Sagar & Vidya Song Fictions - Page 5

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wafahji...Reemzdi is defintely telling the truth, all of your amazing song fictions, are just too good!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Woowww!!! That's really good. I wouldn't be surprised if BMTD creatives stole your story. 😆 It's really good.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Song: Piyu Bole / Requested by Nancy89

Saagar played a soft tune on his guitar humming along with the music. Vidya watched curiously, sitting down next to Saagar.

*You're mine, say you're mine*

He looked at Vidya, "What do you think?"

She smiled at him not understanding a word he had just said. She shrugged then as he continued to play the tune, added her own words to his music.

*Piyu bole, Piya bole* Vidya hummed *Jaanu naa
Jiya dole, Hole hole, Kyun yeh dole, Jaanu naa*

Vidya blushed as Saagar looked at her impressed.

"Not bad, Ab yeh suno…"

*Dil ki jo baatein hain, Baatein jo dil ki hain....*

*Dil hi mein rakhna piya* Vidya chimed in.

Saagar smiled taking Vidya's hand in his, pulling her into his arms.

*Lab to na kholoon main, kholoon na lab to par*

Vidya shyly lowered her eyes.

*Aakhon se sab keh diya*

She gently placed her cheeks against his shoulders.

*Piyu bole, Piya bole, Kya yeh bole Jaanu naa
Jiya dole, Hole hole, Kyun yeh dole Jaanu naa*

Saagar twirled Vidya before pulling her into his arms again, placing his arms against her waist, as they moved in an informal waltz.

*Piyu bole, Piya bole, Kya yeh bole, Jaanu naa
Jiya dole, Hole hole, Kyon yeh dole, Jaanu naa*

Vidya smiled, and Saagar kissed her cheeks.

"Theeke abhi yeh socho agar hum yahaan se kayi door hain. You know anywhere far away."

"Far? Door?"

"Haan, Ek minute ke liye socho, you and me, sirf hum tum."

Vidya looked at Saagar, then tried to picture herself alone with Saagar somewhere far from here.

She sat by the river bank, playing with the water, when Saagar tapped her on the shoulder, asking her what she was doing.

* Ek nadi se maine poochha, Itla ke chaldi kahaan
Door tere pee ka ghar hai, Balkhaake chaldi kahaan*

She took a handful of water and splashed Saagar playfully.

*Thoda woh ghabraayi, Thoda sa sharmaayi
Ujhli yahaan se wahaan*

Saagar splashed her back making her wet as she tried to run. He grabbed her wrist, pulling her back towards him, and tickling her waist.

Vidya laughed gaily, turning around to tickle Saagar as he took both her hands in his to stop her.

*Saagar se milne ka uska jo sapna tha, Meri hi tarah piya*

Back in their room, Saagar lifted Vidya by her waist as she rested her hands against his shoulder, and swung her round.

*Jiya dole, Hole hole, Kyun yeh dole Jaanu naa
Piyu bole, Piya bole, Kya yeh bole, Jaanu naa*

Saagar smiled as Vidya blushed, before reaching to tousle his hair playfully.

*Jiya dole, Hole hole, Kyun yeh dole Jaanu naa*

Saagar put Vidya down on the bed, kneeling in front of her, resting his head in her lap.

Maine poocha ek ghata se, Itra ke chaldi kahaan
Pyaas ki bhari zameen hai, Barson bhi tarsao na*

He took Vidya's face between his palms, and kissed each cheek softly.

*Thoda woh gurraayi, Thoda sa tharraayi
Gajhri yahaan se wahaan*

He sat down next to her, draping his arms around her back as bent and kissed her shoulders.

*Preet rootha thi phir cham cham woh barsi, Teri hi tarah piya

Vidya sighed inwardly as Saagar pushed her hair away with his fingers, moving his lips to her neck.

*Piyu bole Piya bole Kya yeh bole Jaanu naa
Jiya dole Hole hole Kyun yeh dole Jaanu naa*

Saagar inhaled Vidya's soft scent, caressing her skin with his lips, as Vidya closed her eyes, giving in to her senses.

*Piyu bole Piya bole Kya yeh bole Jaanu naa
Jiya dole Hole hole Kyun yeh dole Jaanu naa
Piyu bole Piya bole…Jaanu naa*

Thanks again guys for all your sweet, kind words....Love you all..and Thanks for reading and indulging my craziness...

Edited by Wafah - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#44
Haila Wafah ji... how sweet!! 😳 😳 I could totally imagine Sagar wearing what Saif did and playing the guitar... sho shweet... love the blushing...

*sigh* it reminds me of the scene we had on Friday... the whispering... ahhh! great job as usual... dreamland again!! 😳 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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MARVELOUS!!! I love it!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#46
Wow Wafah this this was absolutely very very beautiful, the way you wrote was just perfect don't have words to describe it, I'm speechless 😳 😳 and it seemed so real!!
I could really imagine this happening...

Fabulous 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh my god!!! Wafahji!! That was simply amazing! It was so sweet and innocent yet so playful!! 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wow!! 😃 Great great job Wafah! 👏 That was awesome. I could actually imagine your story. There are soooo many songs for the Sagar and Vidya frame!

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