FF:Priya ka Prem- part 30, page 65, 27th sept!!!!

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Radika

@svforever

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

I'm glad that you're in a good mood dear 😊
😊

Arre sorry baba if I have upset you .. But the update will be posted on monday 😔 If u want i can get u a preview ? 😆 VIP access hehe

You didn't upset me! Fine, I'll wait! But, I'd would to get the preview! Coollll.....VIP access.

Aur tum young lady, jaldi se update karo ! Gina is tooooo exited. And your fanfic is amazing, brilliant, stupendous, super-duper 😃😃😃

Mai jaldi update karongi lekin app bhi jaldi se update kariye! But you're ff is also amazing, brillant, stupendous, super-duper, beautiful, and unique.

Will hopefully hear from ya soon. Btw do u like the nickname Rads? 😉

Sure, I like it!

Luv ya <3

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: svforever

I'll pm you the preview, if u want 😊 But the update is tomorrow. And this week will consist of 3 updates. So I hope that's enough 😆
Awww thank u queen of sweetness for those sweet words 😳

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#103

Hello ji !

I'm back with part 14. Hope you like it !

Priya got embarrased and looked down. Did Prem just say beautiful, to her?
-Erhmm, I mean you have a beautiful smile ... Prem said quickly
-Smile? she asked and blushed even more.
-Smile? ... Umm I mean your teeth, he came up with quickly not realizing what he was saying.
-I have beautiful teeth? she asked and looked at him confused
-Umm ... yes?
She looked at him. He looked down. He had really embarrassed himself now.
-I know, she responded
-Huh? he said surprised
-I know .. I have beautiful teeth she said and smiled.
Prem looked confused.
-Prem, relax. It was a joke , she said
He smiled, but still didn't say anything.
-And Prem ... You have also beautiful teeth, she said, and blushed.
Prem didn't knew what to say. He was just shocked. What did Priya mean by that?
They had an awkard silence for 2 minutes. Neither said a word. Then Prem broke the silence by saying:
-Shall we go?
Priya nodded and both of them sat in Prems red cabriolet and headed towards Priyas house. They didn't speak in the car. Prem was too busy thinking about Priya. He has never met a girl like her. She was extremely smart, just like himself. And she has a wonderful personality. She's kind, sweet, caring, polite and honest. She's just ... Perfect. He remembered what his dadi said. "I see love between you and Priya" How could she see that? But dadi is never wrong."Get to know her better" He looked at her. He did like spending time with her. But, love? ...

How could dad see love between me and Prem? How? She remembered what her dad said "It seems like kismat has given you Prem" .. She looked at him. He was a good guy. He was smart, decent, comes from a good family and was very funny. And he's very cute too 😳 She likes spending time with him. But, love? ... Hai rabba yeh mujhe kya ho raha hai? both of them thought. ( Oh God what is happening to me )

After 5 minutes they reached Priyas house.
-Thanks for the ride , she said
He smiled and nodded. Priya remembered what her dad had said "Get to know him better, for my sake"
-Umm if you want we can do the assignment at my house now, in that case we won't get behind , she suggested
-Are you sure? I thought you weren't feeling good.
-I'm feeling better now, she said and smiled.
-Ok sure.

He parked the car and they walked to Priyas house. On the way they met two middle-aged women. They looked very nosy ( imagine Karuna & chachi )
Prem remembered them. He had met them the last time he was here. ( if u don't remember the ladies, look at page 1 - part 3 )
Priya looked worried. She didn't like them. They were always gossiping and making up false rumours.
- Priya tumhari "dost" phirse yaha aagaya ? ( Priya your friend came here once again ? ) Karuna asked
- Ji humko kuch kaam hai... , Priya said ( Yes, we have some work )
-... Kaise kaam? Chachi interrupped and asked
- Arre aap dono kyun school ki kaam ghar me kar rahe ho? ( Why are you two doing school work at home ? ) Karuna asked
OHH they are sooo annoying, Priya thought. She didn't knew what to say. Prem saw that Priya was struggiling. Geez what's wrong with these ladies, he thought. He better say something.
- Kyun aunty ji, aapko koyi aitraaz hai ke main yaha araha hoon? Prem said ( Why aunty, does it bother you that I'm coming here ? )
- Humko kyun koyi aitraaz hoo, chachi said with a false tone ( Why would it be bother us ? )
- Acha theek hai toh .. No problem, He said and gave the ladies a smile. A fake smile.
They were speachless. Priya smiled. She couldn't believe that Prem had just done that.
- Let's go Priya, he said. And both of them walked away.
She looked at him. He was such a nice guy.
- Thanks, you saved me from "the aunties" she said with a scary voice..
- Anytime, I'm here for you ! He said and gave her a cute smile.
- You smile alot, do you know that? she told him
- I know .. My daadi says I have three different types of smiles. Want to see?
She nodded. And he started his "smiling show"
-Okaay here comes smile number one, he said and gave a shy, blushing smile.
- Waahhh, very good, Priya said and gave a thumb up
-And here's smile number 2, he said and gave a big wide smile and showed his teeth.
-Woahh, very shiny teeth , Priya said.
- And here's smile number 3... he said but right in that moment a wind started to blow. Priyas hair came on her face. And she smiled. She looked so beautiful like an angel, Prem thought and smiled when he looked at her. Priya looked at him. He was smiling, but this smile was different. It was really sweet.
She clapped her hands.
- I liked number three the best, she said.
- What? he thought. But he hadn't even showed her number three yet. Then what was she talking about ?

Okay so that was part 14, did you like it ? 😊 Sorry if it was too long 😳
Take care !

Luv, Gina <3

Edited by theflyingdonkey - 16 years ago

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#104

Aha!!

Wonderful update yet again Gina !

I loveeeeeeeeed it !

Ya , I do remember the duplicate Karuna Maasi and Chaachi !!

Mast hain dono 😛😛

So useless they are , dont they have any work in their house???

Uff!!

I loveed the update Gina !!!

And I thought it was short😛

Well , Wonderful update !

Thanks so much for updating !!

Vidya😊

Edited by Vidyaa - 16 years ago

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: Vidyaa
ATB Reserved!!

Hehe wow Vidya that was quick ! 😆

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Monica

@_Monu_

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#106

HEY GINA

GREAT UPDT !!

LOVE IT!!

PRYA N PREM VERY VERY CUTEYY!!!

CONT SOON

TAKE UR TIME

SEE YAA

LOVE UUU

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Vidya

@Vidyaa

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Hehe wow Vidya that was quick ! 😆

Well , thats the asar of your FFs!😉😊😊

Vidya😊

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: _Monu_
HEY GINA
GREAT UPDT !!

LOVE IT!!

PRYA N PREM VERY VERY CUTEYY!!!

CONT SOON

TAKE UR TIME

SEE YAA

LOVE UUU

Hello Monica ji !

Hehe thanks <3 I know Prem aur Priya kitni sweet hai naah?😆
I will update again on wednesday
Luv ya , <3 <3

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SDforever

@SDforever

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#109

Hey gina!!

WONDERFUL AS USUAL!!!!!! keep writing, i really enjoy ur FFs. Priya and prem are so cute like our very own SD. Cant wait for ur next update

Luv, Neha

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challo

@ekdoteenchar

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Vidyaa
Aha!!
Wonderful update yet again Gina ! thank u dear 😊

I loveeeeeeeeed it ! Ok now ur being too kind

Ya , I do remember the duplicate Karuna Maasi and Chaachi !!

Mast hain dono 😛😛 Hehehehe you're so funny 🤣

So useless they are , dont they have any work in their house??? Well apparently not ..

Uff!!

I loveed the update Gina !!! Ok now you're being super kind <3

And I thought it was short😛 Hehehe oh really? This was probably my longest update

Well , Wonderful update !

Thanks so much for updating !! Dosti mein no sorry, no thank you 😆

Vidya😊

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