Bleeding Blue - A OneShot - Page 6

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

bhartii ki bachhii😆😆

No Rudra banna talks here😉

thank u waise 🤗

u shud read my writings on maaneet😆

Originally posted by: -Ammie-

i just got around to reading this and let me tell you i absolutely regret not coming across this beautiful piece of writing before!

However, better late than never!😆

Hahaha..😆

i have read your other works on Zaya and oh boy, are you talented or wat!?

i absolutely love the way you write...you weave the story together so creatively that i can see it all happening before my eyes!

Thank u 😳😳😳

i love how you have incorporated the color blue into this short story...its quite witty and intriguing. Also it sets out the mood quite well!

Glad to felt i could justify my theme 😃

You have done such a fantastic job at picking up on Zain's character traits and his harmartia, thus his character has been defined so aptly in this story of yours! Beautiful is the word...i can't even imagine stringing two sentences together with such beauty and depth, like you have done in your short story!

I am sure u could if u tried.. and zaya is sooo inspirational😊 Zain is a charecter which is so relatable... so its kind of easy to read him but he can always manage to surprise us with that extra step ahead in his masti :))

i'm really fascinated by the color series idea...looking forward to more of your writing...🤗

Me is stuck now😆 but thanks for teh vote of confidence🤗

Originally posted by: MsfairyCindreLa

Finally read it<3
Awesome.. loved the way u wrt!!:)

Originally posted by: Deelight

nyc update.. Aaliya was truly missed..!!

Originally posted by: sindu_gurti

yes., i am going to start to read on maaneet...but why are laughing...😳

i am in rudra's lalalllaaa land..i will talk about him everywhere...loosing interst on my husband...this RUDRA is changing me...

Originally posted by: KittuPratzz

im short of words.. due to emotional turmoil... gal..

ZA 😭

i love u princess ... its so beautiful like you...

Laal or Neel?? 😃

i cant choose one...

one makes your mood up and other calms u down.. gawd..

i love the titles too 😃

Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

DAMN, DAMN, DAMN.

This was so perfect. First of all, I LOVE the color blue so the title just dragged me towards the OS.

Second of all, the way you've written it left me awestruck. The concept was so simple but the way you've written down even the smallest details is superb. <33

Thanks :))))

You've posted this in the perfect time and it didn't bring down the magic in any way.

I love this regretting wala Zain, it's so genuine. Frankly, this would have been an amazing track in the show too.

I know... They shud have shown some retrospection on Zain's part :///

The intensity is so gripping and there's not a second when I was bored. The song choice was really good too. I also like the way you've incorporated the GIFs in. It suits the OS really well.

I was just listening to the song and inspirtaion hit me :)) so credit for the OS goes to teh song😃😳

Please write more on ZaYa and if possible, do PM me. :) I would love to read your work. <3

Originally posted by: dqno1

res for vacation reading😃