FF: Yeh Pyar Kya Hai?...[Part 40-Pg. 43] 8/14!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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This is my new FF. Hope the intro is good. Please tell me if you find anything you don't like or if you don't want me to continue. Feel free to criticize. I have a good story in mind so hopefully you guys enjoy this. Tell me is there is anything you want me to change. Perhaps...names, writing layout/style...etc..

Yeh Pyar Kya Hai?

INTRO-
The scene- A view of an apartment complex. Now it's in a flat. We see the kitchen in which there is a girl who we see from her back. She has her hair up in a bun (the kind of bun where pieces of her stick out) and an apron on, stirring food on the stove.

We hear a distant scream approaching- Divyanka! Divyanka!

A girl comes in the kitchen yelling that name. The girl is wearing jeans and a t-shirt with her hair in a half pony. She's pretty. Anyway, Divyanka turns around. (Of course, she is our Divz.)

Divyanka- What happened, Riya?

Riya- Are you ready for college tomorrow?

Divyanka- *her face loses it's spark* I don,t know, Riya. I just don't feel like going . I mean I can just take that office job I was offered.

Riya- Divya, you're going to college and that's it. You have to be social. And college is a pretty good place to get social. We all want you to come. You can hang out with me, Yash, Sanju, or even Anju. So be excited because you're going no matter what.

Divyanka- *sighs* I guess, but even if one guy even tries to get with me-

Riya- *laughs* I know. I know. You're going to kill him. Divyanka, just relax. Okay?

Divyanka- Okay, now help me bring dinner to the table.

On the dining table-

Divyanka, Riya, and two other girls are sitting on the table. These two girls are Anjali and Sanjana. Anjali is wearing a tank top and has tons of make-up on her face. Her hair is straightened and let down. Sanjana is wearing a salwar kameez. She has glasses on and her hair is in a low ponytail. They are all chatting when-

Divyanka- So how is this college?

Anjali- Well, it's fun and has a lot of cute boys!

Sanjana- It has really good teacher and professors.

Riya- *smirks at their remarks* It's a pretty good college.

Divyanka- Okay, then. Are there guys like Yash there or guys not like him?

Riya- Well, it's both. I'll be honest. There are a lot of guys who hit on girls but there are also a lot of guys like Yash who respect women.

Sanjana- Yeah, but don't worry, everything is great.

Divyanka- Cool. It's going to be fun.

Anjali- I got to go guys.

Riya- Where?

Anjali- Club with Sharad. *she takes a plate and leaves*

Divyanka- Who is this Sharad? I've heard of him for like the past two days. All I know is that she's going out with him.

Riya- She's obviously going out with him but it's not really a stable relationship.

Divyanka- What do you mean?

Sanjana- Let's say, Sharad is not the type of guy you want to be around.

Suddenly the scene switches to a club with a guy, in a leather jacket and jeans, talking with his friends at the bar. His back is turned to us.

The scene switches back to the dining table-

Riya- He is kind of the flirt of the college. He goes out with like 5 different girls a week.

Sanjana- The only girls he has a long relationship with are good girls. But that "long" relationship lasts for a week only usually.

Riya- The only reason he is with Anjali is because he's dating probably two other girls like her at the same time. And you know..the Anjali type of girls...wouldn't mind.

Divyanka- Yeah.

The scene goes back to the club-

The guy is drinking with his friends. They're having a drinking contest. Everyone is cheering them on.

A girl- Sharad!

Sharad turns around and of course it's no other than our own'Sharad=)

So in case you didn't figure out...

Sharad- He's the BAD BOY. (In my last FF: He's like Jay but he doesn't force himself on girls.) He gets drunk, goes out with a bunch of girls, and just has fun. Almost every girl, naughty or nice, wants to be with him. Sharad doesn't hear no's that often. He flirts and just goes out with the girl for a day or two. When he's dating bad girls, he goes out with more than one at a time. With good girls, he sticks to them for a week tops and then dumps them if they get serious about the relationship. So he's the hunk, heartbreaker, and flirt of the college. He believes in love but has no rush to get involved with it.

Divyanka- She's a strong girl. She doesn't cry or anything. She isn't open to many people. The reason for this will be revealed soon. She hates guys. She has a few guy friends but doesn't like guys to get too close to her nor does she let them get close to her. She's modern but at the same time has morals and values. Divyanka's the type that can stand up for herself. She's dated quite a few guys but that was a long time ago. Now in her life, she believes she only has room in her life for her studies and friends. Nothing and no one else. She's the girl who would be the one to slap a guy. Like usually, you know how when a girl is being misbehaved with, she is shown as if she is scared. Well, with Divyanka, she'd like beat the heck out of the guy who'd lay a hand on her. But she isn't the serious girl. She loves to have a good time.

~~New people and other characters will be explained through the updates~~

Thanks for reading,

Kalee=)

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indiandoll89 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I loved the intro Kalee!!!!! 😃😃😃
It's already so cute and chilled out! oooo sharad a bad boy?? I'm definitely excited to see that! 😉😳
Posted: 16 years ago
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well like I'm already addicted!

but what if sharad reads ur FF

Imagine his face after reading it😆😆😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Love the intro,also the characters,SD,so cool,continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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indiandoll89- Thank you😊...what's your name btw?
Koshika- Thanks...hhaha...i wonder what he's gonna think😆
Manusha- Thank you so much Manusha!😃
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***NOTE***
To My Last FF Readers- My last FF will be updated and will end soon..i didn't forget about it. =}
I really want to change the name...please choose...
Do Ajnabee Ka Rishta
Ehsaas
What the heart wants...
Yeh Pyar Kya Hai
I don't like any of them but for some reason I can't think of anymore so please feel free to suggest
Posted: 16 years ago
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what about
Pyaar: Ek Ajnabee Ehsaas..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ok so before I tell you how wonderful this is.. I know you might not believe me but like a few days back I felt like starting an FF on Sharad and Divyanka but me being the scared type I guess you took the stage. Awesome job! I seriously love it already! Sharad and Divz are complete opposites...You're a much better writer than me and to think you're younger than me! I feel ashamed at myself after reading this..How do you do it Kalee? Fantastic job!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Koshika- That's a nice one. =)...I might not change it. But if I do, it probably will be yours.
Moomoo- THANKS! 😃Duh I believe you! I know how it is when you think you're going to do something and before you do it someone else does it as well. If you want you can start another FF with SD. I don't mind=) And second of all, you're the better writer. So shut up! I could never pull off their big nigth as good as you do.👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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KAleeee!!!!!!!! LOVEEEEEEEEEEE it!!! its so awsummmm
omggg i love love love love love love loveee ittt
addicted!!!! u gotta update nowwww
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I defintely love it Kalee! and the title's perfect too!
My name's Meera btw! 😊

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