ZAYA SS*kaisy mjhy tum mil gain PG11&12COMPLETE 6thDEC

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Character sketch
ALIYA MEER KHAN:22 years beautiful and nice natured girl.
AYAT GHULAM HAIDER:Aliya's sister.
MEER KHAN:aliya's father.he adopted aliya bcuz he had no kids.
GHULAM HAIDER:Aliya's real father.
SHABANA HAIDER:aliya's real mum.

ZAIN USMAN ABDULLAH:youngest son of usman abdullah and young brother of fahad abdullah.in london returning in few days to joine his father buisness ...serious,decent,not flirt...but decent.

Meer khan and ghulam both are brothers.meer khan had no kids so when ayat born then aliya spent more time with meer khan's wife and this bond turn into strong relation that aliya start living with them.and think that thay are their parents.when she got elder they inform her about all but she remain with meer khan and her wife bcuz they took care of her from her childhood.she use meer khan's name with hers.

ALIYA is sana saif and aroob's science teacher bcuz that was the toughest subject 4 them.barkat and ayat are friends so ayat convinced her and shazia also so much request her to teach her children.

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that fuzool sa idea came in my mind...will hunt you tomorrow with my torture...till then take care...and be ready for my toture tomorrow...



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter:1
Saif sana aroob aap ko abhi tak koi leny q nhn aya.tution time to over ho gya h na.
A sweet voice touched to the childrens ears which was non other than their beloved teacher aliya.

Sana:i don't know teacher.mom ny kaha tha k aaj driver late ay ga.aaj hmary chachu aa ry hn na.to driver unhn pick krny gya h.
Aliya:ooh koi bat ni.we will wait ok???aap log bore to ni ho ry.teacher ko kaam krna h na(she said cutely)
Aroob:teacher teacher kitna acha hota agar ham bhi sab k sath chachu ko welcome krty.
Aliya:awww don't worry baby.main aap ki mom ko phone krti hun k wo kisi or ko bhej den.ok???
Kids:yayyy...(clapping)
Aliya:ssshhh...mom araam kr ri hn
(Aliya call to shazia she pick up the phone)
Aliya:hellow shazia aapi.
Shazia:han aliya kaisi ho???
Aliya:main then hun.
Shazia:wo driver aaj late ay ga.tm plz inhn thori dair or bardasht kr lo.(laugh)
Aliya:(laugh)main to bardasht kr lun gi pr in sy jo bardasht ni ho ra.keh ry hn k hmen bhi chachu ko welcome krna h.
Shazia:toba h yeh or inku chachu.
Ok main driver sy kehti hun k airport sy wapsi m rasty m hi inhn pick kr ly.inhn ready rakhna ok???
Aliya:ok???
Shazia:ALLAHafiz.
Aliya:khuda hafiz.
(Aliya cut the call)
Kids:kia kaha mom ny???
Aliya:surprise...(huge smile)aap ky driver aap ko leny aa ry hn so ready...keep your books in bag
Hurry up...wear your shoes.hang your bag.
(Aliya make kids ready and come on tarrace to hear the horn which she knows well and then allow the kids to go out who are playing in her house garden.)
Suddenely a car stop infront of the house and a tall ,handsome guy came out from back seat wearing sun glasses and look here and there aliya is watching him.she recognise the car but there was'nt a driver.)
Aliya to herself:ye car to shazia aapi ki h but driver kahan h???or upper sy ye hollywood star...oh GOD what am i saying???ok.whatever...ho sakta h koi or ho.aik tarah ki hazaar cars hoti hn.lekin ye mery ghar k samny q ruki????.suddenly she saw him talking on phone.and then he rang the bell)
Aliya:ye mery ghar ki bell q baja ra h.
(She hurridly run downstair and ask from door whole)
Aliya:kon????
Guy:zain abdullah.
Aliya:kon zain abdullah.
Zain:sana saif or aroob ko leny aya hun.
Aliya:aap hain kon???main bachon ko aesy nhn bhej sakti.
Zain like her voice so much so sweet so calm that he want to hear more and he keep questioning.
Zain:aap unhn bahar bhej den wo khud pehchan len gy mjhy.
Aliya:no plZzz...tell me aap unhn q leny ay hn.or mjhy un k ghar sy koi information ni h aap k bary m.
Zain now getting irritated.so he shout.
Zain:saif...sanaaa...arooob.
(Kids who are playing near by hear the familier voice and run towards the door shoutinh chachuuu.aliya got shocked watching sudden happiness on their faces.they opened the door and three of thm hugged his legs.he bent down reach their hieghts and hug them)
Zain:ghar chalen
Kids:yesss(shouted)
(Kids got into the car.zain got up wearing his glasses and froze.there she was standing puzzled.in sky blue suit and pajama with her curly hair.zain got mesmarised by her beauty.he is wearing glasses so she can't caught him staring at her.)
Saif:chachu chaliye na...(saif's voice broke zain's thought)
Zain:y...ya...coming.
(Kids bid good bye to aliya ny waving hands from back seat...aliya also wave them smiling..zain thanking to the person who invent sunglasses so the person infront of them can't see them staring at her.and they leave)

First part khtm hogya...i know bht bura tha zyada tang ni karun gi jaldi hi khatam kr dun gi...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plzz continue and PM me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Areey bahut accha part tha
Really good
Continue soon plz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvAaliyah

Plzz continue and PM me


Thank you so much for liking...and yes i will pm u when i will update...will update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anaghazaya

Areey bahut accha part tha

Really good
Continue soon plz


Am glad u like it...will continue soon.
thanks 4 appreciating and liking.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was really awesome.
Continue soon.
Nd plz do pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was awesome...
Loved it..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome concept and chapter...loved it...cont soon...
And YA pm me...if you don't mind..I have to read your previous work as well...sorry I will UNRES it soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hii..
Amazing concept ...
Aliya as tution teacher ... Wow
Continue next part soon :)

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