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Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: -Yuks-
Lovely OS!

I was really hoping that this would happen in the show. That Zain wouldn't be able to stop Aliyah or wouldn't read the station in time, so she would go to Bhopal and he would miss hr for a few days.

Thanks Yuks 😃

All of us wanted that i guess😆 but jo mila usme mai khush hu😃

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: sindu_gurti
😃 proud of u my girl...you are such a post especially when u want to describe zain..haan.,naughty...lovely OS...Really salaash I now wanted to read ur writings on maaneet...yeah girl write on my RUDRA tooo.,please...

bhartii ki bachhii😆😆

No Rudra banna talks here😉

thank u waise 🤗

u shud read my writings on maaneet😆

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: devilaonmoon
Superb !!!!

You are such a fantastic writer my dear friend ... hawww... 😲😲😲...
I am totally awestruck after reading this os...

It was so beautifully written... I loved each line.. each word.

Zain's pain, his realisation, the flashbacks ... and finally at last
his determination.. his decision... 👏... superbly portrayed...

Loved it...

Continue asap... and the colors series... 😊😊 great idea...

thank u 🤗

see it was similar to urs...isliye i read urs late😊😊😊

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Amina

@-Ammie-

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

i just got around to reading this and let me tell you i absolutely regret not coming across this beautiful piece of writing before!

However, better late than never!😆

i have read your other works on Zaya and oh boy, are you talented or wat!?

i absolutely love the way you write...you weave the story together so creatively that i can see it all happening before my eyes!

i love how you have incorporated the color blue into this short story...its quite witty and intriguing. Also it sets out the mood quite well!

You have done such a fantastic job at picking up on Zain's character traits and his harmartia, thus his character has been defined so aptly in this story of yours! Beautiful is the word...i can't even imagine stringing two sentences together with such beauty and depth, like you have done in your short story!

i'm really fascinated by the color series idea...looking forward to more of your writing...🤗

Edited by -Ammie- - 11 years ago