FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106

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mariya19_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#581

Very heart touching update...
Feeling bad for zain...he can do anything to get her back...
This is really owsom ...
Beautifully written
Loved it...
Cont soon...

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priya arora

@_Butterfly_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#582

omg ! It was so so emotional ...really heart wrenching ...zain wat is he ...every pain ,hate ,anger of aaliya he jst gulped down ...n aaliya ik she has no control on her mind bt her heart ached every time she hurt him ...n u described that so beautifully ...cont soon

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Megha

@Amazeballs

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Posted: 10 years ago

#583

Frankly the emotions of zaya is fabulously written👏

But imagining zain in that condition is painful really really painful

I can understand aliyas mind reaction hope soon she will hear her heart

Imaging both in this condition is intolerable

Hope Aliya wins battle against her hatred

Just hope zain do not stop fighting to get Aliya back tough

Do continue soon🤓

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nashfa

@nashfa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#584

Honestly it was really an emotional
Update. My zainu I can't imagine him like this .hope aliyas love overcome her hatred towards Zain
Continue soon

Riya

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#585

"No one saw what was broken today ...inside Zain ...not even Aaliya ...his hopes of ever getting back with her had dwindled ..the patience breaking ...he was questioning his own choices now..."

Its said that its better to have your heart broken once by walking away then have it broken over and again..every single day..

But what makes us stay.is that small glimmer of hope..that somewhere behind the facade of the hatred,anguish and tears,is the person who can heal all the wounds of that broken heart...Its the hope that even though the person has apparently changed..but the memories haven't.

You know Sim,sometimes you make me wonder,whether love is really so unconditional..in a world where no one spares a second thought about someone,where its so easy to fall in and fall out of love...where 'love' is more conditional than unconditional..you make me wonder whether...whether someone will ever love me so much..

Yes,I have found my unconditional love...yes,I do love him..because that's the only thing I know ,which is more important to me than my last breath..but sometime this story sacres me...because just the way Zain is an empty shell of a man without Aaliya and Aaliya just a shadow lurking in the maze of time without him..I'll be the same without that love...

Beintehaa Ishq is like a haunting melody..its haunts me..its soothes my soul..its brings a smile on my face..and unbidden tears rolling down my face..I don't care whether others think what they think about this story..but believe me Sim,till date this is the only love story which has struck that cord within my heart..its as if..with every chapter..my resolve to love..a lil bit more is becoming stronger..even if it means that the stronger my love is..more broken my heart will be...

Sorry from deviating from the topic..but I would like to conclude with these lines from your chapter..

"Zain Abdullah a man of his words ...a man who loved her like crazy ...a man who never ever feared anything ...a man who looked all broken yet at peace ...she failed to see a small smile that played in those eyes ..."

lOVE

Ann

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zayalove

@zayalove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#586

Tbh i m.actually crying while i m typing this this review ...

These two r really very very emotional n heart wrenching chapters ...
I have never ever felt this way before..

Its like somebody close to my heart is hurting

Aliya' s pain zain's pain was described really well ..
They way she rushed to get him back ..
Besides his wounds he was still praying to Allah ..was osum ..

Really amazing ..
I m.proud to say that i have u as my frnd ..an osum writer .

Now the desicion thing is really intriguing ..
Plzz update soon ...

Loads of love ..

Alina

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manny136

@manny136

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Posted: 10 years ago

#587

Wow what an update(s) you said it was gonna be dark and boy it was. Aliya is losing control a lot lately im starting to wonder if this problem is gonna worsen and hurt her health as well. She is also starting to realize there might be something wrong with her. Zain going through so much pain is really hard to read and now its getting even hard for him to hold on. As for aliya her emotions are everywhere and heartbreaking to see her enforce all this pain and then break down afterwards. Aliya really needs help before she either hurts herself or someone else or is her hate just reserved for zain ?? Cant wait for the next chapter

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#588

Broken . He was , she was . But why would he go ? his Heart is already given , to her , going would mean to lose , himself in a world where hope does not exit . Yes , she hurts him , constantly , but she is hurting too , yes he is risking his heart , yes this pain is killing him , but going away , would not heal him ,no because he needs to feel even if it's pain .

Today , more than the physical pain , it was his heart who has been broken . Again . But that's true love ? I think . It demands all this , i think he is tired , because he do realize , that if he stays , her hatred will grow ,and he might lose himself in it .

Really looking forward to the next one , with Hope !