FF:Priya ka Prem- part 30, page 65, 27th sept!!!!

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Suhana

@Suha_18

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Hehe aw Suha! I am surprised & shocked that you figured that out 😲😲 .. Here I was thinking it would be a very hard mystery for y'all, but I guess ur too smart hehe ... You even figured out the "chakar" between Priya & Prem, when the two of them haven't realized it yet. Very very clever dear ! 😊
Well I hope u don't call her for the old lady, because she is your ... ? ? ?
Hm since ur so clever, you tell me who this old lady is 😉 And if she's gonna be a problem or not, well you just have to wait & read it in the next part hehe

thanks hun for ur warm comments <3 😆😆

Hmmm...I'm quite surprised and shocked at myself actually....it took me a while but I figured out soon enough who it was 😃😃

But 'PP'.... 😆 ...need to realise the 'chakar' soon....Suhana has...now its their turn!!!

Hmmm...this old lady...hmmm...well I have a theory in mind...but I think I'll wait till you update to find out who she really is and whether or not she'll be a problem!! 😆😆

P.S. thanks for the dedication!! 😳😳

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Radika

@svforever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

aww that's shoo shweet of you to say 😊 But i'm not sure how to continue this ff... I have lots of ideas & i know exactly what i want to happen, but I just can't write it lol probably sounds weird😆 But we'll see what will happen ...
btw thanks for ur comments, you always encourage me 😊 <3 <3

Hun! Nothing you will write will be weird! Okay! Your writing is very beautiful! Please continue forever so I can keep on enjoying this wonderful ff! Bye! Luv ya! 😊

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Radika

@svforever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

What's ATB ? 😕😆

ATB mean All Time Buggers! We, the members of the this gang, bug people for updates! 😆

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Radika

@svforever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Wonderful update! Awwwwwwwwwwwww......Prem n Priya are staring at each other........way too cute! Please update soon! Bye! Luv ya!

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: svforever
Wonderful update! Awwwwwwwwwwwww......Prem n Priya are staring at each other........way too cute! Please update soon! Bye! Luv ya!

Aww thank you .. You're too kind Radika ! <3 <3 And btw thanks for telling me what ATB means hehe 😆 I was like: erhm what's does that mean and tried to figure it out for a while ... But then I got tired hehe 😳
Anyways thank u dear for u sweet comments, but remember: Nothings sweeter than you ! 😉😛

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

Hello all you sweet people ! I am back with part 8. Hope you like it 😊

Priya and Prem slowly started to walk out from Prems room and towards the entry. She had to go home now.
-I like your room. You have lots of photos on your walls, she said
-Yeah.. Do you want to see?, he said
-I can't, I really got to go home now..., she said
-Okaay how about someother day then?, he said
-Um, sure .., she said
-Good, it's date, he said and smiled
She looked at him surprised. Why was he being so...
-Just kidding, he said and smiled
They had an awkard silence for two minutes when Priya finally broke it and started to talk again.
-It was fun today. And Mrs.Sharma was right, we really got to know each other a bit better by visiting each others homes, she said
-Let me guess, you had an idea in your head about how you THOUGHT I was, and that idea was totally wrong?, he said
-Actually .. yes, she said
-Me too .. I thought you were .. But you're not. I mean you are nice. Erhm.. he said
She just smiled. They were passing through the livingroom when suddenly someone from behind says:
-Prem beta, yeh ladki kaun hai?
Both of them turned and saw an old lady who looked suspicious at them. Prem got nervous
-Daadima, aap? he said nervously
-Haa main, aur kaun dikhta hai? ( Yes me, who else do you see? ) Arre tumko to chasma nahee chayee? ( You don't need glasses, do you? )
Both Prem and Priya smiled. Priya saw that Prem was a bit speachless so she came forward to his grandmother:
-Namaste, meri naam Priya hai. Aur main aur Prem classmates hai, ( Hello my name is Priya and me and Prem are classmates ) she said and even took her blessing.
Right that moment, when Prem saw Priya coming forward to his grandmother, greeting her and taking blessing/aashirwaad he felt something. Something weird and new. A happy feeling though. Priya actually bended down and took aashirwaad from daadi. None of his friends has ever done that, ever. But she did... Even Prems grandmother was shocked.
-Jite raho beti ( Live long child/daugher ), daadi said
-Mujhe abhi gaar chalna hai liken mujhe bahut khushi thi aapko milne me ( I have to go home now but I'm very happy to have meet you ), Priya said
-Daadi I'll just drop Priya off to her house. I'll be back in 15 minutes, Prem said to his grandmother
-Ok beta, drive safe, daadi said and smiled.

Both of them went outside and sat in Prems car. He started to drive.
-Your daadi seems really nice
-Yeah she's the greatest. She's my best friend actually, she knows me better than anyone else in the family.
-Do you have any other siblings?
-Yes besides Suhana or should I say Maleka ji, I have one older brother. And then there's my parents.
-You have a very nice family Prem, you should be very grateful she said and looked down.
He noticed a sadness in her eyes.
-Well you have a nice family too... You have your sister right? And your dad. I never got a chance to meet your mom.
-She's ... Priya tried to say

Promo: - You're very special Priya, Prem says to her. She smiles. Both of them have an eyelock.

Okaay sooooo what did ya think ? Any critics? Please do tell 😊

Luv Gina <3

Edited by theflyingdonkey - 16 years ago

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Hi Gina !

The update is fantastic !

Loved all the updates .

I wonder , what is she gonna say ........

Lets seee!

Wonderful update !

Loved it !

Keep Up the Good work!

Take Care

Vidya😊

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Suhana

@Suha_18

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Haiii....Prem felt a weird feeling when Priya touched his dadima's feet....awww....uff...Prem needs to realise the 'chakar'....lol...but when are they actually gonna get down to doing their assignment that Mrs Sharma had given them...PP just seem to busy in getting to know each other...😆😆

Hmmm.....Prem's already calling Priya 'special'....and an eyelock....oohh.....when you gonna update??

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Vidyaa
Hi Gina !

The update is fantastic !

Loved all the updates .

I wonder , what is she gonna say ........

Lets seee!

Wonderful update !

Loved it !

Keep Up the Good work!

Take Care

Vidya😊

Aw hehe thanks .. btw how are you feeling now, better ? <3

Edited by theflyingdonkey - 16 years ago

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Suha_18
Haiii....Prem felt a weird feeling when Priya touched his dadima's feet....awww....uff...Prem needs to realise the 'chakar'....lol...but when are they actually gonna get down to doing their assignment that Mrs Sharma had given them...PP just seem to busy in getting to know each other...😆😆

Hmmm.....Prem's already calling Priya 'special'....and an eyelock....oohh.....when you gonna update??

The assignment is just an excuse hehe 😉 .. Hm I'll post part 9 on Friday ? <3

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