FF:Priya ka Prem- part 30, page 65, 27th sept!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hello ji ! I am back with part 10. So enjoy ... =D

When Priya came home she immiediatly started to cook. She was on a good mood. While cooking she sang to herself: zindagi ek safar hai suhana...
Priyas dad and her sister watched her in the kitchen, singins & dancing.
-Arre di ko kya ho gaya hai? She seems so happy, madhu said
- I don't know but I like what I'm seeing. I haven't seen her this happy in a long time. Let's let her sing and enjoy, if she sees us she'll stop, he said
-You are right dad. Let's go out for a walk? Priya hasn't seen us coming home yet, she suggested
-Good idea, he responded.

After 30 minutes, Priya was done with dinner. Where's Madhu and dad she thought. Priya sat in the kitchen and thought about the day that had passed. It was a nice day. She had fun. Surprisingly with Prem. He's a nice guy. She always thought Prem was a jerk, like some of the other guys in school who only thought about one nasty thing. She also thought Prem would be shallow, snobbish and a olo ka patha ( dumbhead ). But she had misjudged him. He was sweet and caring and kinda funny. For once in my life, I was wrong. But I'm happy I was wrong, she thought and smiled.
Her dad came in.
-Hi beti how are you?
-Papa aap aagaye? Aaye kaana tayar hai ( Daddy, you came? Come, the food is ready )
-Chik hai ( Okay ) Liken aaj meri beti bahut khush hai? ( But today my daughter is very happy? ) Yeh smile tumko bahut suit kar raha hai ( This smile suits you very good )
Priya smiled even more.
-Yeh kiski jadoo hai? ( Who's magic is this? )
Priya blushed. Right then Madhu came in and said:
-Prem ki, aur kiski?
-Prem? Priyas dad said and remembered him. Then he got silent and thought. Priya was worried.
-Papa woh...
-Ek minute Priya... he interrupped. He looked angry.
Both Priya and Madhu was a bit scared. They had never seen him like this.

Hope you liked it !
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luv, Gina <3

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Edited by theflyingdonkey - 16 years ago

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@Suha_18

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Hehe aw thanks hun ! <3 ... Oh now tell me how does our own little Suhana ji know what that feeling is? Is she also in ....
Hehe Prem said that Suhana talked AS IF SHE WAS 40. It's just because Suhana is so smart, clever and mature ( and sweet & kind 😛 ) like you dear <3 And don't worry, if Prem behaves badly towards Suhana, maleka ji can punish him. Any suggestions? 😆

Hmm...what do you mean 'how does Suhana ji know what the feeling is'???....maine kab kaha 😳 😆😆

Oh accha...he said AS IF...heheee my mistake lol...aaww thanks.....but I'm not smart or anything....the Suhana in your FF is smart, clever etc lol...not me....hmm punishments....arre yaar....how can malekaji punish Prem?? But if I have suggestions...don't worry...will let malekaji know...😆😆

Now..about the update...loved it!!! Priya was singing and cooking....but uh oh...their dad seems angry...hmm what's cooking in Priya's dad's mind?? Please continue soon!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: Suha_18

Hmm...what do you mean 'how does Suhana ji know what the feeling is'???....maine kab kaha 😳 😆😆

Oh accha...he said AS IF...heheee my mistake lol...aaww thanks.....but I'm not smart or anything....the Suhana in your FF is smart, clever etc lol...not me....hmm punishments....arre yaar....how can malekaji punish Prem?? But if I have suggestions...don't worry...will let malekaji know...😆😆

Now..about the update...loved it!!! Priya was singing and cooking....but uh oh...their dad seems angry...hmm what's cooking in Priya's dad's mind?? Please continue soon!!

Hehe you wrote " we all know what that feeling is like " .. Soooo I said ooo how does Suhana ji aka you know what the feeling is? Are you also in ... 😳😊 ?? Tell nah 😉
Maleka ji can punish Prem, whenever and however she likes too. Yaar, if this was Divz or any other girl she would use this opportunity wisely. And now I'm giving it to you 😛 So just let me know when you feel like punishing Prem ( sharad ) ...

Hehe aww thanks for ur comments hun <3

Edited by theflyingdonkey - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

OMG! That was just tooooo cute! Priya is definitely in love! She was singing! Uh-oh......why's her dad angry? Please continue soon! Can't bear the suspense!

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challo

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: svforever
OMG! That was just tooooo cute! Priya is definitely in love! She was singing! Uh-oh......why's her dad angry? Please continue soon! Can't bear the suspense!

aww thanks radika ! 😊<3 .. Hmm why is Priyas dad angry? Well maybe he doesn't like the idea of Priya "hanging" out with a boy ?😳 Hehe don't worry, I'm not gonna have villains in the ff, yet 😆
luv ya <3

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@jaanlover

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

what a wonderful update !!! I really loved it

It was so cute...amazing..awesome dear

Please continue soon when you have some time...can't wait for the next part

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challo

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: jaanlover
what a wonderful update !!! I really loved it
It was so cute...amazing..awesome dear

Please continue soon when you have some time...can't wait for the next part

Aw thank you Reena 😛<3 .. You're too sweet !

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challo

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Part 11

Hello here I am with part 11. Just to notice PD= Priyas Dad. P= ( Priya with thicker text )

PD - Prem wohi hai jo yaha aaye tha teen din pehle? ( Was it Prem who came here three days ago? )
P -Ji .. ( yes )
PD -Wohi larka jo tumne kaha ke aap dono school assignement ki leyee ek saath hai? ( That boy who you said you two were working together for a school assignment ?)
P -Ji papa liken hum sirf .. ( Yes dad but we're just ...)
PD -.. Dost hai? ( friends ? )
P -Yes, nothing more
PD -Why not?
Both Madhu and Priya looked surprised at their father. But their father just smiled.
PD -Look Priya the first time I met Prem, I had a weird feeling in my stomach
-Maybe you were hungry papa? Madhu said
He started to laugh
PD -No, not that kind of feeling. Another feeling, a feeling only parents get.
-And what kind of feeling is that? Madhu asked
Priya understood what her father was meaning. But why was he talking about this with her?
-Dekho papa hum sirf dost hai. Aur kuch nahi. Bas, sirf dost ( Look dad, we're just friends. Nothing else. Only friends ), Priya said to her dad
PD -I know you Priya. And I can say it's not easy to make you happy. And it seems like kismat has given you Prem who has...
-Prem hasn't done anything! Stop it dad, I told you nah we're just friends. Now both of you stop it, please. She said
-Okay, it's your choice. But I'm going to just tell you one thing. When I met Prem, I saw something special in him. I saw an honest and neat guy. I've seen how guys are today, very bad and think about only one thing. But Prem. He looks like coming from a nice family and his eyes showed dignity, honesty and kindness. And I got that feeling that he's perfect for...
-Please just stop ! Can't a boy and a girl just be friends? Priya got upset and walked away... Oh, why would her own father say anything like that? she thought. She went to her room. On her bed she saw her book. Priya ka Prem. Oh Prem! Give me a break she said to herself. She took the book and put it on her desk. And then she remembered what her father said: It seems like kismat has given you Prem... Wait what did he mean by that? She was confused. She went to the kitchen again, and her father and sister were still there.
-What did you mean when you said kismat has given me Prem? Do you mean prem, love or do you mean prem, my friend? she asked her father
-Dono tho eki hai ( Both are the same ) he said
What? Did her father just...Oh No he didn't! Priya was confused. No father would EVER say or do anything like this. Fathers hold on to their daughters, not... Ohh!! she thought to herself.
-Dekho Priya .. Get to know him a bit better and just see. If you develop feelings for him, great then you have my blessing. If not, then maybe it's not meant to be. But at least try and see, for my sake... he said and kissed her on the forehead.
-I have a weird feeling in my stomach Priya, and this time I'm hungry, her father said.
Priya smiled. And she decided to leave the subject.

In the night, before going to bed, she noticed her book laying on the desk. She decided to read it

Precap: "That boy who will win my heart will be someone special. He will be ... "

Hope you liked it ! 😛 I will update again on Monday ...

Luv, Gina <3