zaya ff koi fariyaad (thread 2)- Last Chap nd Epilogue, pg 30. Dec2015 - Page 2

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kunakshafan26 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
awwwieee sooo cute 😳
loved it all the parts except jon🤢
what the hell he wants from aaliya nd i think in this chappy u kept it a suspense that aaliya cleared everything to jon or not i like it 👍🏼
well zain is always awesome nd the kids saw them haww 😳
eagerly waiting for the next one
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
What should I say Lara...
It was really awesome...
Sammy is so concerned about his sister ..
Loved it a lot...
Rick was really sweet and that little packet of boom "Steve"...
Enjoyed the scene of food fighting ...
It made me remember water fighting that I had in my class...
Ikr... Jon...
What's the problem with him...
I wanna thrash him...
How he dare to switch off her phone...
Who has given the right to him?
Loved Jealous zain a lot...
Zain is a good father...
Mr.Edward should have deserved more from zain...
The way Sammy blushed was so cute...
I just wanted to pull out his cheeks...
Twins were on the safe side...
Zain prefered better to keep quite...lol...that every husband should be...
Sarah and aliya teasing Sammy... he he
So Sarah saw them kissing each other...
Hahaha...
What an embarrassing moment it might be for zain and aliya...
Continue soon...
Thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Hey, im kind of a silent reader of your story, although i have commented once before on your previous thread, a while back! :) I absolutely love this story, I have been following it diligently and get excited everytime i see you've posted a new chapter. You are an amazing writer and the progress you have made in this story, the way you have gradually developed characters as well as the different relationships, esp Zain And Aliya's, is just amazing!
This chapter was no less! I had a huge grin on my face throughout, the kids are too cute and that last part must have been so embarrassing for them, their kids saw them kissing!

You write romantic scenes really well, i absolutely loved your last chapter (chap30), would love to see more romance between Zain and Aliya :D

I hate Jon, but I am sure eventually Zain will take good care of him and save Aliya from anything bad Jon might be planning on doing!

Looking forward to the next update! :)
Edited by anku94 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
And yes congratulations for your new thread..
Keep writing such beautiful stories...
And yes pls continue forever yours...
Dying to read it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Nice update.
Congratz for d new thread
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Amazing part !!
Pls unite zaya soon n show sum romantic moments between them..
N just kill that jonathon ..
Pls unite them soon ..
N continue soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
SUPERB update!!!
Loved it...
N Sarah's dialog:
Yes mommy... just like daddy and you kissed at the night of ayaan uncle's birthday party... remember ?? "

Loved it so so much

Pls continue ASAP

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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
It was really nyc lovely cute chapter Nd congrats for ur second thread
Plzz updare the nxt soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
O my god i have no words seriously its amazing i am in love with your story sarah and sammy are soo cute and dialouges are awesommee too.. do continuee soon very soonn me waiting its just too good.. And yes one more thing i comment like first time after 31 chap as i cant stop myself for appreciating you.. Its really love.. :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Omg omg so sweet of you
Thanks yaar
What to say now
Ur update made me speechless
Oh god
This story is tremendous
Iam falling in love with this story
Incredible yaar
Each and everything soo perfectly penned down
Zain aliya children (soo adorable together)
Congrats for new thread
Fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous fabulous
It's just like a show
Iam imagining the whole scenario of the update whilst reading it

Bang on lara
Thanks for such an amazing update /concept, story
Love you friend
U r so sweet

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