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Posted: 11 years ago
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This sounds like an amazing story! I can't wait to read the first part :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZaYa_Beintehaa

This sounds like an amazing story! I can't wait to read the first part :)

thank you.
let us see if you still think so when I drop a future sequence in the first chapter😈

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jenny_sms

Wow nice CS cont soon and do pm me

merci

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: DonnaHarvey


merci

I no longer send PMs



and i finally see u in the forum
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: NalayakShaitaan

i finally made it here
thanks to u 😆

Mallik.. the name rings a bell
Anyways I am kinda glad that u posted it here.
since O havent seen Beintehaan till now, I will read the story like u have written it, without a couple in mind
or maybe i will give the show a try. I am told the music is fab

so, are you watching or what?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: NalayakShaitaan



and i finally see u in the forum

hola
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

Excellent CS!

I already love your style of writing and I can't wait to read more. <3
Malik reminds me of Armaan Malik 😳
Also, the main characters make it seem like a typical M&B story. ;)
Do put up the first part soon. :)

wth is m&b? I had to google and heck no! atleast I hope not. I am the kind of person who makes fun of romance novels so I will try not to write like that.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hola..so are we doning to get a Donna Paulsen approved chapeter here or its someother place..some other time for this story?


and still watching Beintehaan?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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1. not a chapter but a preview.
2. I asked first
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1 Preview: Saranghe, De Sarang
Please see the Korean to English translations in brackets.

"Saranghanda, De Sarang (I love you, my love)", she said as her lips pursed on last time around mine. I opened my eyes to her straight dark lashes staring back at me through the closed lids. Our moment wasn't long or passionate but it was enough. Our moment was cut off abruptly but she was satiated. I could feel her smiling underneath me. She was happy, exhilarated to leave me. That day, everything was stable. The way it was supposed to be. One minute the sky wasn't falling. However, in the very next blink, I saw the life zapped out of her. There in my arms stood a corpse, a jelly, a thing that once was.

"Saranghe, De Sarang (I love you, my love)", she said when we first crossed paths twenty years ago. Today, she left me all alone in the same place as the clock struck nine.

"Saranghanda, De Sarang (I love you, my love)", her words rung in my head.

"Saranghe. Saranghe. Saranghe". (I love you. I love you. I love you).

Each letter filled the vacuum in the room.

"De ara (I know)", I said as I let her slip out of my hands. Perhaps she knew I would never stay, not then, not now.

Edited by DonnaHarvey - 11 years ago

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