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Sunshine_kk

@Sunshine_kk

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#451

Double updates and double date.. heheheh. Loved reading. Please update the next part soon. Can't wait to read about Aditya's reaction after watching Zoya in yellow dress.

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#452

Wow double updates...

So Aditya had Reached Mussoorie

I am so excited...

I am loving his Nervous side...

Awww he messed up the date...

zoya...ofcourse he has feeling for you

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saira

@sezo

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#453

Amazing two chapters after I hope a lovely time off.

Loved how arjun and noor teased adi. He is so cute. Can't believe zoya got the wrong impression but it was the best when they walked up to the table for 2.

Plz update me t part soon.

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jenshad

@jenshad

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 6 years ago

#454

Sunshine came to meet him at last :)

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#455

Love your parts 19 and 20.

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hema

@Itsflora

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#456

Yaaay...

She will ask him out!!

Edited by Itsflora - 6 years ago

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Mona

@AsadZoya1708

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#457

The updates are awesome...

Adi and Zoya are gonna work together...

Zoya getting Noor with her for the date was hilarious...

Poor Adi... Arjun came to his rescue...

Please do continue soon...

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Appu

@A.Kh_20

Rocker

Posted: 6 years ago

#458

AwedAwe!! Hehe Zoya baby is always oblivious to her surroundings!!

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masin

@masin

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#459

LOVED the updates! Zoya's oblivion was hilarious! I don't think it's entirely because she's naive, but also because she doesn't want her mind to wander in that direction. It's hard enough to move on from one relationship to another, add to that your ex having cheated on you, it's bound to play on her mind. I love how their relationship is progressing. Albeit a little slow, but again, it is only natural for them to move at this pace considering their respective pasts.

I'm interested to see where Zoya and Aditya head from here and how they work their personal and professional priorities into their growing feelings towards each other. I really admire how Zoya is working hard on rebuilding herself as a strong and independent woman - in fact, I appreciate how both she and Aditya aren't putting work or family on the back burner to figure out their feelings.

Once again, really well written, can't wait to read more!

P.S. Your updates were a much needed wave of positivity wrt the show. I hope it doesn't deter your creativity and your inspiration to keep writing! :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#460

Originally posted by: avanthishiv
Thank you for the two consecutive updates
It was a pleasant surprise, and I loved it

Nervous Aditya is always a sight to behold
Loving the charade between the siblings

Thanks for reading and commenting!
Glad you enjoyed the nervousness and the goof up :D

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