AdiYa FF ~The Hookup~ NEW CH UPDATED - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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And "Shit is what I said as I advanced towards the end, even though it was obvious it was Hooda! Damn, woman, I had no idea you were coming up with something so gripping or I'd have started pestering you more. Don't worry, count me in on that for the updates! 😆

About the prologue, it was well written and built up the intensity to well the shit-just-got-real moment at the end. This is a completely new take on the characters and I can't wait to find out more about the circumstances under which Zoya ended up in Hooda's bed. Oh and he's a pilot in this one, Idk I just love it more this way, kinda gets hotter😳

I really liked Zoya's "What would make me look, not like a cheater? It captured the essence of the story as well as Zoya's conscience perfectly. Also, the realization that she wouldn't be able to meet her eyes in the mirror for the rest of her life as a repercussion of her infidelity was one of my favorite moments.

I can only wonder how the party gave way to the one-night stand! Like what the freaking hell happened, man? Haha, guess I'll just have to wait for that to unfold. On that note, thank you so much for distracting me from my exam prep and of course, the PM. 😆

Update soon! Btw, we never really introduced ourselves! I'm Anaya and I'm guessing you're Akshita (UN)! Yep, I'm a smart ass!

Cheers!


PS- Really loved the banner! In fact, Mera Mehboob aaya hai was apt for this one!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Was she drunk? Was he? It looks like a mess at the moment, but maybe nothing actually happened.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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okay.. her "shit" at the end kinda makes me think that she knew who he was...!! ooohhh... this is interesting... up until now we've had PooSh cheating.. this is the first one that i've read when AdiYa is in the wrong.. waiting!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Sweetie,
Unresed my comment on Pg. 1
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
This is really interesting😉
Would love to read what's next 👍🏼
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aishu136

Hi Sweetie,

Unresed my comment on Pg. 1

🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Akshita, can we get an update if it's already ready? Pretty please! 😳

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Villete-

Akshita, can we get an update if it's already ready? Pretty please! 😳


I love the anticipation but the update isn't ready right now😆
I have the notes but I still need to properly compile them to form chapters. I'll get down to write on Monday, though. So, expect the update early next week.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wowww!!!! This looks so damn interesting!!! Keep the update coming soon!!!

Thanks for the pm! 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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AWESOME Start😃
You're an amazing writer😳
Please continue soon and pm me😊

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