zaya ff koi fariyaad (thread 2)- Last Chap nd Epilogue, pg 30. Dec2015

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shaalivirman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

I know its been a long tym i have commented or liked in this FF!!

but caught up with all updatesss...eeekkksss !!

Im loving the story line a lot :O

and and and a biggy walaaa CONGO fr second thread party tym lallalala :D

waiting fr ur next update :D

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Nazzz16

@Nazzz16

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Amazing part !!
Pls get it till 50 chapters atleast ...
N show zaya romance n family scenes also :)
N pls get dat jonathon out sooon
Continue soon !!

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Anagha

@Ana_rockz

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Amazing di

Totally loved it

I really like how d story is going n how u are portraying d characters

Really really awesome chapter.

Will be waiting till whenever u update next

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zaya-lover20

@zaya-lover20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Amazing like always :) usman to chupa rustm nikla ke knew the truth.. Keep wirting...

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kunakshafan26

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

wow it was again lovely!!
but phir se break oh noo 😭
its very difficult to survive without the next parts

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zaya.harshika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Amazing update!

Lovely..

I hate jon...pls kick him out ASAP

Break again!!! Will be waiting for the update

Love your ff

Edited by zaya.harshika - 10 years ago

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shruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

hey lara im shruthi from bangalore... i hav been reading ur chapters u r such an awesome writer... ur writing make me imagine as if the story is taking place in front of me... such an amazing writer u r... i want ur story to be published seriously... i want ur story "koi fariyaad" to be made to a daily soap on harshika only... wow... kash beintehaa would take ur story...ur writing on zaya meet up after seperation is shown awesome... i so wished our bi would have been picturised like this...

luv u...keep writing...❤️

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katmaan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Gosh lara I have commented earlier... But frankly I dont get some much but I do read all of them...you know the best thing I like about your writing everything sets so perfect the way kids slept with zain aaloya starred the kiss the dance...the coffee with ayaan usman wanting daughter in law...hope he gets aaliya soon