SS: Taming the Heiress Ch1 pg3 (Saranghe, De Sarang)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This story is currently homeless aka without a forum. I didn't write it with a couple in mind but after watching Beintehaan, I feel that it might fit in here. The reason being it is a rich boy, poor girl reverse. The girl is rich and the boy was once poor but is now rich. You will see what I mean in the character sketch. Let me know if you like it :)

Character Sketch

The Heiress

The notorious elder daughter of the Malik conglomerate is ruthless creature feared for crushing hearts and people alike. The legend that beauty is only skin deep precedes her presence. As soon as she steps off her bed in the morning, many fates are born and crushed. People are fired at the flick of a hand, suitors rejected with a wink. There has yet to be a man who isn't mesmerized by her and no woman who isn't a little jealous of her fortune. With beauty, brains, and riches plentiful, you might view her life as the picture perfect example of happiness. But inside her manor, the young mistress holds a secret so dark that she dare not reveal it even to herself.

The Hunter

Zain Abdullah is the living example of a rags-to-riches story. He has earned every penny of the multi-million dollar empire in his name today with his own blood, sweat, and tears. He is an honorable, respectful, and kind man who does unto others as he would have them do to him. From soul crushing poverty to a wealth of bounty, he's seen it all. And if his experience has taught him nothing else, he's learned to judge people based on their merit. The only thing that stirs his calm temper to a roaring storm is privileged rich kids who have known no life other than the one handed to them on a silver platter. Through a series of fated events, his life gets intertwined with one such spoiled rotten heiress and he pledges to teach her a lesson. She awakes in him the forgotten vengefulness against the unfairness of this world.

Minor Characters

Sikander Malik

Sikander in name only, this rich brat is a man-child living in the perpetual shadow of his genius older sister. A high school dropout, who spends most nights hidden under the skirts of hired consorts, he is envious of the heiress' success and always looking to put a damper in her plans. Sikander is strangely aware of his stupidity but will go to the ends of the earth to hide his real act.

Rohail Malik

A retired business tycoon and a dotting father in the world's view, this man is a god on earth for all his people. For anyone who has had the good luck of meeting with the Malik behind all Maliks, he will swear on the words "Rohail Malik can do no wrong".

Zainab Malik

A veteran politician of her time, Zainab ji is now retired and lives a quiet life as the woman behind two generations of the Maliks' success. Though no longer a public figure, Zainab has built this empire from the ground up. The bricks maybe laid by her husband but Zainab has plastered the stolen money of taxpayers, labour of vulnerable children and even the blood of innocent people to secure a bright future for her family. On the surface she seems a woman living in regret of her past mistakes but only her heart knows that she would do it all over again. Even if it meant more bloodshed, more chaos, and waging war against the unarmed, she would do it with her own hands for the happiness of her son.

Please leave a comment on how you like the story and whether or not it fits in this forum. Hit the like button while you're at it. Thanks :)

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-Minion- thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cs look intersting.waiting for first part.
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Sounds interesting
waiting to read the first part 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting...update the next part soon please...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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i finally made it here
thanks to u 😆

Mallik.. the name rings a bell
Anyways I am kinda glad that u posted it here.
since O havent seen Beintehaan till now, I will read the story like u have written it, without a couple in mind
or maybe i will give the show a try. I am told the music is fab
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Excellent CS!
I already love your style of writing and I can't wait to read more. <3
Malik reminds me of Armaan Malik 😳
Also, the main characters make it seem like a typical M&B story. ;)
Do put up the first part soon. :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waiting for part 1
u shifted from mb forum kya?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ExclusiveChic

waiting for part 1

u shifted from mb forum kya?

I am not quite sure where I belong anymore. I am in no rush to publish my stories. In fact, I won't if I don't get a certain amount of response. I think limiting myself is the best way to go about my forum life at this stage. So I am just going to stick where I am wanted and focus on other things instead. I think this is a decent show but if it doesn't work out with this forum and its people then I am fine as well. There are so many things to be thankful for. So let us see if this turns out to be an extended stay or another goodbye.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: NalayakShaitaan

i finally made it here
thanks to u 😆

Mallik.. the name rings a bell
Anyways I am kinda glad that u posted it here.
since O havent seen Beintehaan till now, I will read the story like u have written it, without a couple in mind
or maybe i will give the show a try. I am told the music is fab

yup. couldn't figure out the girl's last name so I used malik. wasn't going to use her submissive momma in my story anyway so might as well have a whole other family.
Thank you. I don't necessarily identify with the OTP quotient of this show just yet. it might end up being run of the mill very soon. we'll see.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow nice CS cont soon and do pm me

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