually happened..

Time: 5.17 pm

Venue: Inside and directly outside the Auditorium door

Occasion: Armaan going to locker and Bharti banging her head against the door

Armaan's hands were on the doorknob and Bharti's head moved forward to bang that very same door.

Armaan swing opens the door and Bharti falls head first into Armaan's chest. Armaan totally didn't expect this and he looses his balance..They are both falling down in slow motion..

Armaan screaming: "Woaaahhhh...!!!" and

Bharti screaming: "Ahhhhhhh..!!!." ..........

ANDDDDDD*THUMP* they both fall hard onto the auditorium seats that were directly behind them.

Both of them are stuck and Bharti is on top of Armaan.

Bharti in her dreamland. (You see she thinks that she is unconsicious from the hard fall..😆)

Armaan:

Ow!! Ow!!! Erm Help!! I'm stuck on this chair!! Ah Bharti care to give me a hand by erm let me see..🤔 First trying to get OFF ME!!...

Hearing this Bharti's Dream Bubble bursts and she comes back to her senses.She jerks up and to her horror she sees Armaan looking back at her with his eyebrows crooked up, giving a question marked look.

30 seconds of silence..For a moment they were both lost in each others eyes..Armaan forgot the question that he had asked Bharti and was staring immensely at Bharti..Then SNAP!..Bharti snaps out of it and starts screaming and well shouting too..😆

Bharti (scrambling eventually falling back down onto Armaan) saying :

Eeewwww!!! Eeewwww!!! Armaan how sick of you!! Get off me!!! What are you doing? Wow taking advantage on me? ...Jeez you're sick!! Payal and Sunny give me a hand quick!!

Armaan:

Hey! Hey! Hey! You're the one on top of me so logically you're supposed to get of me..! And what taking advantage? Man please! I ain't got a need to do that!! It comes naturally..Ladies willingly come to me..! I'm not that disgusting to stoop so low too..Wait why am I even saying that?.. Ok the main thing is that you fell ON ME and so YOU NEED TO GET OFF ME!!..Like NOW!!

Bharti went all red.She didn't realised that she was on top of Armaan. She immediately tried to pull herself up but she was having difficulty.The reason being they were both stuck diagonally on the auditorium chairs.. Bharti continued struggling..

Payal: Yes!! So sweet!! Like two little love bir..

Bharti:

Sunny get your butt down here and help me out! Now! If not i swear i would cut your hair, till nothing is left, while you're sleeping..!! And Payal what sweet??! This is not sweet!! Give me a hand!!!

Sunny hearing this screams and quickly scrambled down beside Bharti to help pull her up whereas Payal was just standing there and laughing..! Seeing how obedient Sunny had become within a few minutes..Well his looks were at stake if he didn't help Bharti..So yea he thought he was doing the absolute right thing at that moment..! 😆

With the help of Sunny, Bharti finally managed to get up..

Armaan :

Yea thats it! Thats it!! Phew!! Finally Azad!! Hehe.. Gosh Bharti you're heavy you know.. Ha ha ha just kidding..but you know actually you were just a lil' bit..(he stops cos Bharti was staring at him..)

Sunny and Payal left from there to see MR Lalooo Sam while Armaan got off the chair..

Bharti :

Look Armaan, whatever that just happened i'm so sorry. I didn't mean to fall on you. I was just leaning against the door when you suddenly just opened it.So you know technically i would have fallen on you.. It's not what you thing..I mean that fall was nothing..I swear i didn't do it on purpose..you know like the other ladies you were talking about..Really I..

Armaan (cuts Bharti):

Hey! Hey! Stop! Hahah you're talking like as though something bad had just happened..! It was just a fall! No issues! I'm alright and i'm sure you too.. So yea no problem..Unless you wanna fall down again..Hahaha ok now am sorry..Didn't mean that..

Bharti:

No but you see..I don't want you to get the wrong impression..You know that i did it on purpose or something. If there's anything i can do..Just tell!

Armaan:

Gosh man Bharti! Come on I already told you No iss...Ok nevermind you know what Bharti..I think i know what you can do to make it up to me..!!

Bharti (open eyes wide, eagerly wanting to know) :

What?! Tell me!

Armaan :

Well you can be my Girlfriend for a day! How's that?! We'll hang out together..You know like hold hands and walk around, be all cuddly and loving..and well if you want to make out..Am okay with that that..Totally A okay!

Bharti ( mouth and eyes wide openes) :

WHAT??!! Are..are.. you se..serious?? I mean that big a punishment? Can i just do your Homework instead? Please..!!

Armaan (burst out laughing and saying) :

Hahahahah My god!! Your reaction was priceless!!! No i was just kidding..!! No you don't need to do anything and case closed!

Bharti :

Wow! You know you really got me! Thank god!

Armaan:

Hey! What's that supposed to mean? Am i that bad that you don't even want to hang out with me..? I mean i realised among all of the girls in school, you're like the only one who has no interest in me at all! Hmm kinda sad.I mean do I like only attract those Dumb kinda girls..? Plus it's weird seeing how handsome i am..I'm good in sports and studies..so what do i lack that you don't even want to hang out with me?:( (Armaan in his thoughts..he didn't realised that he blurted out this much..)

Bharti (rolled her eyes)

: Armaan, fancy praising yourselves do you?.. Well i don't know..I mean you definitely do not lack anything..Just that i have no interest in you. Never thought of you that way..But come on! I'm sure you attract not only dumb girls..There will be some smarty pants BUT beautiful girl out there for you..!

Bharti (points to herself) :

Woh toh mein hoon!:)

They both laughed and for a moment there was another silence. Both were once again lost in each others eyes..Suddenly the "Salaam Namaste" music was playing in the background again..(Lalooo Sam welcoming Sunny and Payal) amd they both snapped out of their thoughts..Acting all awkward, Armaan and Bharti at the same time said..

Armaan:

I...

Bharti :

I...

Armaan : You first..Ahem!! I am well you know a gentlemen..(and he winks with his gorgeous smile flashing at Bharti.. 😉...)

For some reason Bharti blushed and she quickly bent down to hide it..She said

Bharti:

Okay.Erm i better get going..Detention..Lalooo Sam must be waiting..

Bharti :

Right..Okay then see you later..Bye and erm i'm sorry..you know for what happened earlier.

Armaan waves his hands saying :

No problem!! Final!! Stop apologising if not that date will be finalised!!And i mean it with the date..! We will then have to go out!!

Bharti laughed.. Both of them move to the left and then to the right and to the left again..Blocking each other..Finally Armaan raised his hands up and turn sideways and said

Armaan : You first..I'm you know a gentlm..

Before he could continue Bharti said : Well yes a gentlemen! I know..and a very sweet one i must say..

After Bharti left Armaan exited out.

Bharti's mind:

What just happened?!! I said a sweet one? Bharti where did that come from? And he winks and i blushed?? Oh god!! Has to be the Detention fears that is catching up on me..! Me and Armaan? Hahah NO WAYS!! I can't stand him!

Armaan's mind :

Hmm Bharti is something..The fall was..Magical?? She was this close to me and I could see her eyes.Those big brown beautiful eyes. Oh what about that hair. Luscious long, so soft.......Oh man!! Stop these thoughts!! So not me to think of ladies after meeting them just for once..So to the locker..Got to take out my books...should get some chips..am Hungry....

And Armaan walks towards the locker.

To Be Continued...:)

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reserved- will comment properly when i am on my computer. great part though- cute and funny. loved it! *Edited* Hey Vini😛 So sorry that I haven't commented since just after your charcter sketch... Have been reading each part as you've updated and have loved every single part, every single line! Your FF is just so funny...I especially love in part one where you have all the different thoughts going through each person's mind before the exam..it is just so well-written!! 👏 Another thing I love is all this little funny details that you add in...like detailed personality descriptions, the time and venue of when things happen. Love how in part 3 you wrote that first bit and then went back in time about 27 seconds later...it's just so much of fun to read! Wow, loved the whole part of Bharti falling on top of Armaan and they gazes and how "her bubble is burst". That scene is so sweetly written, yet funny. The way it is written, I can actually imagine everyhting happening in slow motion in my mind👏 Look foward to your next parts😛

Wow...vini....what a magical epi.... with the magical ArBi fall.....Am so happy abt that fall...luv u girl..🤗