FF:Priya ka Prem- part 30, page 65, 27th sept!!!!

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Radika

@svforever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Aww well it was ur sweetness & kindness that got me to write again <3<3 hehe ... I think i'll update on friday. I will try to write many parts now, and just post one each week, every friday .. Or what do u think ?
Thanks hun for ur support <3<3😳😊

Thanks hun! I think you should write many parts everyday and post them all in one day each day....hehehehe, just kidding....you should just write the parts and post like 2 or 3 each week. That way, you will have more time to reply back on the comments that you will get. Oh yeah! I forgot to tell you! I started a small FF in November. Here's the link:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/banoo-main-teri-dulhann/1082388/ff-pyaar-hua-pt-24-pg72-6-23-note-pg-68

Please check it out! Bye! And please continue soon! Your ff is really exciting! Luv ya! 😊

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Hi Guys!
I'm back with part 5. From now on I will try to update more often =) I hope u like it !!!

The next day Priya came to school a bit earlier then usual. She went to Mrs.Sharmas office. All night she had thought about what to tell Mrs.Sharma about her and Prems pairing. She had come up with her own little speech and prayed all night that it would work. Although Mrs.Sharma was very kind & a good teacher, she was very strict and not easy to persuade and convince. She knocked on the door, luckily she was there.
-Priya? At school one hour early.. Did someone pull a prank on you again? she said and giggled
-Ji? Nahi toh .. Woh Mrs.Sharma I need to talk to you about something important. It's about the pairing for the assignment
-Yes what about the pairing? You don't like it? You know Priya I really thought you could co-operative with people
-It's not that ... Um I was just wondering if, in case some pair don't get along and maybe wants to change partners.
-No changing partners! she said with a strict voice ..Priya looked down, and had a sad face. Then Mrs.Sharma gave a warm smile and said:
-Dekho Priya, in life sometimes we have to sometimes work with people that we don't know or don't like. It's then up to
us to atleast try to get along & do the work. And I chose very carefully each team for this assignment. This was so that you all get to know each other and become a class and not just groups of people.
-But, if someone REALLY wants to change partners then...
-Then I have to fail them. They have shown they cannot work as a team, cannot co-operative and lack of ability to socialize. I will fail both. So Priya, any problems between you and Prem? she asked
Priya was confused. Fail? No. But working with Prem is impossible.
-Um ... Just then Prem came from behind and gave Priya a hug. Priya was shocked as hell.
-Priya !! Hi, I just wanted to say it was fun yesterday and I'm sooo glad we're friends now. Prem said and gave a big wide smile.
Mrs. Sharma was confused, and Priya was .. well her jaw was wide open of shock.
-Oh I knew it, you two are so alike that of course two of my best students can get along. But I don't understand why Priya asked about what would happen if someone wants to change partners? Mrs.Sharma said
-Oh well maybe it was for her friend,, Pooja right? Yes yes. Well Mrs.Sharma I need to borrow Priya one minute...
Mrs.Sharma nodded and left. Priya stood still in same position, shocked as hell.
-What the...? She said confused and looked at him
-Idiot, you were this close to give us both failed!! I heard your conversation,,, I had to show we get along, or else ... He said and tried to calm himself
-Or else what? Nothing would have happened, I would eventually convince her and then we don't have to put up with each other anymore...
-Put up with each other? You make me sound impossible to bear with
-What? no, it's just that I know how you are...
-How I am? And how am i Priya? he asked
She didn't answer
-You don't even know me, then how can you judge me?
His words came spread in her head. He was right. She didn't knew him. She looked at him and just realized what had happened. He had hugged her. HE had hugged HER. She got chills and was about to leave but got stopped. Someone held her hand. It was Prem. She felt warm. Where did this weird feeling come from?
-Let go of my hand, she said quietly. Her face became red. Prem noticed this and immediately let go of her hand.
Priya started walking towards the parking lot. She was mad and sad at the same time. She felt like crying, but didn't knew why.
-Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai? she said to herself
-Congrats Dii, it's called feeling guilty someone said from behind, it was Madhu.
Priya just looked down and thought about everything that has happened. How she had behaved, what she had said. She really did feel bad about what had happened.
-Madz, main kya karon?
-Dii, remember what mom used to say? No matter how bad a situation is, an...
-... apology is a way of making it better. Priya filled in and smiled. She looked at her little sister.
-I think you know what you have to do. Good luck she said and left.
Okay Priya, it's time to make it better. You have to go and apologize... To Prem. Ayy rabba, madhat karlo!!! she thought to herself

Promo: -Priya, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship , Prem says to her and smiles. She smiles back.

So what did you think?
Like/Dislike. Critics/ Ideas .. I'm openminded! 😊
By the way, do anyone want me to continue writing?😕 Because if no one likes it, then its just a waste of time for me to continue writing it, I guess...

Luv yaa, Ginaaaaaaa <3<3<3

Edited by theflyingdonkey - 16 years ago

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Monica

@_Monu_

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

WOW IT WAS....CUTE & COOL!

ILL WAIT 4 NEXT PART!

CONTINUE SOON WHEN U HAVE TIME!

PS:join and comment my ff too! pls! is call Tere Bina!

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: _Monu_
WOW IT WAS....CUTE & COOL!

ILL WAIT 4 NEXT PART!

CONTINUE SOON WHEN U HAVE TIME!

PS:join and comment my ff too! pls! is call Tere Bina!

Tere Bina? aww that sounds soo sweet hehe =)

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

only two people liked it ? 😭 oh well I think I know what this means ...

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Hi Gina !

This is Vidya here.

I did read all your updates.

It's fantastic. Really , the story is just great.

Loved it.
Sorry, couldn't comment as I'm not well.So for the time being all I can say is ,
stupendous work of yours.

Just superb. Keep it up. Don't get disheartened.

I am sure people will comment just soon , wait a lil.

All the very best.

And ya , continue soon.

Edited by Vidyaa - 16 years ago

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Radika

@svforever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Your update is just wonderful and your ff......I don't have any words....it's just way tooo good! How can you write so well? Anyways, please update again! I really wanna see how it goes with Priya and Prem's "friendship".....yeah right, "friendship", more like love story! Please continue soon! Bye! Luv ya!

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Hello ji! I am back with part 6. I hope you like it😊

Priya searched after Prem. She found him sitting on a bench, alone. That's weird she thought to herself. He always has his "possy" and friends around him. She went up to him, nervously. He was sitting there, reading a book. Hm, which book? she wondered. Gone with the wind? HE was reading Gone with the wind? Wow she really doesn't know him, she thought to herself... She arrived to him.
Prem stopped reading and looked up. Priya stood there and looked down on the ground.
-I'm ... sorry she said quietly
Now Prem was shocked.
-Excuse me? he said
-I'm sorry? she replied
Prem smiled. Priya looked at him.
-I'm really sorry... For the way i acted and for what I said. I was wondering if we could start over, perhaps? she looked and hade like a question mark on her face.
He looked wondering at her. What is she doing he thought. Then he stood up. Priya thought he was going to leave but instead he smiled and said:
-Hi, I'm Prem. And you are...? he took forward his right hand
She giggled. He gave her a smile. Both of them had an eyelock.
-Priya ... she said and shook hands with him. His hands were warm. But she liked it.
-I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship he said and smiled
She laughed.
-Clich line from Gone with the wind? I'm impressed she said
-How did you know? he responded
-It's one of my favorite books she said
-Mine too ... Wow, we have something in common. Who could have thought! he said sarcastically, but still in a funny way.
-Um about the assignment... she said
-Oh yeah first you have to visit my place
-Kya?
-Yes, remembered we have to visit each others homes so we'll get to know each other better. And we are already behind, everyone else already visited both of each others houses yesterday. But we only got through with yours... he explained to her
-Oh yeah... Sorry about yesterday by the way. Okay, when do you want to go?
-How about today, after school?
-Today? Erhm ... Okay, sure.
-Good, it's a date he said and smiled
-Huh? she looked confused
-Hehe relax, it was a joke he said
-Oh okay ... she said confused
-You know normally you laugh when someone jokes, but...
-Oh I'm sorry ... Um hehehe funny joke?! she said and forced a laugh
Prem started to laugh. Priya felt embarrassed and looked down, but seeing Prem laughing and thinking about what had just happened she couldn't either
stop herself, so she started to laugh also. So there they were, Prem aur Priya. At their school, together, laughing.
-You're funny Priya ! But I have to go to the library now ... I'll see you later! he said and left.
Priya looked at him while he was going. He isn't that bad as I thought she thinks to herself. She started walking towards her classroom when it hit her. SHE was going to PREMS house!!!!

Promo: -Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho, aur chavi ko jayee Prem sings. Priya gets scared.
( English translation: You and me, locked up in a room, and the keys are gone. LOL weird translation, but it's from a hindi song i'm sure you have heard of it )

Luv yaa, Ginaaaa <3 <3 <3

Edited by theflyingdonkey - 16 years ago

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Hm, I wonder what will happen next !😳😳 Oh yeah, how about... Hehe just teasing y'all.
Soooo what did you think? Good/Bad? Any critics? I'm openminded !!😊

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

No comments? No one liked it? 😔

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