’Somewhere’ - My Stream of Thoughts; UPD - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago
Ammu, this was so beautiful! 😍

Really really awesome part!
I'm happy that Divya feels right with Sagar now! 😛 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
that was AMAZING and sooooooooooooo cute..omg i loved it...but one problem....TOOO SHORT 😡 lol please continue soon 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Loved it Ammu!!! 👏 👏 👏 That was totally fabulous! 😳

Yay! she grabbed his hand? I'm definitely liking this even more now! 😉 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hayeeeee! she entwined her hand with his ☺️ yipee! she's taking him with her.... hehehe... but no fair... yeh dil maange more 😆 no probs... take your time and I hope your bheja ( 😆 ) cooperates with you 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG I LOVED THAT SHORT PART AMMU😃 😃 😃
IT WAS AWESOME HUN 😃
PLEZ PLEZ PLEZ CONTINUE SOON 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thank you so much again everyone...

I apologise for not updating, schoolwork has been piling up...

I'm not much in the mood to write, but I wanted to put something here since it's been sometime.. in case you all didnt know, Germany lost the Euro Cup Final, so upset about that. 😳 But i'll be oky definitely, later..

Maybe writing will help my get my mood off of this for sometime :) again, thanks for all the lovely comments...!
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Posted: 17 years ago
yay!!! cant wait for ur update ammu 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago

His face still puzzled, Sagar continued to stare at her confusedly, noticing the sudden change in her mood. "But... where are you going?"

Divya laughed, her smile widening even more; she lifted her hand ever-so slightly, and grabbed his hand hesitantly... her fingers slowly becoming entwined with his, she finally allowed herself to hold his hand tightly; this time, it felt right.

"What do you mean, where am I going... you're coming with me."

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Divya began to walk, staying slightly ahead of Sagar, pulling him towards their new destination. She turned her head slightly to look at him, and saw his eyes travelling over to peer at their interlocked fingers. Turning her head back around to look forward, Divya suddenly felt a tight pull on her hand; they stopped to a standstill.

"Divya."

She let go of his hand slowly, pulling away her fingers from his, and turned around fully to look at him.

He stared at her wordlessly, his eyes full of concern and that same confusion.

She scoffed at his face, laughing slightly. "Kya?"

Sagar grit his teeth momentarily, annoyance starting to shadow his face. "Divya..."

Her laughing stopped; she shrugged slightly, staring back at him.

"Kya kar rahe hain hum?"

"I told you, didn't I --"

"Told me what? Ke main tumhare saath jaa raha hoon? Lekhin kahaan pe?" Sagar stopped himself quickly, before his pent up irritation flowed freely. He paused. "And what's with this sudden mood change?"

Divya crinkled her eyebrows, unable to register what he had just asked her. "Mood change ka matlab...?"

"Before, itni khush aur open nahin thi mere saath, and now suddenly, you want to grab my hand and take me somewhere..."

Divya looked down, slightly embarrassed. "I don't know if I really want to talk about it right now," she whispered, realising how awkward she suddenly felt. Whether he would understand why she said that, she was not sure... she wasn't quite ready to tell him how she felt just yet.

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Grrrr, it's frustrating me that I can't take this any faster or can't progress as much as I want to, but I have to leave, so have to stop it here... so sorry, I really don't know what I'm doing with this😛 let me get back into the writing and imagining mode... so here is this small part for now.

Little Foot thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Yippie you updated! 😛
Short but totally fabulous! Really loved it! 😳 😳

Hope you get back into the writing mode very soon. 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
that waas very cute...short and sweet, continue soon hunn

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