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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing chapter...
Loved it..
Beautifully written...
Zain cant eat any thing 😭
Zain is suffering so much to gain his love back...
Once again...awsome chapter loved it..
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing chapters Sim!!
I have been feeling sad for both of them now, don't know what to do or rather, say.
But u know, this story is an addiction so i m sure i would not be able to leave it... I am having mixed feelings right now... I really want zaya to come together but then it would end this story of yours so i dnt want it to end also...
Tell me what to dooo...😕
And you told us to have faith in you, well... Given... I have total faith in you. You wouldn't give this story a tragic ending. You wouldn't, right? Well, i badly hope so.

I just don't know how to exactly respond so better yet, I am just saying, Please update soon SIM!
Waiting to know how this story goes further...

Love you...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update. Man zaya r in so much pain but both of them have gone through so much so its gonna take time for it to get better. Aliya is trying so hard she is fighting a war within her n fahads call made it even worse like dude be more positive instead of being all discouraging lol it made her even more determined to get rid of zain. I hope her health doesn't suffer with getting dizzy n seeing rhea. Zain just soldiers on but this is getting crazy how much more can his body take lol Poor zaya need to really relax lol both their health is at peril lol cant wait for next chapter.
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A battle . A constant one between her mind and her heart . This chapter really defined Aaliya and Rhea . There is Rhea who cannot bear to see him in Pain and there is Aaliya who already has lost so much in love that shedoesn't want to risk her heart again . All the times he hurts her and all the time she hurts him , she does not want revenge she wants to be free from her pain and the more she hurts him more she realize that she is not able to bear this pain . Very excited for the coming chapters continue soon !
The idea of the cover is really funny but it really define the story !
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this is true not just for Zain..but also in Aaliya's case...
For him its his guilty,his redemption,his undying love,his determination,his patience and the fact that a life wihout her wouldn't be a life at all...is dragging him into that darkness where sunshine seldom reaches..And for her..its the pain..the desolation..the hurt..that is reinforced by her brain...is what is driving her into that darkness..where there's nothing but hollowness..
Its rightly said that the brain is the bodie's most mysterious organ..and when its hurt..when its in danger..its becomes an even greater mystry..we often don't know what makes it tick..what makes it happy..what makes us sad..except the fact that it controls our emotions...
Sim,you say that I can make you smeel the rain..and you make me feel their pain..you make those small cuts and bruises in my heart...as if those lacerations are the reflections of the ones on theirs...
Im at a loss of words...
Love
Ann
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Posted: 10 years ago
Khaane ka kuch bhalle hi na do...
Bhooke hein as tere pyaar ko...
Kisi baat ki khabar bhalle hi na do...
Bhooke hein bas mehsoos karne tere pyaar ko...

It's the fun way now... moreover it is a challenge to his patience and his love...she tried the emotional and physical way to hurt him and send him back but now it's the way of effecting him mentally. She's tryong to get his brain to understand she will always remain unaffected.

But Aaliya is surely not aware of what Zain's heart has in terms of strength and faith in love...it mesmerizes me off to what heights he can go to for his love...

It surely assures one thing that, no matter who comes in the middle- his family, brother or mom...he's not going without her! Aaliya hasn't failed to understand his love but she fails to understand his ambition and passion on winning him back because the way she tries to break him...seem nothing too difficut foe Zain at the end...

The day Aaliya returns to him I bet she'll truely discover the insides of Zain and what he's gone through and then will see what both of them have overcomed! And that's when the actual love in each of their hearts will truely arise...to bounds unmeasureable!

As always Sim! A flawless piece of writing...
You know? I'm thankful to you because you are a reason I visit this fourm on a daily basis...being dead your story is yet a soul to this isolated place! And it still keeps the memories of Zain and Aaliya, Beintehaa and most importantly 'Ishq' Alive!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello sim *hides behind the pillar *
Kafi late Ai na main ...
Shorry *kaan pakar k *

Well now coming back to the chapters .
They were osum as always ..
I can imagine each n every line happening infront of me ...

Their emotions are so well describes ..
Be it love anger hatred jealousy ...
Every emotion speaks their own self ...

Again u left me spellbounded ...
U r truly n inspiration darling ...

Plzz update soon ..
Take care ..
Stay blessed ..
Keep writing ..
Lots n lots of love to u .

Alina
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Dedication: Chapter 29: this ones to Tanu(HarshikaIsLife) ..one of my twitter readers ..every update is anticipated and almost every word is carefully evaluated...with hopes held high who felt yesterdays update was dry 😆, so cute ..well i love you for your frank words..yes the update looked a bit diff since it was written 5 mnths back and had grown stale..just like todays ..but i still hope u find it a bit masaledaar 😃, thank you and love you a lot

Chapter 30: Sumaiya(sweetgirlx1) another tweetie ..a chance encounter and i get some of the best reviews from her ..glad dear that i found you and you finally started commenting ...a very special friend from a very special country ...loads of love to you

Ok Update ..its bhari ...very very heavy ..as it is its dark..now its getting darker ..hang on with your hope lights as we dwell through a dippy update ...

No updates for tomm as I will be out on a date with a special someone 😆, so no disturbance 😳

have to still reply to dozens of comments ..but very sleepy ..and i need to evade dark circles for my date tomm...so Sainora ...

and sorry sorry sorry for the looonggg updates, please bear it ...

SIM


Chapter 29

Shararat ki Haqeekat

Zain was waiting for Aaliya in the corridor, but she didn't come. He asked the Peon, Aree Rhea Madam Kaha hai pata hai kya, aaj toh half day hai...saare classes khali ho chuke hai ...

Jee shayad unka extra classes chal raha hai, woh kya hai naa teen mahine bahut kuch miss ho gaya, toh principal sir ne kaha tha...

Par second class ke bacho ka extra classes, he just smiled...incredible he thought, bechaare bacho koh bhi nahi bakshate ... And then his face sparkled ...he had hit an amazing idea...

Suno...he called the peon ...Shankar bhai aapki thodi madad chaiye ...and he kept his arm around his shoulders ...and took him aside to tell him the Master plan...

-------------------------In Aaliyas class...

Ok baccho chalo book nikalo ...jitna jaldi karoge utna jaldi hum dono ghar jayenge ...abhi ded ghanta padai phir chuti, she winked towards the class, the mood coming back to a bit normal one now...and Zaroon was secretly smiling ...hai Miss ke saath poore ded ghante ...he and his kiddish dreams ...

Out of nowhere, they all heard a loud noise, Aaliya ran out of the class to see Zain lying on the floor, withering in pain ...

aree Madam dekhiye naa Sir gir gaye ...said Shankar ...rather convincingly. Zain looked at Aaliya, she looked sad and hurried towards Zain to lift him.

The small heart in Zains body was doing a disco dance, the moment she touched him all his senses were superactivated. He could smell her hair ,hmmm her smell so exotic so divine ...he coudnt help smiling.

Aaliya with help of Shankar got him inside the classroom. Accha suniya aap jaakar first aid kit laiye mai tab tak inhe dekhti hoon.

Shankar left and Zain became the center of attention, almost all the kids were surrounding to examine Zain Sirs injury...and Zain loved all the attention, faking his injury to the tilt...

But in that small crowd was one set of eyes that was not so sympathetic...Zaroon was fuming at Zain ...hmm fall ha...lets see, he slowly sneeked out of the class to meet Shankar ...

.and he did find Shankar ...busy counting some extra money ...Baksheesh that's what Zain had called it ...Toh yeh baat hai ...Zaroon said loudly. Shankar turned around and seeing Zaroon hid his extra aamdani ...

-----------------Inside Aaliyas class ...

Zain bahut dard ho raha hai kya, she was concerned beacause he had an injury to that leg earlier ...haa Da...I mean Rhea ...he said letting out a painful fakey moan...

She was holding his ankle when a little voice came from behind ...

Sir bataye toh sahi dard kaha ho raha hai ...everyone turned around to look at Zaroon ...

Zain gave a smirk looking at him ...yeh phir aaya ...kabab mei haddi ...his mind blurted out ...

Haddi par ...said Zain, showing his ankle...

accha Miss Rhea ...agar koi jhoot bolye toh uski kya punishment hoti hai, asked Zaroon all the time looking at Zain ...

Kisne jhoot bola, asked Aaliya looking at Zaroon with a frown ...

hai koi ...aap bataye toh he said ...

well you know Zaroon jhoot bolna acchi baat nahi hai , aur mujhe jhoot se aur jhoot bolne walon se sakht nafrat hai ..

A small fear of guilt ball gulped down his throat ...Zain looked at Zaroon with an evil eye now ...

Zain sir jhoot bol rahe hai ...who gire hi nahi ...said Zaroon acting like a hero of the day,

Aaliya looked at Zain with anger...

Nahi Da...I mean Miss Rhea.. yeh jhoot bol raha hai ...mai kyu acting karunga, waise aapko roz roz irritate karne ka shaukh thodi na hai ...

In his defense...Zain abruptly stood up on the same leg quiet comfortably...Aaliya was shocked to see that ...

The whole class knew Zain was lying... Zain felt if he did not leave now he will be in deep trouble,

Aree mera paav toh toh theek ho gaya , chamtkar ...ya allah ab toh mai dance bhi kar sakta hu ... declaring that he started walking out of the class ...he had barely reached the door,

when he heard Zaroon the hero's winning claim... But Miss , aap Zain sir koh punishment nahi degi ..ya hum sab bacche hai karke humein hi punishment milte hai ...just kinda off fixing the final nails to zains liar coffin ...

little zaroon had no clue how may punishments Zain had been taking in the past 20 days ...

Zain ...Aaliya finally spoke, Zaroon sahi keh raha hai, tum ek teacher ho aur aise jhoot bolkar baccho par galat impression set kar rahe ho ...her anger had toned up now...the mood changing again

Zain turned to face Aaliya, she looked angry yaa Allah tu kyu danda lekar mere peeche pada hua hai...kaha patane aaya tha ...aur kaha phir fas gaya he thought and waited for her to continue talking ...but the devil Zaroon spoke again ...that timid satan thought Zain , bacche tu mujhe bahar mil kahi tera murabba na bana diya toh mera naam bhi Zain Abdullah nahi...

Aapko yaad hai poora period aapne humei kneel down karaya tha ...inse bhi wahi karaye ...aur haa chodna mat miss ...he smiled like a winner in this race for Rhea Miss ...

Theek hai , said Aaliya heeding to Zaroons suggestion, while Zain was exasperated,

As her head started aching again ...she closed her eyes ...

wow now Aaliya is going to listen to this 6 year olds advice...his mind refused to believe that Zaroon was being the judge of the day and he was acting as the guilty...

Rhea sochna bhi mat ...aur who bhi in chintu pintu ke saamne , dekho mai teacher hu yaha ...tumhara student nahi ...to please ...aise khayal bhi apne zeham mai mat lana he looked to only meet at Aaliyas eyes that were filled with anger now...the facial expressions changing ...and her eyes narrowing on his face ..

Theek hai Zaroon ...aaj aapki Zain sir ki class mai leti hu ...Mr.Abdullah waha deewar ke nazdeek mere table ke side par blackboard ke neeche ...jaiye kneel down kariye ..aur haa class ki taraf dekhiyega ...

Zain couldn't believe his ears, dekho Rhea yeh... he tried to speak but was snubbed,

Maine kaha ...jao..the tone made Zain uneasy ..she was fuming now ...he knew his great idea had fallen right over his face and now he was threatened to lose his dignity in front of these 6 years olds ...he felt horrid ...

Aapne suna nahi shayad maine kya kaha . ...I said kneel down ...waha par.. she pointed out ...

Zain looked down ..if he would walk away ...she would cool down ..but then it would tarnish her image ..she was right ..he was a teacher ..and kids learn fast especially all the wrong things ...he decided to let her have her way ...

the whole little tiny 6 year olds were amazed to see the sight. Their Rhea madam had actually had all the super-power that they always thought...seeing Zain sir walk towards Aaliyas desk and go on his knees was a sight that left them with open mouths ...

Zain was feeling really embarrassed ...what if anyone saw him in this class like this ...Oh god ...why ....he was lost in his confused debate when Zaroon again spoke...

Ab kya chaiye iss shaitan koh ...tere aur tere bhai ka bharta mere hi haton banna hai ...thought Zain ...

Shankar ...Zaroon shouted and Shankar walked in with his head down and Zain knew his troubles were just starting...

Sorry Madam, yeh sir ke paise nahi chaiye ...he looked at Zains existing condition ...and thinking Rhea might make him do the same he just ranaway ...

Zaroon, the superhero came close to Aaliya and held her hand, sending a wave of irritation in Zains spine ...Miss aapne kaha tha ..kabhi bhi kisi koh rishvat nahi deni chaiye...Zain sir ne yeh paise Shankar koh jhoot bolne ke liye diye ...very bad miss haina... that small wicked smile ...aww wish Zain could have dashed towards Zaroon and strangled him with all the love ...

Aaliya lost all her cool, she was really upset now and Zain could make out her eyes looked really sad the fist tightening ...he couldn't recollect if she had taken her morning medicines or not , she looked different very upset ...and maybe he saw a gist of tear forming in her eye ...he was scared now ...very scared ...and just looked down ...maybe it was not a good idea to play the prank on her ..especially what she had gone through the previous night

But little Zaroon had not finished his devil plans, he wanted to add to Zains misery...he walked near Aaliyas table to pick up the wooden scale and handed over to Aaliya ...Rhea Miss jab humari sabse badi mistake hoti hai tab aap yeh chalati hai ...dono haat par ...saying he left to take his seat on the front beach.

Zaroon eyes wanted to watch all the fun , wow Zain sir was always acting over smart near his fav class teacher and this was his payback time...his brother Altaf had left no stone unturned to brainwash his mind ...he hated Zain

All the kids back to your benches, Aaliyas voice boomed with anger and irritation, not only the kids even Zain was scared now...she looked off limits

Aaliya walked towards Zain ...and he slowly looked up...to see her angelic face that was wrapped with pain right now ...a pain that he had let her down once again ...she was hurt and angry and irritated...and the flashes just made it worse ...clouding her logic

Unhe rishvat di thi tumne, tumhari himmat kaise hui ...she asked holding the wooden scale in her hand more firmly ... A kneeling Zain looked up to a now towering Aaliya...Zain knew a single additional lie would just seal his fate ...he just nodded ...yes

Haat aage karo aapna... she spoke with fury...

Da..bacche dekh rahe hai ...

Haath aage badao ...he slowly extended his palm to receive a blow with that ridiculously thick looking wooden scale ...and like a small child firmly closed his eyes with a fear of being hurt ...

All the while that he had thought she would be gentle...was so so so very wrong ...Aaliya smacked him hard ...with all her might and Zain actually let out a moan ...not a fake one this time ...he coudnt believe his Aaliya had actually hit him ...and that too in front of a whole class of 6 year olds ...his palm was burning red and he just pressed it around his pants to reduce the pain...

After letting the stinging pain on his left hand subside, he managed to look up ...and he saw something which broke his heart ...she was crying, her eyes were red and the pool of tears were just streaming down as though showering Zain with a bout of guilt...

Zain felt he had offended Aaliya big time ...He just wanted to hug her and tell her its fine ...he was all hers and if she was upset she had the full right ...but her hatred her talk last night and the dozen small children with those enveloped thinking process stopped him ...her brain was doing the talking now ...

He felt guilty of those tears...He slowly held his right palm, thinking a small blow wont take away the pain he couldn't feel but she was feeling . His hurt his pains were more hers than his ...

She spoke softly ...so that only he could hear her ...Zain Abdullah mujhe phir se takleef dene ki sochna bhi mat ...thak chuki hu tumhare roz ke tamashe aur bachkane harkoton se ...

tumhe jitna mujhe bezaat karna tha mere pyaar ka Mazak udana tha ...uda chuke ho tum ...ded saal ...aur ab bhi tum mujhe roz tang karte ho...

nahi lautungi tumhari zindagi mai ...jis tarah tum ne mere bholepan ka fayda uthaya ...mujhse gunnah karvaya ...tum mere toh kya kis ke layak bhi nahi ho...

agar teacher bane ho toh us profession ki kadar karo...tumse nafart karti hu mai ...tumhare naam aur wajood se bhi ...

ek meherbani karo chale jao ...wapas Mumbai ..tumahri mom ...tumhara bhai ...sab mujhe zimmedar tehrate hai ...yaha aise rehne se mei tumhare saath wapas kabhi nahi aaungi ...roz roz wahi dard ...ab nahi seh paati mai ...

chale jao ...zeher ban chuke ho tum ... Mujhe hikrat hai tumse...kya kaha tha tumne ...ki kis baat ki pata nahi par sazaa hu mai tumhare liye ...sahi hai ...

meri sazaa ho tum ...jisse dekh kar zindagi se nafrat si ho gayi hai mujhe ...I hate you ...

It was these last words...that stung Zain so badly almost paralyzing his senses...she raised the scale to hit those extended palm and soft hands , not noticing that he was not closing his eyes...his eyes were just fixed on hers, unable to move ...

And the wooden scale lay broken on the ground after she hit him with all her might. It laid shattered in two wooden pieces... was broken ...and so was Zains playful soul...her last words hit him like a slap...the pain on his hand were less soar than the one on his heart...

he felt he couldn't breathe ...a lump of pain and sadness had settled in his throat like a small beat trying to break free from his heart ...

Aur yaha se ek inch bhi hilna mat...un baccho ko dekho ...mai unhe yehi batana chahti hu ki bade hone ke baad kya nahi banna chaiye...tum hare jaisa insaan.....saying that she wiped her tears to face the class ...there was a pin drop silence...All the kids were scared of Rhea Miss, she was always so gentle and caring and in a few minutes they were afraid to be even around her.

Aaliya realized looking at their expressions that she shouldn't have lost her cool and said all those things to Zain , not especially when this kids could hear their conversation ...but it was more of her actions which had scared them ...frightened almost ...she took a sip of the water as her trembling hands needed to calm down ...

Its ok ...she hugged Zaroon yeh aap sab ke liye sabak hai baimani aur jhoot mat bolna ..aap please aise mat bannana ...saying that she just resumed her classes...almost ignoring his existence...an adult in a small world, who needed her as much as this kids needed her.

The next hour passed with only Aaliyas voice dominating the class ...the kids were slowly behaving normal ...everyone avoided to look at Zain...who never for a second kept his gaze down...all the time he kept on staring at the kids ...without even blinking with an ounce of pain that was in his knees

No one saw what was broken today ...inside Zain ...not even Aaliya ...his hopes of ever getting back with her had dwindled ..the patience breaking ...he was questioning his own choices now...

The class got over and kids started walking out, as theres was the only class that was being conducted ... Zaroon was the last to leave, he had felt bad for Zain , he never wanted him to be so badly treated for some fun , but Rhea Miss looked mad and he just couldn't speak up. He looked at Zain and slowly walked out ...

Aaliya sat on her chair breathing a sigh of relief, she was still shivering from her actions and he still kneeled next to her. His punishment was still not over and he was lost in his own thoughts, unable to comprehend his pain ... Her thoughts ...her hatred ...however he had erased it ..it always flared up..he was tired now ...

Alisha walked in the empty class ...hey Rhea shopping chale tumne promise kiya tha... saying that she walked in ...to see the most weird site ...Zain was kneeling near the blackboard with both his hands held back ...like a punished child ...

Cutie who tum ho ...she was about to go near him , when Aaliya spoke ...Aalisha chale ...and took her purse and started walking towards the door, dragging Aalisha with her ...switching off the lights ...par Rhea ...Alisha insisted ...Zain ...waha ...aise ...

Koi nahi hai waha ...chalo Aaliya held her hand and just walked out of the doors , banging the gates of the class shut ...


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Chapter 30

Inteahaa

As they walked out of school ...she felt like running away ..maybe that's what she would do...run away ...he would not leave ...the act of hurting him had broken her miserably ..the mind still refused to see what had happened ...still clouding, the anger still making her cynical ...

She closed her eyes ...when she went to the washroom ...what she saw in the mirror was a wavy image ...a soft girl who was lost in the maze of time and life ...situations had changed her ...she had no limits now ...the anger and hatred had burnt her ...

she suddenly felt very hungry ...as she rushed out to Aaliasha ...who was busy calling Zain ...

Rhea ..kya hua ...

Aalisha ...mujhe bhook lagi hai ...jaldi chalo ...

What followed was a ride through insanity ..as Aalisha silently watched her eating ...non stop...Aalisha tried to stop her but she didn't listen ...she tried to talk but she was lost ...as Aaliya immersed herself in the girly experience of shopping.

Her mind refused to think about Zain , she just wanted some peace, yet her thoughts forever lingered ...with him .Repeated attempts from Aalisha to ask about Zain had failed and finally she just decided to no more ask about him.

Aalisha had called him several times but he didn't pick ...she was getting restless ..the last image of seeing him like that pained her ...she looked at Rhea ...Zains Aaliya ...how long will she be able to stop herself from letting her harm him ...how long ...

Aaliyas shopping finally ended after 7 hrs, she had bought things which she would never ever use, she just wanted to fill in her pain with materialistic inputs...a poor substitute ...

Rehmaan was waiting for her at the door, Aaliya itni der kaise laga di ...aur poora market utha kar layi ho kya ...he smiled, her attack last night had made him increase her dose...something that she had skipped that day.

Holding some of her bags and getting her in ...Aww dad mai bhaut thak gayi hu she replied...

Abdul came near her with a glass of water ...thank you chachu so much she gulped down the water and rushed towards her room ....badme milti hu ...she said and ran upstairs...avoiding to meet Zain ...

Rehman was about to ask her something ...but Aaliya had already reached her room ...

At 9 pm she finally walked down for dinner Bahut bhook lagi hai dad, she moaned, the injury flared her need to have food, the mood had mellowed now as she taken her medications ...She kept on thinking how come Zains irritating face was still not be seen. But she waited for Rehman to tell about Zain rather than her asking him ...maybe he was in the kitchen cooking another of his dish ...

Zain kaha hai Aaliya ...Rehman asked her with concern...

Kaha hai matlab ...mai toh Aalisha ke saath shopping kar rahi thi...yehi hoga apne kamre mai ...ya kitchen mai

Nahi hai, mujhe laga shayad tumhare saath hoga, par tum toh do ghante se ghar par ho aur Zain school se abhi tak nahi aaya, aaj half day than a...tutions se lauta nahi..ya apne friend ke saath phir night camping karne gaya hai ...kahin kisi kaam se bahar gaya hai kay, har baar bata kar jaata hai ...he inquired ...

And realization striked Aaliya ...kahin woh...saying that she just got up from the table and grabbed the car keys and ran out of the main door.

Aaliya ...suno tho ...Rehman was worried to see her running out like that ...

She drove like crazy...all the while gently telling her mind ...no no maybe he has left for Mumbai, all her hateful words had pushed him...finally ...and all the while letting the illusion he would not have listened to her ...the most difficult and longest half hour ...she reached the school and the watchman was surprised to see her at this hour ...

Rhea Miss kuch bhool gayi kya ...he inquired ...haa shayad she just dashed towards her classroom .

Two floors and several steps later she reached the dark corridor ...it was pitch black ...she couldn't see her own hand ...slowly she grabbed the balcony rail to reach her class.

The doors were closed, thankfully not locked...she just prayed her fears would prove to be false and stepped in ...

Taking a breath of air as she opened up the door ...she saw a dark shadow

Tere dar par sanam chale aaye

Too naa aaya toh ham chale aaye

Chale aaye, chale aaye

Tere dar par sanam chale aaye

Too naa aaya toh ham chale aaye

....the most painful sight she could ever see... He was kneeling right next to her table , close to the blackboard ...exactly the way she had left him almost 10 hrs back ...

.she clinged on the door for support ...why would he do something as ridiculous like this ...her mind refused to believe that this shadow on knees was her Zains ...

She switched on the lights and looked towards the remnants of the shadow ...He still was holding his hands behind his back like a painful knot... he still was looking towards the empty benches as though he could see the children sitting there ...everything was the same as the way she had walked out of the class ...he had not moved even an inch ...as Aaliya had ordered him....

Aaliyas heart was filled with pain ...she never wanted to hurt him ...it was just a spur of the moment, the anger and hatred blinding her once again ...his bribing the peon and lying in front of the kids...what started of as a joke had taken such a serious turn ...she rushed towards him ...the heart refusing to be overcasted with her brain ...

Zain ...he looked up ... Zain Abdullah a man of his words ...a man who loved her like crazy ...a man who never ever feared anything ...a man who looked all broken yet at peace ...she failed to see a small smile that played in those eyes ...

Tere dar par sanam chale aaye
Too naa aaya toh ham chale aaye
Chale aaye, chale aaye
Tere dar par sanam chale aaye
Too naa aaya toh ham chale aaye

Tum pagal ho kya ...ab tak kya kar rahe ho yaha ...utho ...she shouted and pulled him up towards her, holding his arms. The numb knees and his lifeless legs finally had a bout of blood flowing through their veins ...

He got up almost holding her, unable to even stand stably...and she looked down at his knees, two spots of wounds, she could see his torn pants and blood ozzing out. His skin was all bruised, the long wait on his knees were speaking the pain they had endured.

She was shocked... he just stood up and slowly started walking towards the door, holding every possible thing on his way ...his limp and his walk were giving away his physical pain ...she slowly followed him.

Tere dar par sanam chale aaye
Too naa aaya toh ham chale aaye
Bin tere koyee aas bhee naa rahee
Itane tarse ke pyaas bhee naa rahee
Oh bin tere koyee aas bhee naa rahee
Itne tarse ke pyaas bhee naa rahee
Ladkhadaaye kadam, chale aaye

The walk back to car took 20 mins, several times when he was about to fall, she had extended her hand but he refused it . She opened up his side of the cars door and let him in , making sure he was comfortable.

He just rested his head against the head rest, closing his eyes...and Aaliya remembered his car accident when she had all panicked ... the way he was hit and his arm was broken, how frightened she was at the time ...and today too she felt the same pain ...that day it was Rocky who had hurt Zain ...and whom Aaliya had hated ...and today it was Aaliya herself, she and her mind ...she couldn't accept the fact that her harshness ...had overwhelmed her soul now ....

...she was the one who was the culprit ...she looked down with tear filled eyes driving towards the empty roads ...

Tere dar par sanam chale aaye
Too naa aaya toh ham chale aaye
Iss se pehle ke ham pe hastee raat
Banke naagin jo hamko dastee raat
Oh iss se pehle ke ham pe hastee raat
Banke naagin jo hamko dastee raat
Leke apana bharam chale aaye
Chale aaye, chale aaye

Their journey was filled with silence something which had been a regular one since she had regained her memory...Zain was still frozen when she reached home, even Rehman and Abdul had come to help Zain.

Zain yeh kaise hua ...Rehmaan asked with every ounce of concern as though it was Osmans words. Zain looked horrible with barely able to walk and his limp and the wounds on his legs looked pretty bad ...Kuch nahi, mai gir gaya tha school mei , he lied aur behosh ho gaya tha shayad...Aaliya ne aakar bachaya...nahi toh shayad saari raat wahi pada rehta, hosh hi nahi tha ...saying that he looked towards her, she looked down afraid to see his eyes, those brown and sad eyes.

dil ko dhadka laga tha pal pal ka

shor sunle na koi payal ka

dil ko dhadka laga tha pal pal ka

shor sunle na koi payal ka

fir bhi teri kasam chale aaye

fir bhi teri kasam chale aaye

chale aaye chale aaye

tere dar par sanam chale aaye

tu na aaya to hum chale aaye

tere dar par sanam chale aaye

tu na aaya to hum chale aaye

After Zain went to his room, Rehman called Aaliya... yeh sab kya hai, I hope yeh tumhaari wajah se toh nahi hua ...he looked with anger, Aaliya looked down ...unable to lie, she never could. Unable to tell Rehman what was happening ...she needed help ...

Jao khana kilao usse ...kal raat aur subhah bhi kuch nahi khaya tha usne ...ab toh usse chainse khana dena ...he spoke with all the love for Zain. He felt for him, felt like he was his own son ...could feel the pain and the longings he felt for Aaliya, but unfortunately she couldn't see it ...the mind was bound to her feelings now...he felt helpless both wont listen ...

Jaoo he scolded ...She went to the kitchen to fix him a plate and realized that she had actually made Zain starve for a whole day...all her acts ...of pushing him ...and then the prank ..her mind was swinging again ...as tears flowed non stop ...

Ya Allah, yeh maine kya kar diya...she had actually been very cruel with him ...her heart pained with the thought that he was hungry thirsty all day and with her angry mood and harsh words, he was hurt all alone in school, in that dark room kneeling for several hours and looking all lost.

Aaliya just sank on her knees crying ...she was hurt to see him all broken ...she needed to talk to Rehmaan ...this was not her. She had to go away...the damage was done ...if she had crossed so much then there were no limits now..she had to take her decision ...the final one ...

Slowly she stood back, promising herself that she will act strong, even when she couldn't stand to see his pain ...those eyes...that innocent face was tearing her ...

Holding the tray she walked towards his room and gently knocked. Both Abdul and Kashif were still inside the main house attending to Rehman.

Opening the door she saw him offering his Namaaz ...a prayer that she had taught him ...probably Isha the last namaaz of the day. Kneeling on the Musaala, with those now bleeding wounds and not wincing with pain ...he was the gentlest face she had seen, he looked at peace and slowly he lifted his hands, getting his palms closer and praying ...

Aaliyas tears that she had so strongly bonded by her words, began to trickle. Her promise to herself was broken when she saw his right hand, his palm has a deep cut wound with dried blood that had not left even after doing Wuzu ...and she remembered the broken wooden scale that she had so used on his soft hands. She kept the food on the two low lying mattresses and just walked out, unable to feel the heavy dose of emotions on her heart.

She walked straight into her room and closed the door, sitting on the floor and crying her heart out. Those silent tears and the silence of her scream were tearing the peace of the room. She had crossed her own limits ...today the hurt had moved to a new level of physical pain ...it was no more a joke...she had to cut herself loose from his world...if he wont leave ...she would ...she cannot see him going through this...

Finally after an hour she woke from her slumber, she had fallen asleep on the floor crying ...

She slowly opened up the balcony door and peeked towards the room below, the tray of food still lay on his mattress...she wiped her tears and inhaled a long breath . Steadying her gait, she picked up the first aid kit box and walked downstairs.

He had changed into a cute pair of shorts and was trying to apply some ointment on his wounds sitting on the mattress, that was as thin as the blanket that had covered it. He looked up, to see a pair of brown alluring n misty eyes screening his wounds. Aaliya caught his hands... And time stopped for Zain ...his whole body was healed, no pain ...only a heartbeat ...he could hear the thud thud ...it was sheer magic ...magic of love...

dard kaha hota hai aaj kal mujhe ...jab bhi dekhu muskurata tujhe ..

SIM

Pre-cap: A confrontation ...will Aaliya decide to stick to her decision ...or will Zain make his


Edited by Zainedil - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was very touching update..
Aww..feeling very bad for zain..he is doing everything to get bk his aaliya..
Bt aaliya nw realized dat she was very harsh wid him..
U defined every emotion so beautifully..
Pls cont soon..

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