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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
both parts were awesome..
loved them..
continue soon..
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
Both parts r amazing !!
Aww zain is in love at first sight :)
Surprise for aliya ...!!
Next part seems quite intresting
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: 786ahf_bi

Hey dude...it was really FABULOUS...I just loved it...both the chapters were well written...👏

Phatoo zain and independent Aliya was incredible...

Cont soon...thanks for the PM...

Waise your name?? I am habeeba...😳



Thanks habeeba for liking my work...i m haania.
Will update soon and pm u also😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
awesome updates !!!😳
beautifully written...👍🏼
ty u so much for d pm😃
please continue soon...😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
CHAPTER 4...(BIRTHDAY)

after 10 min aliya came dressed in her skyblue and white patilia she was looking beautiful.zain look at her and smile she came.he lead her to the car and they both sat in the car while zain's heart was dancing with happiness bcuz he is going to get her life today 4 which he was dreaming from 1 month.

Aliya's point of view

ALLAH wahan saif ki tang toot gi hai or iss ky chehry par koi pareshani ni h.aesa lag ra h ham hospital ni kisi ki shadi pr ja ry hn.
"saif kaisa h ab" i asked after watching her smiling face.
"khud hi dekh lena" he said with a huge smile.
ALLAH kaisa insan h ye.aj se pehly to itna weired behave nhn kia isny.
and then he stop his car infront of some restutrant.
"gari q roki" i asked confused.
"tmhn saif sy milna h na" he said.
"han par..."he cut me off.
"andar chalo sab pata chal jy ga.and i promise saif andar h"
"ye kia mazaq hai"i said angrily.
he came out of the car came to my side and open the door and open it.and signal me with his eyes to come out.and stepped out confused and angry and walk behind him.if anyone else stop the car at the strange place and ask me to come out i will never do that.but somewhere i trust him.bcuz i know him from past 2 months.
we entered inside and i m shocked to see the arrangments.
the hall was decorated with pink and white flowers.all tables had pink silk covers while chair are covered with white.the floor was covered with pink and white ballons and in the middle of the hall is the big crystal shandalier is hanging which is lightning the room...and the thing which left me surpried is...in few dinstance there was lots of little girls and boys including saif sana and arub .girls wearing pink gowns while boys weraing white suits...holding a alphabetic plates.each one holding one alphabet they are in line and suddenely they start moving in right and left as they were told and it makes...HAPPY BIRTHDAY ALIYA.
i look at the preprations and i was overwhelmed and so much happy.it's not like that no one celebrated my birthday but is was so special so new so unique...i totally loved that.
and suddenely i heard a voice.
"happy birthday aliya"he said with so lovely and soft voice.
i looked at him he is holding a bouqet of white roses.
"4 the birthday girl"raising his brow smiling.
i looked at him smiling...and took the bouqet and smell the flowers...
"ye sab tum ny..."i could'nt complete my santence in exitement.
"well..."he said lookin away.
"thank u thank so much"i whispher.
"ab apny bhanjy bhanjion ki khushi k lye itna to kr hi sakta hun"he smile...
oooh bhanjy bhajion k lye"i thought.
"let's go every one is waiting"he signal with hand.
i stepped inside and saif came running with a packet in his hand.
"before we start our birthday.i like to see my miss barbie doll as a real barbie doll"and he hand me a packet.i opened it it has beautiful white and pink gown...like wedding gown.it was so lovely and beautiful.i toched it and smile.
"who bought that"looking at zain.
"it's gift for my miss barbie doll from three of us"saif said.
"go and wear this and then let's have a party"saif said jumping.
and then i leave...asking for dressing room.waitress lead me the way.and she helps me also in my makeover...she was really very sweet or may be she was told to do so...i konw by whom.

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(aliya wea
ring this )


(imagine her wearing this but with full sleeves and with her brown curly hair)


zain's POV

i
was checking the arranements before her return when my eyes caught an angel...like coming directly from heaven.ther my life my reason of my brath standing smiling...beautifull is the word insult infront of her.
"chachu chachu"saif shake my hand.
"h...han"i stammered.
"miss a gaen jaye unhn ly kr aye na"he said.
ye chota packet lagta h mujh sy bhi ziada manners janta h.
"han ja ra hun"i said and walk towrds her.i give her my hand.first she hasitate but hold it.i take her to the table where cake was placing.



"wow it's beautiful"she said in amazement and with 1000 watt smile which is enogh for me to die.
then the party starts there was no family members only we 4 and some other people including staff.
she cut the cake and feed me and kids.she was so happy.
i took a chance and went to her.
"aliya mjhy tum sy kuch bat krni h"i said.
she turns to me.
"han mjhy bhi" she said sipping her juice.
"then shall we"...i asked.
"say"...she said confused.
"not here"he said.
"why"she said.
"y...yahan bht shor h na.chalo mery sath"
she got confused but start walking with me...we r at the stairs i m taking her to the tarace.when her phone rang.






Edited by butterfly20 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Its really amazing
Plzz update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
chapter 5 (did't gave title else suspense will be ruined😉)
happy reading...


ALIYA's POV

I was walking with him.thinking what will he say when suddenely my phone rangit was shabana ammi.i called her ammi bcuz she is really my mother but my mother with whom m living i called her maa.bcuz it's more loving...while maa and abbu called me aaliya bcuz they like that and i like that also but ammi and pappa called me ayesha bcuz they named me ayesha when i born.but i kept my identiy as aliya in my school and friends but relatives call me ayesha...so i had two lifes now one by my own parents who gave me birth and second was my parents who brought me up...and i like that both bcuz i m gaining double love double concern...
"zain excuse me"i said him apologising.
he looked at me questionly.
"umm...ammi ka phone h"i just inform him.can't narrate the whole story of mine.bcuz it's not neccessary.
he blink his eyes smiling..."ok tm tarrace pe aa jana i m going but plz jaldi"he said.
"bikul"i said smiling.
i picked up the phone.
"assalamualikum ammi"
"walikumussalam"
"kaisi hain"
"mai to thek hun.tu kahan h???"
"wo...wo ammi main ...resturant m hun."(i never lied so i told her stratight.)
"resturant m kia kr ri h???"
i look around he was gone so i continue"wo ammi aik friend ny meri surprise bithday orgnise ki h.to main wahin hun"
"ary wah...lagta h teri friend bara pyar krti h tujhsy"
i stop and thinking"pyar...???zain mujh sy...nhn nhn..."
"aliya kia hua bol na"
"g ammi..."
"acha to jaldi sy aa ja main tujhy leny ai hun."
"pr q ammi"
"tujhy teri maa ny btaya nhn"
"nhn to"
"ly...ary fareeda tum ny aliya sy bat ni ki"
she was now talking to my maa between phone call.then she said to me.
"acha to bas itna sun ly k tu bht jald ham sab ko chor kr apny sasural jany wali h...ab jaldi aa ja wo log aany hi waly hn."
"par ammi...mjhy to is bary m kuch ni pata aesy achanak".
"dekh aliya...ham sab ny milkar ye faisla liya h.or tery lye 2 nhn 4 maa baap hain sochny k lye bhala kuch ghalat kaisy hony den gy.or wo tjhy dekhny aa ry hn ly jany nhn.tu bas jaldi sy aa ja."
she stop a while and ask...
"aliya...tu...kahin...kisi or sy..."
"nhn ammi...aesi koi bat ni h...main thori dair m a ri hun.ap ka faisla meri sar ankhon py."i said proudly.
"acha to kitni dair lagy gi"
"bas adha ghanta"
ok...ALLAHAFIZ"
"ALLAHAFIZ"

I took a deep breath...ALLAH aaj surprise py surprise mily ja raha h...pehly birthday ab pruposal...pata ni agy kia hoga.ooh zain i forgot.i took steps fastly and went to tarrace where he told me...and when i went there he was standing there with his hands in his jeans...i know he got tired waiting for me.
"sorry zain"i said hasitatly.
he turn with a smiling face.i was shocked that he should have shout at me but he is smiling...
"it's ok"he said polietly.
"to kia kehna tha tmhn"i asked .
"pehly tum"he said with again that smile.
"ok...to main ye kehna chahti thi k...tum naraz to ni hogy na???"i asked.
"nhn"he laugh.
"ok...ye arrangments tm ny kye hn na"i asked narrowing my eyes.he nodded.
"kiun????"i said confused.
"u really want to know"he said pulling his hands from his pockets.
"yes...then what's the use of asking"i shrugged my sholders.
"ok...then i will tell u"he said.
"what do u mean WILL??? tell me now.i need to go"i said angrily.
"close your eyes without cheating" he said.
"what????what now???"
"u want to know then do it"he said.
"ok"i said and closed my eyes.
"open them "he said but his voice was low.
i open my eyes and another shock hit me.he was o his knees holding beautiful red rose.giving me a smile which i always love to see and i know what it means and what he will going to say.and finally he speak,,,,,
"aliya meer khan...main ny kabhi kisi larki m intrest nhn lia lekin jab sy tmhn dekha bas tmhara hi ho kar reh gaya...i know k pyar surat sy nhn seerat sy kia jata h.lekin tmhari surat hi tmhari sari seerat bayan kr deti h...main ny bht socha or har tareeqa azmaya yeh janny k lye k ye attraction h ya pyar...or akhir main jaan gya k ye sirf or sirf pyar h...I LOVE U ALIYA."
i was on cloud nine bcuz from when i met him i was also attracted to him he is so nice inside and outside but i m not that type of girls to express my feeling and somewhre i also respect him,care 4 him,can't see him in pain even if it was a little scratch.but may be it is also love.i take my hand forward and about to take the rose...when my phone rang again.and it was maa...and then i remembered what happened sometime back.i m going to engaged.and my parents take their decissions.i can't break their hearts and can't disobeyd them...the call turn into miss call and i took my hand back...

zain's POV

"
I..."she is about to spaek.i was so happy bcuz i knw she will accept my purposal.
"zain...i ...i...m sorry"she said.and i was like someone snatched earth beneth me.
"w...what do u mean"i asked shattered.
"zain...i don't want to hurt u.tm aik achy insan ho...u...deserve someone better than me."she said.
"no aliya i deseve u and only u...i love u aliya...how could u said that"i asked her holding her from sholders.
"bcuz..."and she stops.tears brimming from her eyes...
"bcuz i m engaged zain"she almost shout.
"what"...i said leving her sholders.
"u...did't told me before"i whispr.
"there are many things i did'nt told u.bcuz we r noone to each other"she said crying.
"what???we r no one to each other..."
"yes we r"she said and about to leave.when i caught her wrist.and twist it at hr back
"phir sy kaho"...i said with my eyes burning.
"zain choro mjhy"she tries to free herself.
"i said phir sy kaho k main tmhary lye koi nhn hun"
"zain"...she just crying.
"i know u love me aliya...then why???"i said leaving her.
"bcuz i don't let my parents insulted.they took their decision or wo iss puri dunia m mery lye har cheez sy barh kr hain.azaadi deny ka yeh matlab nhn k main apny faisly khud lun,unhn ny mjhy zindagi di h to meri zindagi ka faisla bhi wo hi karen gy...or tum...main tum sy pyar nhn krti...samjhy tum.aj k bad mujh sy milny ki ya baat krny ki koshish mat krna...ALLAHAFIZ."
she said and is about to go...when i speak,
"tum mujh sy door bhag sakti ho lekin apni feelings s nhn aliya...tum chahti ho k main tmhn pareshan na karun to thek h main tmhn pareshan nhn karun ga,lekin meri yaden tmhn har lamha har pal pareshan karen gi aliya...plzzz aliya aik farmanbardar beti k lye do logon ki zindagian mat barbad karo...plzz aliya..."i said with tears in my eyes.
"main bhool jaun gi k main kabhi tum sy mili thi"she said and walk away.

phewww...updated...like don't like your chice.
main to likhun gi or isy complte karun gi i hate incomplete works...but will happy if u like.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
OMG W*F
Chapter 4 was so good man
And so cute
And chapter 5 was so damn emotional
I'm literally crying
Omg nooo
How can she do that
Wow
Amazingly written btw
Loved both parts
Please continue soon
I'll be waiting lol
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Both parts are awesome ...
Aliya denied zain :(
Waiting for next part
Continue fast :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Both chapters were really FANTABULOUS..,
Really well written HAANIA...
I loved it...zain's b'day surprised for ALIYA,zain confessing Aliya rejecting...
Cont soon...

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