Bleeding Blue - A OneShot - Page 3

just wow loved it thanks 4 d pm

Shot was beautiful would surely be a understatement to describe this piece of writing but certainly no other word would do more justice. I'm totally in awe after reading this. I had seen topic quite many times but as you said Zaya epis were such a bliss that no other thought occurred except discussing episode. I'm spell bounded with your version of the track. When spoiler had come I had wished or thought of further commencement on same lines as your writing but seeing episode I was contented as it appeared very logical too and into the story but this piece of work is mesmerizing. Feelings are gorgeously depicted by you. Range of emotions, inner turmoil and the hollowness of his life over departure of one person who was nthng till few days back but looks everything now. Happiness he had been wanting from long looks like a punishment now, a penalty for not giving her what she always deserved. You hv weaved through the words, it was simpler to visualise Zain going through the emotions and fighting fiercely to get a compose but failing miserably.

😃 proud of u my girl...you are such a post especially when u want to describe zain..haan.,naughty...lovely OS...Really salaash I now wanted to read ur writings on maaneet...yeah girl write on my RUDRA tooo.,please...

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

beautiful one.the way u write Zain inner strom of confuse and pain of losing something dear,so perfect.u would write the part two of it plz.keep writing.

Originally posted by: -WhiteGirl-

bookmarking kameeni!!

⭐️😉

Originally posted by: _innocent_

Amazingly written, it was so easy to read, everything flowed so well, I didnt feel bored at all... Everything was perfect <3 Keep them coming.😆

Originally posted by: mayur-arti.4eva

Beautifully written!

I could visualize each and every scene in my head, you have penned down everything very beautifully.

Originally posted by: aashiqua

its jst wow...i am short of words...its one of d beautiful piece of work i hav ever read here

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

awsemmm