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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sum2005

nice part soni 👏 .
haila sagar aur vidhya both r kicking themselves mentally for their own behaviour.wow vidhya teachs sagar how to cook 😳 😳 😳 and let sagar teach vidhya some rommance,comeon its valentines day tomm let sagar and vidhya celebrate .

...Yes, it's valentines, time to celebrate...😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rushvi99

Oh Soni i can't wait to read it..the episode today was a very big let down i will check your FF and like always it will cheer me up... 😃

I know rushvi, today's episode was a total downer... Hoprefully my fan fiction will cheer you up!😛

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ammmu

Awww, Soni ji you are too sweet...!! I'm cholly to bother you and ask you to write it..... but something to really cheer us all up ... and you're too chweet....... thanks so much 🤗

No, don't be sorry! 🤗 I love writing, plus hopefully this part will set yours and everyone's spirits up!😳😛

keep smiling...

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Posted: 18 years ago

A Trapped Bird – Part Ten
(Koi Mil Gaya)



Happy Valentines to you all! Love is feeling that is hard to describe but easy to feel…Hope all your lives are filled with love…

Vidya abruptly held back her laughter, and squeezes her lips together, wishing she had never laughed at him…she mentally kicked herself for making fun of him, as she watched him look at her sourly…"Hey, you don't have to be embarrassed, not everyone in this world knows how to cook…I will guide you through the cooking don't worry" Sagar's mood lightens at the pure sweetness of her voice…

So, Vidya told Sagar what to do, and he did it...It took a long time, but finally he finished cooking the food… Sagar set all the food on the table, and she looked at it and smiled…it wasn't the best looking food she had ever seen or the best aroma she had ever smelled, the rotis were a little burnt, and the sabzi had a little too much oil, yet the expectant and proud smile on Sagar's face, made her think this was the best food she had ever seen…

He watched her trying to force herself to eat the food, and pretend to enjoy the food…He may not be an expert in face reading, but he surely knew when a person was enjoying something and when they weren't…and to add to it, she was just so transparent…every emotion she felt inside of her surfaced to her face always…the good thing about this, is he could clearly make out that she enjoyed his company yet she seemed really defiant and insolent whenever he came close to her or touched her…Knowing her rebellious nature, he wasn't sure how he would succeed in his plan, a plan he reminded himself, nothing more, nothing else…This was a plan, and no emotions were to be tied with it…It was his revenge, and he needed to succeed at any cost…

Vidya bit into the dry slightly burnt roti and the oily semi cooked sabzi, her body's immediate response to it, was to take it out, but she forced it down her dry throat, designing a smile on her lips…She looked down at the food in her plate and continued chewing, and out of the corner of her eye she caught him staring at her…She immediately became conscious and she stiffened…Why is it that he always stared at her in this weird way…She hated it when he did that, she felt uncomfortable, and she didn't want to excite the nerves in her system by looking back at him…

She cleared her throat softly and said "I want to go home; it's getting really dark as it is…" She saw him frown "Why do you want to go, you can't go, you can't even walk…" "But I want to go, if I don't go I will be in trouble…" "You can stay here the night, and go the next morning.." She froze when he said that, and narrowed her eyes "No, I want to go back to the palace…If you don't want to help me get there, it's fine, I'll manage, just tell me the way, as I am not familiar with this side of the forest.." He put his arms up in mock despair "Fine, I will drop you back at the palace…" "You know what I think I can manage…" He merely stared at her, and his eyes said it all, he was in no mood to argue, whether she agreed or not, he would take her there…

He rode to the palace with her behind him on his golden brown horse…She was a fine animal with a quick pace…Vidya held onto him tight, squeezing his shoulders every time the horse jumping over a bump…The winds breezed through her hair, but if felt as if the winds were taking away her heart, far far away…She had never had any adventure or any fun that truly excited her nerves till now, and she told herself truthfully how good it felt, it felt as if she was living a new life in a new world…Strangely as the palace drew nearer her heart sank deeper, she didn't know why, but she didn't want to go back…

He helped her down, when they reached the end of the forest…Shoved his hands in his pockets and awkwardly asked her "Are you sure you don't want me to drop you till the door, how will you walk till there?" Vidya with eyes pointed towards the long wooden stick she was holding, "This will do, don't worry…" With no words left to say, they awkwardly glanced at each other, out of the corner of their eyes, and then hesitantly turned their own ways…

To Be Continued...

Preview: Read the Next Part...😳

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Love
Soni

Edited by soni595 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago

Trapped Bird - Part Eleven

(Ammu Are you Happy😉)

(Dil to Pagal Hai, Dil deewana hai, Pehli pehli baar milaata hai yehi, Seene mein phir aag lagaata hai, Dheere dheere pyaar sikhaata hai yehi, Hansata hai yehi yehi rulaata hai,Dil to paagal hai, Dil deewana hai)

He helped her down, when they reached the end of the forest…Shoved his hands in his pockets and awkwardly asked her "Are you sure you don't want me to drop you till the door, how will you walk till there?" Vidya with her eyes pointed towards the long wooden stick she was holding said, "This will do, don't worry…" With no words left to say, they awkwardly glanced at each other, out of the corner of their eyes, and then hesitantly turned their own ways…

With great difficulty she walked past the stables and to the palace, but despite the pain in her ankle she felt happy…Something inside of her had changed...as if a new lease of life had released inside of her, she felt like skipping, her eyes twinkled with some unknown pleasure, and her heart was literally dancing inside of her…what was happening to her..?

Half an hour later, she limped into her room and sat on her bed…Her merry mood hadn't vanished yet it did get spoilt for a few moments, when she had a confrontation with her mother-in-law a few minutes ago…It amused her more than annoyed her to see, that her mother-in-law was so concerned about where she had gone the whole afternoon…No, her mother-in-law wasn't worried for her well being of course, it was just her mother-in-law's mere dissatisfaction of her being able to enjoy despite her mother-in-law's bad day…Apparently her mother-in-law wanted to seek relief by taking out all her day's frustration on her, but it didn't rub off on her…

In fact, the gaiety and joy inside of her had begun to bubble in full form once again…She opened her tall French windows, inviting the winds to breeze in…And then limped onto her bed, hugging her soft white pillow…then she pulled out her small radio from her drawer, and plugged it in...and played it...She again asked herself why she was behaving like this, and tried to stop smiling goofily… After a few minutes she pulled out her favorite romance novel "The Notebook" and opened it…But it just lay in her hands like a showcase, because her mind was somewhere else...somewhere far away...

She looked in the mirror, and saw him…His smoky black eyes gazed at her with drowning passion that consumed her…The wind blew through his half open white shirt and her heart skipped a beat…. She wanted to switch off the radio as she heard the next song playing "Jab dil mile...mile gul kile.." but couldn't as her body felt so weak...He came towards the bed, and sat next to her…but she shyly glanced away, smiling softly and feeling her cheeks become warm by his closeness…He fingered through a few strands of her hair that lay in front of her eyes, and pushed them behind her ears…Her heart plummeting inside of her, she slowly looked into his eyes…letting herself drown into them…

His eyes were like magnets that automatically drew her towards him…He slipped his arm around her tiny waist, and pulled her close to him…and breathed into her, then rested his forehead against hers...She lifted up one of her shaking arms, and touched his shoulder slightly…He then drew his lips towards hers…and she tightened her grip on his shoulder, and gripped her bed sheet with the other hand, as she drowned into a sea of zealous passion and love…

To be Continued...

Preview: That's for you all to figure out!😳😉

Keep smiling...

Love

Soni

Edited by soni595 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
OMG SONI!!! THAT WAS ABSOLUTLY AMAZING!! 👏 YES IT TOTTALY CHEERED ME UP!! OMG I LOVE YOUR DETAILS!!!ESPECIALLY THE LASY PART WHERE HE SITS NEXT TO HER BED AND PUTS HER HAIR BEHIND HER EAR....I WAS VISUALIZING SV DOING THAT SCENE...I AM JUST RAMBALING ON AND ON I WILL STOP..PLEASE CONTINUE SOON.. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow!!!!!!!!!!! two episodes in one day!!!!!!!! that's perfect valentine gift soni!!!!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
SOni ji..!!!

I have no words !!!

Hailaaaaaaa........ omg... this is the best V day gift ever !! 😳 😳

You are too chweet..... two episodes... what a treat..!!

The last scene.... KKHH in a way.... 😳 loved how they were both uncomfortable with each other. What sizzling scene yaar.....

Was this last scene a dream ? Lemme read it again... not sure....

Thank you choooooooo much !! 🤗 🤗

And yes, you asked if i was happy, happy is not even the word... thrilled, amazed, everything good !! 😃 😳 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
🤢 🤢 i just fainted soni ji! You rock! Hailaa what a scene, i was like 🤢 🤢 cause i fell off my chair! 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Haila!!! Shabd nahin hai mere paas...!!! That was just wow Soni!!! 👏 👏 👏 I hated it when your episode came to an end.

its a dream na??? Its like Zaara dreaming about Veer...main yahaan hu!!! 😉

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