A Trapped Bird - Updated Part 17 + 18 - Page 4

Originally posted by: ammmu

Soni ji..!! HAILA..............!!!!! You are SO amazing, yaar..!! Sachi, it sounds so much like a novel, you are SUCH a good writer..!! 👏

This is so different than everything else... it's almost like a story, and completely different, Vidya is "Vidya SInghania", and I LOVED the part that Surily is a cook (the other cook) who calls her "madam".... yes..!!! 😆 😉

Yaar you left us in suspense... Oh God, please keep going on..!! You stopped when he said his name was Sagar oh nooooooo..!!

Hope we get to know more about their past.... it's too interesting 😉

Only thing I have to get used to is that all dialogues are not in Hindi.😉 Am so used to everything being in Hindi..!! so that's the only thing.... but the whole FF is greatttttt😃

thank you ammu! it was great pleasure making surili the cook, cause it serves her right!😡 Even in BMTD, she makes Vidya do her work, when it's Vidya's house, and Vidya's husband...

I wrote up the next part, but it's saved on my other computer, so hopefully by tonight I will be able to post it.

I was going to write the dialogues in hindi, but then thought of doing it differently and write it in English...but if you want I could write it in hindi.

Originally posted by: soni595

thank you ammu! it was great pleasure making surili the cook, cause it serves her right!😡 Even in BMTD, she makes Vidya do her work, when it's Vidya's house, and Vidya's husband...

I wrote up the next part, but it's saved on my other computer, so hopefully by tonight I will be able to post it.

I was going to write the dialogues in hindi, but then thought of doing it differently and write it in English...but if you want I could write it in hindi.

No thanks yaar..!! it was truly well-deserved.... read the last bit again and i cant wait😳😉 i knowww i am cho happy..!! wish i could see that in real life..!!😉

Oky, great..!! can't wait to see the next part... suspense is growing😛

and areyyyy it's ur choice Soni ji..!! noo problem, I dun mind at all, just have to get used to it but it still is wonderful😃 ur choice to write it in English or Hindi !😉

Wow!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing Soni, first of all thanks for clearing all the confusion.

you are just confirming my words now, I really want to ask you, have written some novels before???????? if no, then please please do. i bet all copies would immediately sell......... 😳

u have everything in ur story, suspense, romance, thriller, fantasy.......... superb!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳

btw, i m glad that u made surili a cook, but i m so fed up or irritated by her and hate her so much that i don't even want to hear her name.......... can u please keep surili out from ur fairy tale???????

i know negative characters are required in story telling, so sidura is there na????????? 😃

keep up the good work dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳

Originally posted by: CherryPrincess

Wow!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing Soni, first of all thanks for clearing all the confusion.

you are just confirming my words now, I really want to ask you, have written some novels before???????? if no, then please please do. i bet all copies would immediately sell......... 😳

u have everything in ur story, suspense, romance, thriller, fantasy.......... superb!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳

btw, i m glad that u made surili a cook, but i m so fed up or irritated by her and hate her so much that i don't even want to hear her name.......... can u please keep surili out from ur fairy tale???????

i know negative characters are required in story telling, so sidura is there na????????? 😃

keep up the good work dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳

No I haven't published a book, I'm still in college! But thank you for that wonderful compliment, and it's not a bad idea, maybe one day I will write a novel!

Don't worry sweetie, Surili was there just to let everyone know what I made her in the fan fiction😆 It's only going to focus on S-V mostly! 😳

Keep smiling...

Love

Soni

I accidently deleted the part I had written, so I'm going to have to write it all over again! I may be done with it tomorrow or Friday!

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni

Ohhh i just saw ur reply to the thread and I thought aagaya next chapter. Thts horrible it got deleted. So annoying.

Can't wait for the next one. 😃

Originally posted by: *Reemz*

Ohhh i just saw ur reply to the thread and I thought aagaya next chapter. Thts horrible it got deleted. So annoying.

Can't wait for the next one. 😃

I know it is horrible, I felt like hitting my computer!😡

Oh no koi baat nahin Soni ji..!! Hope it wasn't too long, I feel bad that you have to re-write all of it... all the best and hope to see it soon !! 😃

Oh no!!!!!!!! sometimes system creates unnecessarily problems. I know how frustating it would be!!!!!!!! 🤢 Even I have done these kind of things many times!

u r still in college!!!!!!! well, then u have options open to choose writing as one of ur careers track!!!!!! btw u deserved those comments!

Originally posted by: CherryPrincess

Oh no!!!!!!!! sometimes system creates unnecessarily problems. I know how frustating it would be!!!!!!!! 🤢 Even I have done these kind of things many times!

u r still in college!!!!!!! well, then u have options open to choose writing as one of ur careers track!!!!!! btw u deserved those comments!

yea it is really frustrating! I do indeed have options to be a writer, but what to do, my heart is set on medical school!

Anyways, I have written up part number five, and will post in a few minutes, and part six will be done in half an hour!

Keep smiling...

Love

Soni