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Suhana

@Suha_18

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#81

Good luck for your exams!! Hope you do really well!! 😃😃 The update was great!! Wow....Deepika's gonna be working together with Aditya...hmm...I wonder what this is gonna result in....and Tara's quite fast...already fida over Gaurav!! 😆

But there's a slight problem....I wasn't able to read Part 4....for some reason whenever I click on page 7...it doesn't work 😕 so I haven't read Part 4 😔....is there any way that I can read this part??

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-CharriMango-

@-CharriMango-

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: Suha_18
Good luck for your exams!! Hope you do really well!! 😃😃 The update was great!! Wow....Deepika's gonna be working together with Aditya...hmm...I wonder what this is gonna result in....and Tara's quite fast...already fida over Gaurav!! 😆

But there's a slight problem....I wasn't able to read Part 4....for some reason whenever I click on page 7...it doesn't work 😕 so I haven't read Part 4 😔....is there any way that I can read this part??

Thanks Suha! You can't read part 4? Oh... I can send the update to you using PM😃

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Radika

@svforever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: charri7878
^^ Hehe, thanks a lot hun<3

YOu're most welcome dear!

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Radika

@svforever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#84

Hey! Sorry I replied so late! Was so busy! Anyways! Luved the update! Yay! Aditya n Deepika are working together! The design they made sounds really good! by any chance, are you thinking of becoming an architect? Well, please please pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update soon! It's been 3 days! Pleaseeeeeeeee! Bye! Luv ya!

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Radika

@svforever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#85

Oh yeah! Look, I used your avi! Aditya is looking so cute in it! he's such a nice singer!

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-CharriMango-

@-CharriMango-

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#86

Thanks Radu! Actually I wan't to be a doctor... hihi, but I love to build houses on The Sims 2... I'll post the update in 2min=)

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Suhana

@Suha_18

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: charri7878

Thanks Suha! You can't read part 4? Oh... I can send the update to you using PM😃
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Aww...thanks Charri...I'd really appreciate it if you sent the update!! 😃😃 Afterall...I don't want to miss any Deepika and Aditya chemistry and you're brillaint writing 😳😳...thanks sooo much hun!!

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@-CharriMango-

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#88

^^^Aww... thanks Suha! I'll send you it now!

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@-CharriMango-

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#89

Hit me as much as you want... I know I promised that I'll update yesterday but my internet was just so ****. Whenever I was just oe click away from posting it, the internet stopped. I had no signal. Sowwie...

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Part 6, A Night out with friends

-Aditya POV-

Days have gone and we have worked with the project a lot. We are almost finished with the design and are going to pick colours soon. All 4 has been working together and we are very good friends with eachother now. Deepika and Tara are really funny and trustable. They never talk bad about other workers or anything. Today we are going to the Club. It's going to be friends special tonight. It's 30 min left till I'm going to pick them up.

I walked to the bathroom and took a shower. I changed into a black shirt and dark jeans. I ruffed my hair with gel and sprayed perfume. This was the best perfume I had. Women really liked it... especially Deepika and Tara. Once we were working, they could smell it the whole time so they asked who's fragrance is so good. I told them It can be mine. Deepika stood up at once and smelled and said, yes it's you. We laughed at how funny she looked when she stood up and walked towards me. She laughed aswell.

After getting ready I walked down to the livingroom and grabbed my keys and wallet and said goodbye.

I was waiting for Deepika in the car. I picked her up first as she lived closest. I waited like 5min and then she came out of the door wearing a black dress and curled hair. I just looked at her. I could see her curves. She was really hot! I was lost in my thought. I was thinking about her. She looked stunning and so natural. I coudn't take my eyes off her. She opened the door and sat in. I was still looking at her. Suddenly I felt a pinch on my nose. I came out of my thoughts and held my nose. "Ouch...", I mumbled. She was laughing. I looked at her smile. Gorgeous, I thought to myself. "Am I looking that hot that you can't take your eyes of me?", she laughed. I shook my head and smiled. I didn't say anything. "Uff, you blush a lot," she said. I blushed and she giggled. "Let's go and pick up Gaurav and Tara," I said and started to drive.

"Awesome!" Gaurav mumbled to himself as we entered the club. Posters were hanging many places where it stood, "Friendship Special". The music was loud and people were enjoying themselves. We walked towards the bar and sat down. "Two beers please," I ordered for me and Varun. I knew they weren't going to drink. "Girls, what would you like to drink?" I asked them. "Hmmm... anything except for drinks with Alcohol," they said. I smiled and ordered Soda. While waiting for the drinks we talked and laughed. Varun and Tara talked a lot together. I talked most to Deepika. She was pretty cool and nice. "Have you ever had boyfriend?" I asked her taking a sip from the beer. "Mmm, yes..." she mumbled. Tears formed in her eyes. Slowly they started to drop. "Deepi, are you ok?" I asked her worried. I held her face and wiped away the tears. "Please Aditya," she cried. I looked at her. I had said something wrong. I could feel it. I coudn't see her in pain. That made me sad and my heart pained. "Deepi, have I said something wrong?" I asked her. She didn't say anything and ran outside. Deepika!..." I yelled after her. There she went out of the door. I saw around after Gaurav and Tara. I coudn't see them. "Maybe they have gone to the dancefloor of something," I mumbled to myself and ran out after her.

As I came out I looked after her. I coudn't see her. "Maybe she has gone to the hill where I met her!" I smiled and ran towards my car and drove there. The Hill wasn't so long from here. Only 5min to walk and 2min with car. I parked the car and ran to the top. "Deepika!" I yelled while walking. I heard someone crying. I walked closer to where the sound came from. Is that Deepika's sound? I walked closer and closer to the sound. I could hear the sound even better.

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Edited by charri7878 - 16 years ago