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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#91

This part was superb and you have written it excellently 👏

every bit of it was awesome ..😛

from the starting till the end --- it was exceptionally engrossing ...

loved reading both the parts ... 'the last dance' was very romantic .. the kiss was a perfect end to the dance 😍

I loved it being lengthy ... no problem about it ...

please continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon ........

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Kaninika Basu

@kaninikabasuray

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#92

Sorry for the late reply, I am back from Shimla after 4 days😊
Still busy, so I will write a short comment😆

🤪

Vini, kash I was "Bharti"😆
loved every bit of it👏
The whole sequence between ArBi were sooooooo "attractive"😳 and finally the kiss😳

All other parts were equally good👏, don't have time to comment in detail😒

Hey watch this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YT2dC46NiI4&feature=related

I am in a mission "making Vini a Aamir fan"😆
BTW you have commented on Aamir fan page, thanks🤗

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harika

@SomerholicGirl

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#93

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii. i am a silent reader of this forum. i was reading this forum from 5 months.i joined this forum only for bhaskar bharti and arbi. i am a big fan of arbi.your ff is wonderful.i have read all the parts till now.loved the characters of armaan,bharti. sunny is really good.valentines day special was awesome.waiting for more parts.write soon

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#94

Woah Jani 😃

U left me all shaken with this mesmerizing update 😳

I just caught up with the 2 latest parts u wrote 😃

Yaar i didnt know u were writing a FF and were writing so beautifully 😃

It felt so good reading it.

Love the bonding between Sunny-Payal and Bharti, its really sweet 😳

Bharti's dress is indeed beautiful, i can imagine her easily 😃

Chiggy wiggy part was awesome 😆 esp the sunny akshay angle 😆😆

Loved the way how u drescribed Bharti and Armaan falling for each other.👏👏👏

And wow they kisseeeeeed 👏

Really awesome parts jani, i loved them. 😳

Do continue soon 😳

Love,

Humera 🤗

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: Dew-drop
wiil b bak to comment ..!

*Edit add*

Wow Vini ..dat waz a fantabulous update ...👏👏
I hav no wrds 4 it .....It waz simply mesmerizing ...
The whole part took me to another world ....It waz beautiful ..
I just luv the way u describe moments..!👍🏼

The chiggy wiggy thing waz mindblowing ..i could just imagine their steps ...If only Gyan would hav also joined in ...!🤣🤣

The last dance waz simply heavenly ..😍😍
loved it to the core ...!
Continue soon dear ...me cant w8 ...!😉

Hey Thanks alot Shabz...🤗

The whole part took you to another world?...😳..Awww so sweet!. Well am happy that it wasn't too draggy...😆 I mean i know this part was dead lonnnnngg..But thanks alot for reading it and loving it!.. I appreciate it very much, every single bit of your comment! :)

As for the "chiggy wiggy" dance....😆 I know! i too was laughing!! Hope you saw how Sanjay Dutt Danced..Very funny!!....

Yea Gyaan shd have joined in too huh..But he's too shy though...

Glad you like the dance..:)

Will be updating soon

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

👏

SUPER DUPER ROCKING FANTASTIC... AWESOME EPIs....❤️

I just just... hv to break the rule n comment on the 2nd epi first... 'Save the last dance..' n oh Gosh.. saved..n how.. by ArBi... wakai mein.. 'Pehli baar mohabbat ki hai...' vini.. luvd it sooooo sooooo much.. cant just express in words.. 😍 the way u described the Eye-locks.. Armu feeling jealos.. Bharti feeling sad.. Armu walking up to Bharti.. n SMARTLY..asking Gyaan for Bharti.. superb..❤️

n what to say abt the DANCE.... hai.. ArBi.. ArBi.. my heart beats for them.. 4eva..!! serene moment..of ArBi.. KISS ...gosh i just died ..🤪

Totally luuuuuuuuuuuvddddddddddd itttttttttt to BITs..n PIECEs.. n luv u girl.. to BITs..n Pieces....................

Now now.. *tanu recovering frm ArBi hysteria..* coming to the first part.. luvd the ArBi..convo.. the way Armu so wanted to go out with Bharti..n Bharti too ...wanting to... but alas.. for that dumb TINA 😡

Really njoyed the Sunny-Payal-Bharti.. friendship .. thing.. n the 'imagine ur Wedding thing' of Sunny-Payal..was super funny 😆😆😆

Vini... luvd the epi...from the BOTTOM of my HEART... 🤗❤️

Psst: Deviating...

Tanu..dancing.. ArBi kissed...ArBi kissed... yahooooooo

🥳

n dear...wishing u a very very HAPPY VALENTINEs..DAY.....❤️

WOW!! You know i always love every of your comments..!

Tanu yaar i felt so good reading your comments!....🤗

Thank you very much for reading it and loving it as well..:)

Well no problems you can start of with the last dance...Even i too like that part..."Pehli Baar Mohabbat"..My fave song..It's ArBi's song...

As for Armu asking Gyaan for a dance with Bharti instead of Armu asking Bharti himself i gotta THANK YOU for choosing that idea over the other. I was in a fixed state and didn't know which one to choose. So thanks dear..

Your choice made that part even more special...😊

Hahah yes Tina is annoying.. Am trying to make her that dumb, annoying girl who care abt their appearence...😆...Even i hate her..

Yea Payal was funny too during the choosing of dresses...I for one was finding it tough to put that imagination thing across in this FF..So am Glad you like that "Imagine your wedding" part...:)

Yay!! Yay! Me too dancing......Cos ArBi danced and kissed...😃...........😆

Thanks alot again! 😊

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: bubblygal1711
OMG.....!!!! my eyes are blur right now....!!!!
Wait let me close my eyes for a moment.....🥱

1....2....3........ Phew....Opened......😆😆

Just finished reading your all three parts at once..........Vini darling........ EXCELLENT....Am speechless.... i feel like...WOWWWWWW.......... 👏👏👏
No words to explain how WONDERFUL it is.....As i read the whole three parts at once.... I feel the Magical relationship of ArBi......😍😍😍😍😍😍

Thank you very much! Means alot your comments..😳

Haye....Armaan....Meni Mar Jawa.....!!!!!!! Mr.Flirt becomes Mr.Romeo..... 😍😍
I am fainting here...please help me.....😆😆
It just reminded of Imran in Jaane tu ya jaane na....... Wonderful dear.....

Arrey girl don't faint! AGAIN...😆

Hahah yes Armu definitely became every girls dream during the Prom Night..!..And he remindered you of Imran?.. Hahah yes he sure is one hottie!

Well well Hasini so i supposed you want to be Genelia then?...😉

Beautiful.....OH MAN... seriously i dont have words for your wonderful creation..........

And KISS........ How many times i have to faint.... OH.... I could just imagine it.... IT WAS MAGICAL.....😍 I am now going.....🤪🤪🤪 Seriously i am not in this world......

Seriously Hasini am laughing reading this bit! You're so funny!...😆

Oh vini dear.... this is the best Valentine GIFT.....BEST EVER TREAT FOR ARBI FANS....LOVE U LOVE U SOOOOOOOOOO MUCHHHHHHH FOR THIS.......

Aaaww best eva gift for V day?..So sweet! Thanks alot girl and yes yes me too love you..! Love your VMs as well!..

Bharti was gorgeous.........Beautiful OUR SHONA....

Yes she was..Me too love that Dress..Wished it was mine....😍.....😆...

And Mr.Romeo Armaan..... No words to explain about him.... oh man.... Love him always......

Yes he was HOT!😳

Payal was cute... And PayKar was Very cute and sweet..... Hope they also bring beautiful romantic moments.... But not So romantic as OUR ARBI.....😳😳😳
Sunny was really Funny.... Poor guy.... looking for bhaskar....

Poor sunny too..I too feel bad for him..Lost in love...😆 😆

And Mr.Laloo... Want to become an actor ah.... ha ha ha was really funny when he ask sunny to teach him....POOR SUNNY....🤣

Lalooo Sam is a kuckoo...😆 😆 Glad you found it funny..:)

Tina... was bugging sweet heart Armaan.... Poor Armaan... was waiting to dance with bharti... and He finally got his chance... a dance + Kiss....😍 Haye Haye......Lovely.....

Me too so happy that ArBi danced and kissed!!....(x 100)......:)

And Bharti,Payal,Sunny trio was Very very sweet.......

Hey vini sweety..... there are lots and lots to say about your wonderful FF....No words seriously.......⭐️...

THANKS ALOT! 😊

dont worry if it is tooo long.... it is really a pleasure to read each and every moment......was excellent... i could clearly imagine it.... so conti soon.... cant wait to read more on our ArBi Magical wonderful beautiful romance......😳😳

And Once again Happy Valentines day to all........!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃😃😃

Oh dear Hasini i'm overwhelmed by your comment!!😊 Every single bit of it!!

I think am fainiting now too!!.....😆

Gosh THANK YOU sooooooooooooooooo MUCH for all those kind words in there..!! I too am speechless..Don't know what to reply back to ya..😳

So so very nice of you to say those things..Am glad that you love those last three parts.

And phew! It wasn't long for you?.. Thank god!!

I thought people would get bored while reading it...😆 ....

BUT really thanks ALOT for reading it and loving it this much that you faint so many times!...😆

Love you!...🤗

PS: I love the way you started off with your comment..Too cute man..! You had to close eyes..?...And those emoticons you used..?...I was laughing girl and am VERY HAPPY just reading everything you wrote!:)

Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: ghazal_naz
finally read it all....was very long but very intresting

first thing first 👏 this is for writing soooo long

and such an intresting one

i love bharti's dress....i can imagen it

and i love the littal funny bits of sunny😆😆😆

and the dance that teacher mr loola did was awful😆 i was wondring that he might be still runing in any courner of this world😆 but i guess he finally stoped

and ciggywiggy seques was feb too but i liked the second dance more besause of thoses arbi eye contect 😳

i loved each and every part of it👏

fantastic

keep this feb work up👏

Thanks alot Ghazal!...🤗

I too love Bharti's dress..Wished i had one like that....😳......😆 She sure was looking beautiful that night...:)

Yea sunny and Lalooo are like the humor in this FF...😆 You know i actually wanted to make Lalooo carry on running but come on now Lalooo can't miss out a chance to chiggy wiggy now can he?...😆

Glad you like that Chiggy wiggy sequence...!! I was laughing so much just watching the video...and to think Lalooo dancing like Sanjay dutt...😆 😆...

Me too like the "Kahin Hoga" Dance..So very romantic..Just that ArBi weren't dancing with each other but i guess the eye contacts were good enough to make it so romantic..:)

Thanks again for liking it dear..:)

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: sukirtiprincess
superbb omg longg posttt
:)

Hahah sorry Hina..

I was very into writing that i didn't realise the length...But you're right it's a super lonnnngggg post...😆

Glad you like it! :)

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: naley4ever
WOOOOOOOOOW vini thank u sooooooooo much 🤗 for the long extremely beautiful mind blowing super girl post just took my heart away superb girl
👏
girl i LOVE the Dress it was magically BEAUTIFUL green goes well with bharti WOW love it 😳 soooooooooooooooo pretty !!!!!!
I hv to mention this chiggywiggy with you boy dance was sooo funny suuny & Mr.Loloo sam O man 🤣🤣🤣 armaan finally escape WOOOOOW SOOOO cool girl !!
Armaan always take my breath a way in ur FF damn sexy ☺️
THE LAST DANCE
me got goose bumps on my goose bumps!!!!! WOW THE KISS was Heaven ☺️ nice work Cupid Vini !!! LOVED IT waiting for the next part continue soooon !!!
Two full moons are ok dont make it three 😆 just make it 1 girl cant wait sooooo long after u making us addicted now !!!!!
❤️ VERY HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY TO U TO GIRL❤️
hv fabulous weekend hv fun enjoy !!!
take care
naley

Oh Naley..!!..🤗..

Thank YOU so much for reading it and loving it!!..:) I appreciate it very much!..😃 And thanks for your kind words..

Me too like that Dress of Bharti...!!So beautiful and yes i love the colour green and i guess it does go well with BHarti!!..and hahah good that you like the "Chiggy Wiggy" sequence..I thought i would be the only one to find it funny..Girl i was laughing so much by just watching the video and when i was writing that part of sunny and Laloo dancing...😆 😆 The more i kept on laughing...😆

Wow the kiss gave you goosebumps?.. So true man every intimate moments of ArBi in all of the other FFs as well gives me goosebumps...Glad mine gave you the effect too..😉.....:)

Cupid Vini?..😆 Yes so very apt for V Day..!

Will be updating my FF soon:)

Thanks again for loving it dear! 😊