FF:Priya ka Prem- part 30, page 65, 27th sept!!!!

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Radika

@svforever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Are you kidding? I luved it! It was way too good! Please update one more time! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I am really excited because of the precap! Bye! Luv ya!

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Suhana

@Suha_18

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Amazing update Gina!! At last Priya and Prem are friends!! Hmm....Prem was right....'this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship'.....or rather a 'beautiful love story'!!!

And hmmm...'hum tum ek kamre mein band ho...'......what's Prem upto?? Please continue soon!!

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challo

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: svforever
~~ATB reserved~~

What's ATB ? 😕😆

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challo

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: svforever
Are you kidding? I luved it! It was way too good! Please update one more time! Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! I am really excited because of the precap! Bye! Luv ya!

aww that's shoo shweet of you to say 😊 But i'm not sure how to continue this ff... I have lots of ideas & i know exactly what i want to happen, but I just can't write it lol probably sounds weird😆 But we'll see what will happen ...
btw thanks for ur comments, you always encourage me 😊 <3 <3

Edited by theflyingdonkey - 16 years ago

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challo

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Hello guys ! I'm back with part 7... This part is specially dedicated to someone special here on the forum. Guess who ? 😆 Btw this part is superlong, so I hope I don't bore y'all too much ...

All day at school Priya was anxious and nervous about going to Prems house. It's not a big deal she thought to herself. It's for a school assignment, no biggy. And besides he came to my house. So why am I so nervous? Oh yeah, because it's PREM! Prem, the most popular guy in college. I'M going to HIS house. Ohh... How much is the time? She looked at her cell-phone. It was almost 2 o'clock, I have to go and meet him now she thought and started to walk towards the parking lot.

After 5 minutes she had reached the parking lot. Prem was already there
-Hi . are you ready to go? he asked
Priya nodded. They sat in his car.
-Is it okay if I put some music on? he asked
Priya nodded again. Prem looked at her weirdly and thought: why is she nodding when I'm talking to her?
He clicked on his stereo.
-Oops forgot to lock the doors (car doors ). He clicked a button, and the doors were locked.
Just at that moment his stereo played: Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho, aur chavi ko jayee.
Priya looked at Prem, who looked embarresed. She started to laugh.
-Woh .. Erhm, yeah I'll just change the song.
The next song was: zindagi ek safar hai suhana
-Aw I like this song. I just love old classic hindi songs.
-Me too .. wow priya, you're totally surprising me here. Hm, anymore surprises? he asked and smiled
She looked at him and thought: he isn't that bad. She smiled.

They reached Prems house after 10 minutes. Prems house was a big white mansion with a huge garden, tennis court and a pool. Priya was amazed, but not shocked. Everyone knew Prems father was a big business man, one of the richest in India. They went inside, and Prem gave her a little tour.
-Wow, really nice house.
-Thanks... And this is my room he said and opened a door. Come in, he said
Both of them went inside his room. It was a large room with dark blue walls, on the walls were hanging photos. Lots of photos & pictures. But one wall was empty. She looked around in his room. It was nice she thought.
-Nice room she said and turned around, and saw Prem by the door.
He locked the door and started to sing: Hum tum ek kamre mein band ho, aur chavi ko jayee. Priya gets scared.
-Dekho Prem, Khabardar agar tumne kuch ( Look Prem, don't you dare do ... )
Prem starts to laugh
-Hehe, I'm just joking. Remember in the car? Okay I'm sorry ...
She smiled, and he unlocked the door. Just then someone came in, a little girl. The girl had long brown hair, white red cheeks and cute brown eyes. She also had a tiara on her head. She was around 8 years old.
-Prem bhaiyya, yeh ladki kaun hai? ( Prem brother, who's this girl )
Priya looked at the girl and smiled. She came forward and said:
-Hello, Main Priya ho. Aur aap? ( Hello, I'm Priya. And you are? )
-Mera naam Suhana hai aur main is gar ki maleka hoon ( My name is Suhana and I'm the queen of this house )
Prem smiled.
-Priya yeh hai meri choti si bholi si pyaari si behen.( Priya this is my little, sweet, beloved sister ) And apparently the queen of this house he said and smiled.
-It is very nice to meet you Suhana ji. Or do you want me to call you Maleka ji? Priya said
-Suhana ji is okay... Can I call you didi?
Priya came forward and kissed Suhana on the cheek. Suhana gave her a hug. Prem was just staring at them ( and the beginning of the song Guzarish from Ghajini playing in the background )
-You see Priya, this is why i lock my door he said
-Prem I have to go home now ... Priya said
-Didi, aap phir kab aooge? ( When are you coming back? )
Priya didn't knew what to say. It wasn't like she was coming back to Prems house. But what would she tell that sweet little girl?
Prem looked at Priya and smiled. He knew she didn't know what to say.
-Haa Priya, tum phir kab aooge? ( Yes Priya, when are you coming back ? ) he said to her and smiled. Both of them looked at each other and smiled.
-Lagta hai kuch chakar chal raha hai, ( Seems like something is going on ) Suhana said and watched both Priya & Prem smiling and staring at each other. End of this part!

Promo: Prem & Priya are walking through the livingroom, when suddenly someone from behind says: Prem beta, yeh ladki kaun hai? Both of them turn and see an old lady who looked suspicious at them. Prem gets nervous.

Okaay, soooo what did y'all think ? If I bored you, sorry. If not, well hm ...
Any critics ? Please do tell 😊 I'm openminded! Btw did y'all figure out who it was?
Please do leave comments, 😳

// luv Gina <3 <3

Edited by theflyingdonkey - 16 years ago

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Pooja

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Finally i found ur FF....its really great Gina........please update soon......

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challo

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: lexie
Finally i found ur FF....its really great Gina........please update soon......

Hehe aw Pooja thanks ! I didn't knew u were looking for it 😆 You could have just pm:ed me .. Hm I will try to write many parts this weekend, and post them frequently. Schools starting tomorrow and I don't think i'll have time for this later on .. Anyways thanks <3

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Suhana

@Suha_18

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Zindagi ek safar hai suhana......hmmm...I wonder who Suhana is....Gina this is sooo tough...hmm....someone on this forum.....kaun hosakti hain.....wait...is it......ummmm.....me?? 😆😆

You know...when you said to me that you wanted it to be a surprise....I wasn't expecting this....great surprise!!!!

Aww...it was such an amazing update....Suhana's sussed it out that chakar cha raha hain...but when are Priya and Prem gonna realise?? But uh oh....who's this old lady?? Is she gonna be a problem?? Please update soon!!

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challo

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Suha_18
Zindagi ek safar hai suhana......hmmm...I wonder who Suhana is....Gina this is sooo tough...hmm....someone on this forum.....kaun hosakti hain.....wait...is it......ummmm.....me?? 😆😆

You know...when you said to me that you wanted it to be a surprise....I wasn't expecting this....great surprise!!!!

Aww...it was such an amazing update....Suhana's sussed it out that chakar cha raha hain...but when are Priya and Prem gonna realise?? But uh oh....who's this old lady?? Is she gonna be a problem?? Please update soon!!

Hehe aw Suha! I am surprised & shocked that you figured that out 😲😲 .. Here I was thinking it would be a very hard mystery for y'all, but I guess ur too smart hehe ... You even figured out the "chakar" between Priya & Prem, when the two of them haven't realized it yet. Very very clever dear ! 😊
Well I hope u don't call her for the old lady, because she is your ... ? ? ?
Hm since ur so clever, you tell me who this old lady is 😉 And if she's gonna be a problem or not, well you just have to wait & read it in the next part hehe

thanks hun for ur warm comments <3 😆😆