FF:Priya ka Prem- part 30, page 65, 27th sept!!!!

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Radika

@svforever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#121

OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! That was awesome yaar! Seriously! I just can't stop smiling! I loved the last part when Priya liked Prem's third smile and Prem hadn't even showed her his 3rd smile. I bet that other smile is a mischievous one! 😉 And that wasn't long! In fact, it wasn't long enough! You must update again yaar! Your anxiously-waiting-for-your-update-friend,

Radika😊

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: svforever
OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! That was awesome yaar! Seriously! I just can't stop smiling! I loved the last part when Priya liked Prem's third smile and Prem hadn't even showed her his 3rd smile. I bet that other smile is a mischievous one! 😉 And that wasn't long! In fact, it wasn't long enough! You must update again yaar! Your anxiously-waiting-for-your-update-friend,
Radika😊

Hehe aww thanks Radika ji ! 😊 Oh really, maybe I should make the updates longer than ?😆
I will update again on Wednesday, so it's only one day. Hope you can bare with me <3

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Suha_18
Haiii...3 types of smiles...I think I'm gonna faint....that was too cute!!!Reminds me of the time Vidya explained about Sagar's smiles to him....you remember?? Loved the update Gina!!

Hmmm...Priya and I have something in common too....we both like smile number 3 the best!! 😃😃

Uff....yeh 'aunties' bhi naa...hamesha chale aate hain...aur koi kaam nahin hain kya?? 😆

Gina...but you said that a certain...ahem...actually...I'll pm what I was gonna say instead....but maybe you get me already??

Hehe of course I remember that episode where Vidya explained about Sagar's smiles to him. Where do u think I got this inspiration from ? 😆

Well you know how some mid-aged women can be. They have no life of their own, so they nose into others 😎

Oh yeah .. Ehumm, friday 😆 Maybe u read it on my pm this time ?

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#124

Hey Guys !

I know what you're thinking. I updated yesterday, so why another update today? Oh well let's just say someone bugged me to update today. So here's part 15. Enjoy !😆

After being with Priya, Prem returned to school. He and Priya had talked and discussed Romeo & Juliet, and what came as a shock was that both of them had the same opinions about the story. They realized they had much in common. He enjoyed spending time with her. The more time he spent with her, the more he came to like her.
At school all he could do was to think about Priya. He thought about how fun the two of them had. And how much they had in common. Then he remembered when the wind blowed, and her hair came on her face. She looked so ... different. But beautiful. At that moment she wasn't Priya. She was... Priya. Haii Prem beta, stop thinking about her. Wait... Why am I even thinking about her? Why?

After 5 long hours at college, Prem went home. He came home with a confused smile on his face. ( The kind of smile when people are in love but they haven't realized it yet, but are confused. )
He saw his parents sitting in the livingroom. He went and greeted them and then sat with them.
- So how was school? Prems mother asked
- Good, he said shortly.
- Anything new going on? Prems father asked
He wanted to say yes. Yes, something new is going on. But it's not something. It's someone. And that someone is...
- ... Priya , he said
- Kaun? His mother asked.
Prem didn't realize he had just said Priyas name out loud. Both of his parents noticed Prems weird behaviour.
- Yeh Prem ko kya ho gaya hai? Prems mother asked her husband ( What has happened with Prem ? )
- Usko pyaar ho gaya hai .. ( He's fallen in love )
Prems parents turned around and saw daadi. She smiled and nodded. Then all three of them looked at Prem. He was still in his own little world.
Prems parents smiled. They couldn't believe this. Prem, their own little boy has fallen in love.
Prems father snapped his fingers.
- Prem?
- Huh? Ji papa? he said and "woke up".
- Get ready, we're going to temple. Remember today is maa ki pooja ( mothers pray / pooja )
- Ji, he said and went up to his room.
Prems parents turned to daadi and they started talking. She started to tell them all about Priya and about Prem and Priya.

After 15 minutes Prem and his family left for temple. Today was maa ki pooja. Basically all children are supposed to pray for their mother on this day, and then ask their mother what she wanted from them. Whatever the mother asks on maa ki pooja, the children have to try to fulfill it.
Prem, Suhana, his mother, his father and his daadi were all in the temple to pray. The pundit told them to wait because this particular pooja is done by a very special girl every year.
- Aww isn't that nice, who is this girl?
-There she is, the pundit says.
Prem, Suhana, his mother, his father & daadi turn around and see a girl in a white salwar kameez.( the white salwar kameez vidya had in her dulhann promo song ) Her hair is let down and she is looking absolutely beautiful The girl is none other than Priya ! She was with her sister Madhu.
Prem is amazed. This was the first time he saw Priya in a salwar suit. This was the first time he saw her with her hair let down. This was the first time he noticed her true beauty. This was...
-Amazing, he thought out loud but luckily no one heard him.
-Arre Priya beti tum? daadi said and smiled.
Priya smiled and came forward to them and took daadis blessing. She greeted to Prems parents.
-Acha tho yeh hai Priya? I've heard a lot about you, Prems mother said
Priya smiled. Prem couldn't help to stare at Priya. He was blown away by her beauty.
- Priya didi aap kitni achi lag rahi hai , Suhana said. ( Priya sister you're looking so nice )
- Aur aap bhi bahut acha lag rahi hai, maleka ji .. Priya said and smiled.
The pundit told her to start the pooja. And so she did. All of them prayed, and Prem kept staring at Priya. His parents noticed this and winked at each other giving a signal meaning: he's in love ...

After the pooja was finished Priya went around and gave everyone meethaye. Prems parents were blown away by Priyas beauty and grace.
- She's such a sweet and nice girl, Prems father said.
- I know, she's very unique and special , Prem said.
The grown ups smiled.
- Prem if I ask you for something today, will you fulfill it? his mother asked him
- Of course maa, after all today you can ask me for anything and I will give it to you. Even my life, he said
- Don't ever say that. But promise me you will fulfill whatever I ask you, she said
- Okay mummy, I promise. Now tell me what do you want?
- Beta I want you to get married... to Priya
Prem was shocked. Get married to Priya?

Okay so that was part 15. Did you like it ?😳
Oh yeah I've made the parts a bit longer now. Seems like you guys don't mind sooo ... Please do leave comments 😉

Luv ya,
Gina <3

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#125

First of all Thanks a ton for updating ...😊

Coming to the update...

I loved it !!

Wonderful update Gina Madame!👏

I wonder itna kya hai Romeo aur Juliet ke baare me discuss karne ke lie...😉

And ya , I love Prem's Dadi ...😳😳 Unhi ke wajah se ye sabh ho raha hai ...

But .. Kya Priya haan karegi itni jaldi is shaadi ke lie??? Hmmm... Lets see..

This is the first time I've heard about Ma ki Pooja ..Sachme aisa hota hai kya??

I can envisage Prem ke mann me kitne laddoo Phoot rahe honge...😛😛😛

Fantastic update Gina !👏👏👏

Loveeeeeeddddddddddd it !

Thanks a ton for updating !

Vidya😊😊

Edited by Vidyaa - 16 years ago

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Vidyaa
First of all Thanks a ton for updating ...😊 You're most welcome dear 😊 <3

Coming to the update...

I loved it !!

Wonderful update Gina Madame!👏 Thank you jee <3 😃

I wonder itna kya hai Romeo aur Juliet ke baare me discuss karne ke lie...😉 Kya nahi hai ke Romeo aur Juliet baare me koyi discuss karle?😆

And ya , I love Prem's Dadi ...😳😳 Unhi ke wajah se ye sabh ho raha hai ... I luv daadi too😆

But .. Kya Priya haan karegi itni jaldi is shaadi ke lie??? Hmmm... Lets see.. Hailaa shaadi already? Itni jaldi kya zaroraat hai yaar?😉

This is the first time I've heard about Ma ki Pooja ..Sachme aisa hota hai kya?? No I made it up. But isn't it sweet though?😆

I can envisage Prem ke mann me kitne laddoo Phoot rahe honge...😛😛😛

Fantastic update Gina !👏👏👏 Thank you once again <3

Loveeeeeeddddddddddd it ! I'm very happy you did <3

Thanks a ton for updating ! You're welcome once again 😊

Vidya😊😊

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#128

Vidya-

Kya hai discuss karne ke lie? Hailaaa I need to teach you sooo many things Vidya ji 😉

And you're right I won't let them get married, even if the two of them beg me too 😆

Lastly, I know you're a very sweet & good girl 😊

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey
Vidya-

Kya hai discuss karne ke lie? Hailaaa I need to teach you sooo many things Vidya ji 😉

And you're right I won't let them get married, even if the two of them beg me too 😆

Lastly, I know you're a very sweet & good girl 😊

😲You know I'm a swwet girl????????????

Oh no !!

I was about to give you a surprise..

Vidya😊

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: Vidyaa

😲You know I'm a swwet girl????????????

Oh no !!

I was about to give you a surprise..

Vidya😊

Of course I know. Everyone knows 😊 Don't tell me you didn't knew that ? 😲😲

Aww but you've already given me a surprise- from the moment I got to know u 😉

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