Bleeding Blue - A OneShot - Page 4

Originally posted by: bangalores

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that is all i can say now 😆

Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

Wow. That was just beautiful!

You know you're an amazing writer when you can get your reader to feel exactly what your character is going through. And I'll tell ya that I could feel all of Zain's feelings! It was really, really beautifully written!

Keep these wonderful pieces of writing coming! You're doing a fantabulous job!

Originally posted by: MsfairyCindreLa

Res.. wil read in a while
Read d last shayari, it's awesome. Am thinkng of churaoing ur shayari:P

Originally posted by: babydolll

bravo

beautiful os

please if possible write the next part too

as in how they met again likewise

amazing

loved aviz n pics

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

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Originally posted by: -Orchid-

Amazing Os Aash👏

Originally posted by: -KitKit-

ouuuF amazing post..
I literally luvd it..
the way u added picz, Shayari n *blue factor*
I truely luvd it...
amazing 🤗

Originally posted by: -Spriha-

Wow...wow...just wow!😊

Loved each and every emotion which Zain went through and the perfect way in which u hav described it...just amazing!

Plz continue the OS...would really like to what happens next!!

*Applauds*👏

Originally posted by: SunShine_A

Shot was beautiful would surely be a understatement to describe this piece of writing but certainly no other word would do more justice. I'm totally in awe after reading this.

Thanku 😃 i am humbled😳

I had seen topic quite many times but as you said Zaya epis were such a bliss that no other thought occurred except discussing episode.

i knew that😆 hence was hesitant to post it and spoil ppls euphoria🤔

I'm spell bounded with your version of the track. When spoiler had come I had wished or thought of further commencement on same lines as your writing but seeing episode I was contented as it appeared very logical too and into the story but this piece of work is mesmerizing.

i agree with u. had we got a small speartion n then Bhopal track...i wud have loved it as well. But then Zain admitting his feelings, realising his moms hands in the happenings was also well done, so no complains.😃 basically .. show me zaya n i am happy😆 orr maybe zain in his red chaddis😆

Feelings are gorgeously depicted by you. Range of emotions, inner turmoil and the hollowness of his life over departure of one person who was nthng till few days back but looks everything now. Happiness he had been wanting from long looks like a punishment now, a penalty for not giving her what she always deserved. You hv weaved through the words, it was simpler to visualise Zain going through the emotions and fighting fiercely to get a compose but failing miserably.

Thanku .. but again i wud say that HA is a fab actor and can emote so well. In teh few minutes it took zain to relaise all this, Harshad put Zain through all these emotions👏 spl mention to teh director too.😃😃😃

I liked your idea of colour series, shall look forward to it. And if there's a continuation for this then.I would want to see Aaliya's side too.

Colors series was a thought. can u believe.. my next coloyr was Yellow... based on a Zaya picnic type date... and lo behold.. we alreeady got that!!! so i am stuck for new inspiration now🥱

Superb !!!!