A Trapped Bird - Updated Part 17 + 18 - Page 2

IT is good..no wait ...great...not boring..feels like I've ripped out a page from a romantic novel..great job...

Originally posted by: Wafah

IT is good..no wait ...great...not boring..feels like I've ripped out a page from a romantic novel..great job...

thanks Wafah for being kind! does it already sound romantic? if it does, then I'm glad, cause it'll make way for me add romance into it!

wow!!!!!!!!!! Amazin!!!!!!! Excellent!!!!! I lub it!!!!!!

please continue 😃

Hey Soni,

I would also agree with Wafah. It's just like reading some great novel. Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like your story, it's so different from serial! Really like a fairy tale!!!!!!!! 😳 Amazing!!!!!!!!! Please continue soon!!!!!!!!! Having thoughts to become professional writer or are you already????????? 👏

Btw, I am sorry I know ur story is not of BMTD, but I am little lost in family's introduction. "Her father-in-law and mother-in-law are Aniket and Sindoora Singhania, then there's their son, my husband, Karthik Singhania, and his lover Snigda Arora, there also resides Karthik's older sister, Mahua Singhania and her two kids, Parth and Bharat. Parth is five years old, and Bharat is nine years old. Other than that Aniket's father lives here too, Pratap Singhania"

Cast roles have entirely changed, i m getting bit confused......... 😕 Karthik, Mahua's brother? and is Karthik vidya's husband?????

very good!!! i luvved it! can i make a prediction? i predict and that vidya has an affair with sum guy named, hmm... sagar? 😉 😆
i love how you describe the scenes! i feel like im actually there!

-Gaurie

Originally posted by: Princess

wow!!!!!!!!!! Amazin!!!!!!! Excellent!!!!! I lub it!!!!!!

please continue 😃

thank you! will continue today!

Originally posted by: CherryPrincess

Hey Soni,

I would also agree with Wafah. It's just like reading some great novel. Wonderful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like your story, it's so different from serial! Really like a fairy tale!!!!!!!! 😳 Amazing!!!!!!!!! Please continue soon!!!!!!!!! Having thoughts to become professional writer or are you already????????? 👏

Btw, I am sorry I know ur story is not of BMTD, but I am little lost in family's introduction. "Her father-in-law and mother-in-law are Aniket and Sindoora Singhania, then there's their son, my husband, Karthik Singhania, and his lover Snigda Arora, there also resides Karthik's older sister, Mahua Singhania and her two kids, Parth and Bharat. Parth is five years old, and Bharat is nine years old. Other than that Aniket's father lives here too, Pratap Singhania"

Cast roles have entirely changed, i m getting bit confused......... 😕 Karthik, Mahua's brother? and is Karthik vidya's husband?????

thank you! hmm, I love fairy tales, maybe that's why I'm inspired by them! No, to clear your confusion, I'm not making the characters the same as they are in BMTD! Yes, Karthik is Vidya's husband and Mahua his sister! so sorry if I confused you!

Keep smiling...

Love

Soni

Originally posted by: Gaurie

very good!!! i luvved it! can i make a prediction? i predict and that vidya has an affair with sum guy named, hmm... sagar? 😉 😆
i love how you describe the scenes! i feel like im actually there!

-Gaurie

thank you! hmmm.. I love your prediction!😳

Keep smiling...

Love

Soni

You have mixed fantasy with reality SO WELL!! Yes there is a forbidden forest but Vidya's feelings and thoughts seem very real and human. 👏 👏 The feeling of entrapment is very well written. 👏

I can't believe I'm going to say this but I cannot wait for the affair!! 😆

Part Three - A Wild Encounter

The sounds were nearing her, and she held her breath even longer, occasionally peeping beneath the bushes...Suddenly the noises stopped, confused she tried to look through the bushes, but owww, a sharp edge of a leaf had stung her, and she shifted a bit back, causing a ruffle in the leaves...She stood up, and walked around the bushes, back to the path she was on, and wondered who it was and why the noises stopped, As she was thinking, a strong arm caught hold of both of her arms and locked them behind her...

"Where do you think you're going?" an angry, crispy voice yelled at her...She winced in pain, and managed to scream out "How dare you hold me and yell at me, let go of me.." she struggled trying to let her arms free, until he abruptly released them, and turned her around...She stared at the most intense dark brown eyes she had ever seen which seemed to have a flame burning inside of them, the guy stared back at her curiously..."Who are you and what are you doing here?" He arrogantly snapped at her...

Vidya eyes him suspiciously 'You're asking me this? I'm supposed to be asking you this, because "I" live here....She saw the same curiosity creep into his smoky eyes again "You don't live here, I live here…" Vidya could feel the temper rise in her, and for some reason she felt good about it, it was after so many months that she felt angry..."I live in the palace, and I have never seen you there, so stop lying and tell me who you are and what are you doing here?" She was stunned by his next reaction which was of amusement...He laughed cynically, amusement and arrogance twinkling in his eyes.."So you're Karthik's princess..not bad" "And what the hell do you mean by that? And how do you know Karthik?"

He then looked at her weirdly, and then picked up a stray stick and began walking towards his horse...Vidya fumed even more at him not answering her properly "I asked who you were…" He looked back at her, something about that look gave her a deadly feeling, like he was threatening her to back off however he stiffly said "It's none of your business Mrs. Vidya Singhania." With that, he climbed up on his horse and rode off, disappearing into the trees…Vidya was still stunned with this strange meeting, and wondered who the man was, and how he knew her name...She noticed the sun fading away, and decided to go back, in case anyone noticed she wasn't there, not that was likely, but still it was after all getting dark...

All throughout her walk back to the palace, her thoughts were filled with the entry of this mysterious person...She slipped in through the back door, and went up the stairs that were in the corner, hidden from the living room, which no one ever used...she went to her room and plopped onto her bed, exhausted by the day's happenings, she still couldn't believe she spent the entire day walking in the forest, and having not spotted the pond, maybe tomorrow she would go back and try again...for once in six months, she was going to sleep as soon as she shut her eyes, she didn't have to stare at the ceiling, listen to the leaves rustling or watch the shadows of the moon...

He lit up his fire place, and sat in his favorite rocking chair...he kept rocking back and forth, thinking about Vidya that he met for the first time today…He had his golden chance to teach Karthik a lesson, but he still couldn't figure out how he would put his plan in action...and he was dead sure from the looks of it, that a girl like her would not fall for his trap, but he could try..only if she came once more to the forest would it work...His phone began vibrating on his table, and he could clearly see a name flash on it, he picked up the phone, and answered "Hey Chandra, what's the plan for tonight?" She answered "Sagar, Harsh is hosting a party here in X Zone, come here soon…" As she said that, he was already unbuttoning his shirt, and slipping on a silk black shirt "yea, be in there in about twenty.." Saying that he hangs up on Chandra...As he drove past the palace, he stared hard at it, coldly and angrily...He detested the very sight of it...

To be continued...
Keep smiling...
Love
Soni