AdiYa FF ~The Hookup~ NEW CH UPDATED - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tani91

This so damn good! Can't wait to read more

Hey! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: zaara610

Wow..love the prologue.. please continue soon..😛

I will update either today or tomorrow, thanks!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Villete-

And "Shit is what I said as I advanced towards the end, even though it was obvious it was Hooda! Damn, woman, I had no idea you were coming up with something so gripping or I'd have started pestering you more. Don't worry, count me in on that for the updates! 😆

About the prologue, it was well written and built up the intensity to well the shit-just-got-real moment at the end. This is a completely new take on the characters and I can't wait to find out more about the circumstances under which Zoya ended up in Hooda's bed. Oh and he's a pilot in this one, Idk I just love it more this way, kinda gets hotter😳

I really liked Zoya's "What would make me look, not like a cheater? It captured the essence of the story as well as Zoya's conscience perfectly. Also, the realization that she wouldn't be able to meet her eyes in the mirror for the rest of her life as a repercussion of her infidelity was one of my favorite moments.

I can only wonder how the party gave way to the one-night stand! Like what the freaking hell happened, man? Haha, guess I'll just have to wait for that to unfold. On that note, thank you so much for distracting me from my exam prep and of course, the PM. 😆

Update soon! Btw, we never really introduced ourselves! I'm Anaya and I'm guessing you're Akshita (UN)! Yep, I'm a smart ass!

Cheers!


PS- Really loved the banner! In fact, Mera Mehboob aaya hai was apt for this one!


Thank you so much! This makes me excited about your reaction to what's coming. I want to explore a different side to the characters and hopefully I'll be able to do that.

And in that case, I'm glad I didn't tell you what I was planning even though you had a clue 😆

You'll just have to see what exactly happened that it led up to this. The whole thing alone might take up to 3 chapters lol. But I promise I won't bore you 😉

Lotsa love, Anaya!
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Posted: 7 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: coderlady

Was she drunk? Was he? It looks like a mess at the moment, but maybe nothing actually happened.

You'll know 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: MissRight

okay.. her "shit" at the end kinda makes me think that she knew who he was...!! ooohhh... this is interesting... up until now we've had PooSh cheating.. this is the first one that i've read when AdiYa is in the wrong.. waiting!!

You'll just have to wait and see😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you!😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: hriti713

This is really interesting😉

Would love to read what's next 👍🏼

Thank you!😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: oracleraider786

KIDNAP KIDNAP KIDNAP!!!
Very interesting...
Similar to what I was about to write...
But no problem...
Loved your start...
Do continue...
Seems like Zoya does not know what had happened, please don't make her feel guilty everytime...
Can't see my princess cry anymore...

I'm glad you liked it😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: dreamyp

Waoohh interesting...Pm me

I will, thanks!

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