’Somewhere’ - My Stream of Thoughts; UPD - Page 10

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Posted: 17 years ago
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soooooooooo impatient <3 continue soon please
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Haha Ariba, I knowwwww yaar, just kidding 😛 nd thankoo!! 🤗

Meera, what was that?? Excuse moi, you are a very good writer, I must say.. aisa kabhi mat kehna oky?? 😳

Sorry everyone, wl try and update today, if not then tomorrow... got 3 exams to study for 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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this story is like none other! it's really fabulous and you give the other writers on the forum some more inspiration! 😃 if you have written anything besides this I would like to read that as well!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ole ole ole ole!

Okies no probs. Good luck on your exams. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank youuuuuuuuuuu all!! 🤗🤗

Oky, so I should be getting in the writing mode now, will be posting the next update in a bit!
Edited by ammmu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oky, nvm then, sorry, I never really got into the writing mode, after all😳 I'll promise to give something small later on today, i think ive got some of the scene imagined in my mind already... thanks!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I'm not actually a good writer, you've all hyped me too much! 😉 😆 😆

But ooo can't wait for the next part! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Me also can't wait. 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oky, so I'm really swamped with studying and homework, but I did have some time to imagine this part today, so wanted to pen it down... it's really vague I'm sure, and also very short, I just wanted to put something here, even if it didn't make any sense😛 will write more properly when my bheja isn't fried (God knows when that will be, but I'll find some time)!

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She still wouldn't be able to say exactly what it was, but at this very moment, it suddenly hit her... that Sagar's entrance in her life mattered. That at this very moment, she wouldn't want to be anywhere else, but with him.

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Sagar stared at her, his gaze fixed until he realised that she stopped talking. "Why did you stop?"

Divya smiled embarrassedly, shrugging her shoulders. "I think.... kuch zyada hi bol diya maine. Sorry..."

She got up suddenly, wanting to leave the awkward silence. Sagar grabbed her hand abruptly, a confused expression on his face.

"Wait! Kahaan jaa rahi ho tum? Hum toh abhi bhi baat kar rahe the... or, atleast, you were talking..." He laughed slightly, and hit himself in his head for saying the last part; he still held her hand tightly.

Divya freed herself from his grip and let out a heavy breath, smiling widely, taking in the air surrounding her. "Ummm... bas, mujhe kahin pe jaana hai," she said ambigiuously, now turning to Sagar, who was still sitting down.

His face still puzzled, Sagar continued to stare at her confusedly, noticing the sudden change in her mood. "But... where are you going?"

Divya laughed, her smile widening even more; she lifted her hand ever-so slightly, and grabbed his hand hesitantly... her fingers slowly becoming entwined with his, she finally allowed herself to hold his hand tightly; this time, it felt right.

"What do you mean, where am I going... you're coming with me."

Edited by ammmu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey Ammmu...i finally made the guts to comment on ur story 😳 dnt worrie i hav been reading it from the start but i did not hav the courage to comment 😊 ur updates are jus awesome i really luv the way u write its a gift from god 😳 😉 hope to see the next update soon.... 😃

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