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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Zoya_01
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Sure Zoya..

Take your time to read...I know it's very long...😆

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: ghazal_naz
finally i read the second part too
and its aaaawwwwwsssoooommmeeee👏

loved it yaar

you made my day

you discribe thier kiss very beutifuly

loved it 👏👏👏

outstanding

and happy valentins day

Thank you so much Ghazal for coming back to read the Second part!...:)

Glad you like it!..Makes me very happy!..

Phew! So the kiss was described beautiful? Thank god..!! .......😆

I was finding it tough to put it through.....

BTW Great V day picture..Me like it..:)

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: *Sohana*Singh*

Wow wow wow!!!!! What an amazing part! 👏I loved every single part of it, from all the funny parts in detention😆 to the the prom moments😳...wow! The dress shopping with Sunny, Payal and Bharti was really sweet, their friendship is adorable.

So glad that he left Tina halfway and I loved the whole moment of Armaan dancing with Tina and Bharti with Gyan, but ArBi were looking at each other. 👍🏼And that KISS🤪.....I'm in ArBi heaven.😍 I actually had tha strange butterflies feeling in my stomach while reading that whole dance part and that kiss scene is by far the best kiss scene that I've read. 👏They both were somehow denying their feelings for each other, but finally had to succumb to it and I loved that.. 😳I do hope this leads somewhere (beautiful and romantic❤️) for ArBi😍.

Loved the long long posts, awww but I do hope you don't wait toooo long to update, I've already fallen in love with your FF and now this part just makes me want more. 😊Can't wait for your next parts...what a fantastic part to read for the valentines weekend....😃

❤️❤️❤️Happy Valentines/Friendship Day Vini and all to all my other IF friends!🤗

Thank you so much Sohana for you very kind words!

I enjoyed reading every sngle bit of it!..Appreciate it very much! 😊

Glad you like all the different moments in the FF...I too love that Shopping scene..Sunny being so dramatic and Payal too having found "the perfect wedding dress"..😆 I love their friendship very much too!..

WOW strange butterflies feeling in your stomach?..I'm happy you got that effect from reading what i wrote..( i too get that feeling when i read all those intimate ArBi moments in your FF...:) I was finding it quite tough to describe the kiss scene....Didn't want to make it too over and desperate or anything........

Oh so very sweet of you..! It was by far the best kiss scene you've read??..

Thank you SO MUCH!..🤗

I actually love to play with their thoughts thing..I like writng what they feel inside.. Very happy that you like that bit where they first denied and then eventually kissed each other..:)

Will be updating soon!..It feels good to know that you're liking my FF..😛

And Sohana ME TOO love love love your FF like crazy!..😉

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Immy Khan

@BlessedSexyone

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Posted: 15 years ago

#104

loved it , loved it and LOVED IT😳

i was daydreamin at the kiss scene, was so imaginin me and Aanchal😳 em i mean my wife😆

cant wait for next part

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: BUBLAI
This part was superb and you have written it excellently 👏
every bit of it was awesome ..😛

from the starting till the end --- it was exceptionally engrossing ...

loved reading both the parts ... 'the last dance' was very romantic .. the kiss was a perfect end to the dance 😍

I loved it being lengthy ... no problem about it ...

please continue sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon ........

Thank you SO MUCH Arpita!..😊

WOw it was exceptionally engrossing..?..😳 Feels very good to hear this!..I'm happy that you loved those two parts..

Yes the last dance was romantic..wished i was dancing with Armu....😍.........BUT off course he belongs solely with Bharti..:)

Good to know you found the length okay..:)...

I was afraid that the length would bore all of you guys..😆 I just get very into writing sometimes that i don't realise that it becomes so long..But it woudn't be this long everytime..i hope so...😆

Will be updating soon! :)

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray
Sorry for the late reply, I am back from Shimla after 4 days😊
Still busy, so I will write a short comment😆

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Vini, kash I was "Bharti"😆
loved every bit of it👏
The whole sequence between ArBi were sooooooo "attractive"😳 and finally the kiss😳

All other parts were equally good👏, don't have time to comment in detail😒

Hey watch this:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YT2dC46NiI4&feature=related

I am in a mission "making Vini a Aamir fan"😆
BTW you have commented on Aamir fan page, thanks🤗

Hahah no worries Kanu for the short comment! :)

I'm happy that you managed to read it still despite you being very busy..😊

Thanks for reading it and it feels good to know that you love it...🤗

You want to be Bharti..?.. Hmmm i wonder why...?...🤔........😆 Well well Armu is one Hottie so i think me too want to be Bharti........😆..

Hey Kanu you mission seems to be working!..😆

I watched the video and Aamir looks waaay to cute..The way he blocked Kakoon's way....then hold her hands and then HUG.....😍..............☺️..............😆 Haii..cute cute...Me like :) Thanks for this video!..Any more videos kya?😳........I dun mind seeing somemore...😆

PS: Hey he's using contact lens in this video!! ..

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: BlessedSexyone
loved it , loved it and LOVED IT😳

i was daydreamin at the kiss scene, was so imaginin me and Aanchal😳 em i mean my wife😆

cant wait for next part

Hahaha..!!

Hey Immy thanks for reading it yea..and off course for your comments..:) Always makes me laugh!...😆..

Glad you loved it, loved it and LOVED IT!.....😆

I think it shd be safe to imagine you with Payal in that kiss scene....No worries me won't reveal to anybody at all...Shhhhh!!......😆 Go ahead..carry on daydreaming...😉

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: haaki.b
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii. i am a silent reader of this forum. i was reading this forum from 5 months.i joined this forum only for bhaskar bharti and arbi. i am a big fan of arbi.your ff is wonderful.i have read all the parts till now.loved the characters of armaan,bharti. sunny is really good.valentines day special was awesome.waiting for more parts.write soon

Hello Haaki!

Welcome to the forum and am THANK YOU for reading my FF..Means alot! :)

Glad you like the characters..Even me too like them..esp sunny and Lalooo..😆

Thanks for liking the V Day special..:)

And yes will be updating soon! 😊

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

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Posted: 15 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

Woah Jani 😃

U left me all shaken with this mesmerizing update 😳

I just caught up with the 2 latest parts u wrote 😃

Yaar i didnt know u were writing a FF and were writing so beautifully 😃

It felt so good reading it.

Love the bonding between Sunny-Payal and Bharti, its really sweet 😳

Bharti's dress is indeed beautiful, i can imagine her easily 😃

Chiggy wiggy part was awesome 😆 esp the sunny akshay angle 😆😆

Loved the way how u drescribed Bharti and Armaan falling for each other.👏👏👏

And wow they kisseeeeeed 👏

Really awesome parts jani, i loved them. 😳

Do continue soon 😳

Love,

Humera 🤗

Hello Humera...! 🤗

Thanks for reading my FF dear! :)

Glad you love it..Me feel very happy to read your detailed long comments!!

Appreciate it VERY MUCH! :)..I too love the Sunny, Bharti and Payal relationship..They're so cute together..Hahah and yes yes i was laughing so much while typing out the "Chiggy Wiggy" Dance segment...😆 😆 Because i was imagining Sanjay Dutt's moves....😆..

Me too love Bharti's dress..Love the green...wish i had one..😳......😆

It feels really good to know that you love the parts 😛..and yes will be updating soon! 😉

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#110

Yaar, i just noticed that i havent commented on the whole FF, let me explain, i had started reading the two spl parts for V-day, but it was so good that i went to read the beginning 😆😳

I loved the way u keep giving biodata about all the characters, that was amazing👏😃

After reading the first parts i enjoyed the FF even more 😃

I loved Arman and Bharti's first meeting😆 Heaven yaar, both in each other arms.

Bharti was too good when she told to Sunny to bring his but to help her out 🤣

That was so cute when Armaan tried to make Bharti uncomfortables, esp with the date issue.

Bharti telling him if she could do his homework instead, this sentence left me all laughing 😆😆

Bhaskar bhi na, in his ishtyle he paired himself with Payal 😳😃 Sunny se bachaooooo 😆😆

Thank God Lallo paired Bharti and Armaan together 😆

The shopping part between Sunny Payal and Bharti was sho cute 😳👏

Tina, well she's useless, i wont talk about her 😆

really i loved reading all the parts in one go, it was very entertaining, romantic and funny 😳👏👏

Now im missing ur update 😆

Do update soon sweety, Humz is waiting 😛

Love, Take care,

Humera 🤗

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