(FF) Meri Jaan - Update page 51 - 14.06.09

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Hello guys! Look who is back with a new SS? Yeah, it's me as you guessed. I'm back with some trash...
Tell me if I should stop writing this or continue. I would love to know what you think. Love you guys a lot, and enjoy reading the first part!
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Part 1, Handsome guy

Dancing in the middle of a bunch ladies is what you call a Life. Bodies touching, half drunk people, ladies and your best friends with you. I love everything with my life. Especially Friday's. On Friday's it's Club and drinking night. The other days I work with my father and big brother at Sharma Industries. I, Aditya Sharma, a 25 years old guy and half drunk right now love his life! I have a mother who I love very much, a dad who is the best and an elder brother who is married to Sanjana. Sanjana have a little sister who is 24 years old, 2 years younger then herself. I have only seen her on SJ's engagement and wedding. I can't remember her name. We danced with each other at SJ's engagement but after the wedding we never talked to eachother.

Jeet and Sanjana is like a couple made in heaven. They love each other a lot and a symbol on their love is growing inside of Sanju's stomach. She's in her 3rd month. I'm going to become an uncle after 6 months. I have already bought a lot of toys. I go out and drink so people can think I'm not a good person but what can I do? I don't have a girlfriend and I'm bored at home. So every Friday is night out! But on Sundays it's family day. We often go out on picnic or do something fun.

"So, did any girl ask you to come with them?" said Alekh. He was my bestfriend. We had been friends since school. "Yaar, you know I don't want to sleep with them. I just have fun with them and then goodbye" I said. I didn't want to destroy a woman's life. I only danced with them, nothing more. "You know that lady in that short red dress over there, she is really hot after you". He laughed while saying that. "Yaar, I don't want her." I said. "You little Virgin guy..." said Alekh. He was laughing like crazy now. He couldn't control himself. "Shut up!" I said. I started to blush madly now. It was true what he said... but I didn't want anyone to know it. I was the only one in our "Friend group" who still hadn't had it...

It was late now and it was time to go home. We went to our cars and drove home.

At home no one was awake. I opened the door quietly and walked in and closed the door after me. I went upstairs to my room and into the bathroom. I looked at myself in the mirror. Actually I was pretty good looking. Newly shaved, gel in my hair and rufsy hairstyle. Black shirt with the top 4 buttons open. Usually I had only 3 buttons open but it got very hot inside there so I opened one more. I changed into my pyjama trouser and went into my room again. I tucked myself in the bed and fell asleep.

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Updates
Part 1, page 1 - Handsome Guy
Part 2, Page 3 - Pretty Woman
Part 3, page 5 - Cinema Trip
Part 4, Page 7 - Make A Wish
Part 5, Page 10 - A new Project
Part 6, Page 14 - Night out with friends
Part 7, Page 17 - Why?
Part 8, Page 19 - Where?
Part 9, Page 24 - Don't cry
Part 10, Page 27 - Mr. Naughty
Part 11, Page 29 - Fight
Part 12, Page 32 - Dead?
Part 13, Page 34 - You should had seen your face
Part 14, Page 38 - I'm not your girlfriend!
Part 15, Page 42 - I don't want her to get married to him
Part 16, Page 44 - Am I in... Love?
Part 17, Page 47 - You'll never change
Part 18, Page 51 - You're cute


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ekdoteenchar thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aw great ff ! i luv it, please do continue <3
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yea....me likes it too...do continue soon......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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waaw they look very cute with each other........ how sweet
brilliant jodi "S.D".................................😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Yay!! You're back with another SS....any chance of this becoming a FF?? The story of Veer and Sonia was amazing...and I'm sure this one is gonna be great too!!! Anyway...loved the update...great introduction to Aditya...who's next?? Please continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice
update soon
take ur time!!!
see yaa!!!!
-CharriMango- thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks a lot everyone=) You are so shweeeeeet!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww charriiiii...🥳 lets party!!!!
u are back!!!

wow i just love the start...
ur siggy looks outstanding...

Aditya Sharma!! you always come up with fabulous names..

i wonder who's Sanjana's sister *pretending not knowing anything* lol

i really missed u... great to c u back... with a great ss which is gonna turn into a ff.....


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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice start! you write very well Charri! don't call it trash, it's beautiful!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Charri ur back with an SS....its a great start yaar....please can we hav another update.........😊

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