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RUHANIKAA

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Posted: 10 years ago

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superb start!!👏
loved it❤️
please continue soon..😊

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haania

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Thank u every one 4 your lovely comments.i want to update both my chapters today but my fingers are paining alot due to keep trending from morning...will update tomorrow 4 sure

And will pm u all who like or comment.

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RUHANIKAA

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: butterfly20
Thank u every one 4 your lovely comments.i want to update both my chapters today but my fingers are paining alot due to keep trending from morning...will update tomorrow 4 sure
And will pm u all who like or comment.

aww..take your time dear..we will wait😊..same here trending karke halat buri hogai he fir bhi top 10 me nhi pohoche.😭.

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haania

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

aww..take your time dear..we will wait😊..same here trending karke halat buri hogai he fir bhi top 10 me nhi pohoche.😭.

Offcourse dear same dissoppointment here...but we tried our best atleast no eating no drinking...just trending..😭😭😭

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haania

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Posted: 10 years ago

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CHAPTER 2(INTRODUCTION)

zain come home.every one welcomed him a grand welcome every one is so happy seeing him after all he return after 5 years.
every one asking him questions surayya about his health,shazia about his girlfriends which he answer in frown and she laugh loudly and fahad about his activities .childrens are roaming around him.he gives everyone their gifts which he bought 4 them
every one thanked him and he thanked them that they liked it.
surayya:acha ab bht baten ho gaen hn.ab araam krny do mery bachy ko.chalo beta apny room main ja kr araam kr lo.
(zain also waiting for that moment bcuz it's a long journey 4rm london to india.he went towards his room and find it clean but with all boyish things.big posters of salman khan on each and every wall. black shinyguitar is placing at the corner of room.ans his all sport stuff can be visiblaly seen through glass of his sports cupboard.he look at his room and smile thinking about his old days.but now he is genious,decent and responsible guy not some silly school boy.he want to change his room right now according to his choice but he was so tired so he cancell the program till tomorrow.with in no time he find himswlf peacefully sleeping on his medium sized bed bcuz it suits his room size.
he saw aliya in his dream wearing the same suit in which he saw her coming towards him smiling.he smile and hold her hand but suddenely his phone rang)
zain:sh*t...where is she...oh no i was dreaming.she rub his eyes again to face reality and pick up the phone.it's kartaar who is inviting him to him.he rejects and again sleep)
...NEXT DAY...
aliya's phone rang.she saw shazia's name flashing on screen she pick up the call.
aliya:assalamualikum aapi.
shazia:walikumussalam.
aliya:kaisi hain:
shazia:main theek hun.aliya bachy aaj tution nhn aa saken gy wo kia hai na main mom k sath market ai hui hun.fahad or pappa office gay hn to unhn koi drop krny wala nhn h.
aliya:bhabhi next week un final exams hn.itni si baat k lye m sary saal ki mehnat kaisy zaaya hony dun.
shazia:acha to phir main mom ko chor kr wapas aa jati hun.un sy kehti hun k wo khud hi shopping kr len.
aliya:nhn aapi aap pareshan mat hon.main ...main khud aa jati hun.
shazia:but aliya...
aliya:ohoo bhabhi.it's oky.
shazia:ok thek h.chand khala hain bachon k pas tum seedy bachon k room m hi chaly jana wo wahin hon gy.first floor pr h un ka room.
aliya:aesy kaisy chali jaun.
shazia:ary bachy hn na.tum un k room m hi chali jaana seedhy.
aliya:ok aapi.ALLAHAFIZ.
shazia:ALLAHAFIZ.
(aliya had seen barkat villa while dropping ayat for doing studies with barkat but she never went inside.she reches barkat villa she parks her car and enter inside hasitately.she saw here and there no a single creature could be found)
aliya to herself:kaisa ghar h koi nazar hi ni aa ra.sab apny apny rooms main hun gy.koi din dahary in k ghar ghuss ay inhnkia pata chaly ga.
(she saw chand khala coming from kitchen wiping her hands.)
aliya:you must be chand khala????
chand khala:han...pr tumhn kaisy pata(smiling)
aliya:mjhy shazia aapi ny btaya..main aliya hun saif sana or arub ki tution teacher.wo teenon kahan hn.
chand khala:wo sana or arub garden m khel ri hn.saif uper apny room m hoga.tm jao na main un donon ko wahin bhejti hun.
aliya:saif ka room alag h???shazia bhabhi ny to mjhy nhn btaya.
chand khala:han ab bachy bary ho ry hn na to bhai ny kaha k saif k lye alag room hona chahye.tum jao na uss ka room bhi daikh lena.
aliya:(smiling)g thek h.
(aliya went upstairs looking in rooms to find saif ones.suddenly she saw one room plasterd with salman khan poters and all sports stuff.gutar and trade mill aside.)
aliya:lagta h ye hi saif ka room h.wow cool.but saif kahan h.(she heard water falling voices from washroom.so she sat here keep waiting for saif but he was now a where.she starts visiting room)
suddenely she heard door opening voice and turn around to look someone 3 time taller than saif.she got confused looking at the man standing infront of her in red t-shirt and jeans.looking as handsome as always.)
zain just keep staring at her like he is watching her for the first and last time in his life.
zain monuloge:kia ho gya h mjhy.jb sy isy dekha h har jaga dikhny lagi h.prhly to soty huy dikhay deti thi par ab to jaagty huy bhi dikahi dy rahi h.ALLAH help me.
aliya monolouge:ALLAH ye to wahi hollywood star h.but ye saif k room m kia kr ra h.???
aliya:(stammered)wo...wo...main saif ka wait kr ri thi.
zain himself:ary buddhu ye khwab ni haqeeqat h(zain smile) saif apny room m hoga.ye mera room h.
aliya:(look around in amusement )ye...ye aap ka room h????
zain:(understand why she said that)...yes...but ye setting 5 saal purani h.i need to renowate it.
aliya:ooh i see.(little smile)
zain:aye main ap ko saif k room tak ly chalta hun.
aliya:sure.
they went towards saif's room and find him playing game.
zain:saif...look who came.
saif:(shout)miss barbie doll.(comes running and hugs her legs)
aliya:so my little prince was playing games???
saif:yes...chachu u both are amzing kal aap ny hamen surprise dia or aaj miss barbie doll ny.
aliya:well...surprise abhi dia nhn h.abhi doon gi.open your books i m here to teach u kiddo not visit u ok????
saif:what????mjhy laga aap hamen miss kr ri thn.
aliya:han baba miss kr ri thi issi lye to ai hun.now go and call them two also.
(saif smile and went to call his sisters)
zain and aliya was standing at the door.aliya look at him and smile.
zain:ooh sorry us din bhi hmara kuch adhora sa introduction hua...i m zain.zain usman abdullah.
aliya:i m aliya...aliya meer khan.
zain:aap bachon ko parhaye main chalta hun.(and they both smile at each other and then zain leave)

Edited by butterfly20 - 10 years ago

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zayalove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

Aliya n saif were too.cute
Loved miss barbie doll
Very nyc chapter
Update this n your other story sooon .n plzz try n pm me

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haania

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

CHAPTER 3(MISSION PROPOSE)

aliya start teaching kids.zain did not come again but actually he is staring at aliya from window when he pass from saif's room purposly.zain can't understand why he is so attracted towards her.
zain himself:q isy baar baar dekhny ko dil chah ra h???q is sy bat krny ko dil chah ra h???halan ky m isy achi tarah jantabhi nhn hun phir bhi dil kr ra h k ye mery aas pas rahy.mjy kia hota ja ra h???main to apny doston ka mazak urata tha jb wo kisi larki ki tareef m zameen asman aik kr dety thy pr aaj khud aesa krny ko dil chah ra h.(he hold his head)kahin main pagal to nhn ho gya.itny arsy bad itna sary log dekhy hn to shayad khushi hazam ni ho ri ri.ni ni i will avoid.
(and then he leave...after sometime aliya finished teaching.shzia and surraya did not returned till now.aliya informed shazia that she had done with her teaching and now she is leaving.zain heard that from window.bcuz after scolding hmself he unkwoingly again came to window to do his mission staring...aliya came out from room and start leaving)
zain:can i drop u???(exited)
(aliya turn around and scrunch her brows.)
aliya:no thanks main chali jaun gi.
zain:akely???
aliya:yes...main akely hi ai thi.in my car.(raise her brow.)
zain:ooh...(embarass)so u can drive yah????
aliya:ya.i like to do my works on my own.i don't like irritating my parents 4 small things.
zain:good.i like that...(lost in her eyes)
aliya:what????u like what.(confused)
zain:(come to his senses)...i... i mean every one should be like that.it's nice habit.
aliya:thanks by.
zain:i m coming with u.(he spat)
aliya:where????(shocked)
zain:till your car.
aliya:why...no need 4 that.
zain:you are our guest.so i m here only to respect my guest.
aliya:ooh is ki zaroorat ni h.
zain:q nhn bilkul h.
aliya:ohhhky.
(aliya walked zain follow her.)
aliya to herself:( looking at him wth the corner of her eyes.):isy dekh kr to ni lagta k london sy aya h.kaisa ajeeb behave kr ra h)
zain himself:ye kaisy silly questions puch ra h uss sy.usy pakka pata chal gya hoga k tu pagal h
(aliya sat in her car and start it and wave good bye to zain and drove to her home.while zain just waving hand after her car even disappeared)
zain kisy bye kr ry ho????
(a voice came.he turn back embarassed it was shazia)
zain:kuch ni bhabhi...wo...hath m dard ho ra tha ...tooo...exercise...exercise kr ra tha.
(shazia did not convinced and went inside giving him confused look)
zain:ab to ahista aista sab ko pata chal jay ga k main pagal ho gya hun.before situation get worst iss ka kuch karna pary ga.and he went to his room.he enter his room and remembered aliya words and smile...
zain:ab main uss ka soch kr bhi smile krny laga hun...(slap himself lightly)...concentrate on buiseness zain...not on girls...but...london m bhi to hazaar larkian thn un m sy kai to mery lye jaan deny k lye hazir thn pr is aliya meer khan ny to jaisy mujh pr jadu kr dia h.
(looking at mirror.questioning himself and answering also.)no zain it's not fair.na jaan na pehchan.wo kon?kahan rehti h??ooh wo to pata h...any ways.us ki adat?us ki zindagi ki sari details jany baghair main usy itna pasnd kaisy kr sakta hun???wait main usy pasand karny laga hun????offcourse krny laga hun...urghhh...kia ho gya h mjhy???(hide his face in pellow in confusion)
...
AFTER ONE MONTH.

one month passed like that.zain unkwoingly attracted towards aliya.he leave no chance to stare at her.to talk to her that's why he made himself kids driver just to meet his angel.his huge crush or may be something more he don't know.
zain now understand that it's more than something and it's love yes it's love...he love her may be love at first site but it took time to understand to him that it's love...the way he cares 4 her the way he feel happiness looking her happy and sad looking her sad...and he knows he like him also but she knows she love him or not.bcuz she did'nt bother when he keep asking her useless questions just to talk her.she smile shyly when he stare at her she did'nt glare at him like she glare at zeeshan when he once stare at her.

it's aliya's birthday today zain planned a surprise party with tha help of kids...they plan it in a resturant bcuz this is his snd childrens secret no one involved from home bcuz if they knew he is after a girl they will marry him and he don't want to marry her without her wish.

a car stops infront of aliya's house.a bel rang and she opened the door.and there he was standing worried.
aliya:hi...kia hua sab khairiat to h na???bachy kahan hn???
zain:wo aliya...bachy nhn ay.
aliya:what do u mean nhn ay???
zain:saif seerion sy gir gya h or usski tang m fracture aa gya h so...
aliya:ALLAH...to...to mjhy phone kr dety main aa jati.
zain:tumhn hi to leny aya hun.
aliya:kia???
zain:han saif hospital main h or tmhn yad kr ra h .
aliya:ok...tm 2 min ruko main abhi ai.(and she went inside)
zain:mission successful...(smirk)

actually i like rocket's pagal pan for aliya but it was'nt a good thing bcuz she was someones wife so i made zain pagal dewaana after her in the story...heheheh...i hope u all don't mind my uselss choice.😛

and when it's SS so did'nt wrote each and every scene briefly like ff just trying to coming to the point...sorry 4 the shortage of scenes...😉
😆

Edited by butterfly20 - 10 years ago

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haania

@butterfly20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: zayalove
Aliya n saif were too.cute
Loved miss barbie doll
Very nyc chapter
Update this n your other story sooon .n plzz try n pm me

thank you soo much dear...
yes i m updating my other chpter...will pm u.
thanks 4 liking...and commenting.