FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 57

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima

Chapter 26

aap shayad jaante nahi 15 din mai kitni cheeze chub chuki hai in haton mai ...aap nahi aate toh shayad wahi pada rehta ...thanks Chachu ...hum dono ki jaan bacahi aapne ...

My ZAYA are so adorable their love their pain although the hate everything is unique and heart touching❤️

Rehman acted as their savior but real piece of their souls lies with each other their pure and selfless love always brought tears in my eyes😭

Amaizing work SIM

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima

Chapter 27

Da ...ek baar dekh toh lo...mere bhukhar theek hua ya nahi.

The innocence filled one liners of Zain never misses to vibrate the cords of my heart❤️

Continue soon

Originally posted by: AnnRosewood

Emotions. The very thing that make us human. You can have happiness, pride, excitement, relief. Every emotion considered good. But what would you be if you didn't feel hurt, or pain, or despair? You can't have the good without the bad. There is no light without darkness.

Anger

It is the vexing of the soul
A swelling of the veins waiting to explode
It's like the rushing of blood to the head
Saying things, you would rather left unsaid

Anger
I am beside myself
Tossing and frowning, I lost my head
I need to stop and find me again
a calming of the soul and tranquility within
and cease this war that rages in

Anger
let it not be said
that I unleashed the monster under my bed
anger, please stay out of my head
Control, Calm and Purpose
That's my request instead

And when this anger subsides, an empty barren land of broken memories,and hearts is left behind..a time when you look back and see that you're left with nothing but the dying embers of a past you can never get back..

It was Aaliya masked love that brought her to the clinic...it was the haunting screams of her never ebbing pain which made her push him away..

It was the promise of never leaving her,which makes him try a little harder even if it means losing himslef in the way..

Its the story of love like no other..its the glare of anger and the balmy concern ..its the pang of guilt..and regrets of pain and hurt and betrayl...of broken memories and trust..of the tiny sliver of hope..which is trying hard to keep its head above d water..its a marvellous pice of work..Chapter 27 just reinforces the fact that Aaliya ..who is just breathing...is the washed away version of her old self..and it may take an eternity to get her back..but Zain's love will stand d test of time..through tears and 'forced smiles'..

Love

Ann

Originally posted by: AnnRosewood

chapter 26..

I wish to become a writer like you one day..but i don't think i can ever be half as good as you..

Bcoz no matter how much i try..i can't do it..

you know why..because you're special.not just at your craft bt also as a person and it reflects trhough your work..

And through the bindings of the relationship in this stroy..from Gabbar to gabbar chachu...from 'uss Zain se door rehna'..to gabbar chachu trying to mend the chasm between zain and aaliya..you define every relationship beautifully..

You once said dt you wait for my comments...

but i never told you that i wait to comment on your chapters..

that I wait for your updates..because my day seems incomplete without them..

love

Ann

Originally posted by: zayacrazy

Hey Sim...Sakeena

I've been reading but lost time to comment...

Coming back...A hug.hugs to u too😳

The warmth of a soul to our body is like the warmth of the summer...relaxing. It feels calm...sometimes unsaid words and plain actions are enough to show and explain a thousand things...

Aaliya.

Her way of taking him there to tell him with atmost request to 'Get out' is poison in the form of cake...She is trying to keep herself from not harming him any further or revealing her love...she's in the shackles of the past. And past is the enemy to the present!

The more you rewrite it the more you end up erasing!aww beautiful analogue ...splendid ..yes that was what i wanted u all to feel

Zain.

His love is identified but not accepted. Truly maybe yes I have come across someone like Zain. But maybe he did not come across Aaliya...the feeling of being known yet unknown to who you want to be known can be more then getting hung up...it can be what we term as 'guthan!' And the suffocation strangles the soul...not the love! But the soul, where this pure feeling takes birth! u said it all..ur wrds always make me speechless, i love to re- read ur comments ..there is ahidden beauty in them a struggle for words that are reeking to come out ...wash the blankness of the screen

Both of them are incomplete withot eachother! Especially Aaliya! If today Zain leaves...he'll be staisfied with his tries...but Aaliya will be left behind with guilt! Of not stopping him! Ths story has taken a major pace and emotion ride through reality! I wonder how much this discloses you as a person Sim! And who are you standing as 'Zain' or 'Aaliya'?hmm..well its my story ...i have seen someone having this kind of injury and doing things worse than aaliya ..so its not entirely fiction...and i have gone through pangs of zain ...thats why his POV is more stronger ...coz those words are the closest to the soul

Haan, aayein the tum jeetne humein...

Par hum hi na pehchaan sake humein...

Na jaan sake kya pa ke khoye humne...

Na sunn sake woh pukarein jo pukare humein...

Vada kiya tha tumne humse...

Intezaar mein vahi miloge humein...

Toh phir kaha tanhaai mein chalein chodkar humein...

Originally posted by: Priya_arora

superb chapter ...I loved it ...hehe aaliya is much :p ...she is not letting him eat ...bt Alisha hai na ;) ...hope she will do smtng ...umm ..precap wat serious event ...Waiting for it ...do cont soon