FF: Yeh Pyar Kya Hai?...[Part 40-Pg. 43] 8/14! - Page 2

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Originally posted by: katy55

what about

Pyaar: Ek Ajnabee Ehsaas..

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Thanks everyone!
I'll post like LATE TONIGHT becuase I've been busy with school and I have to go somewhere soon. Will be back late. i'll try to post it soon though=)
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Part 1

Sharad turns around and sees a girl. He walks up to her. She's wearing a mini skirt and a crop top.

Sharad- Hey, babe.

Snehali- Can we go home now, Sharad?

Sharad- Yeah, let's go. One second, let me tell the boys.

Snehali nods. Sharad walks back to the bar.

Sharad- Guys.

We see two guys turn around. Vikram and Hiten turn around. (They both look the same: Pretty good looking and a bad boy look. Of course, Sharad's better.)

Sharad- Listen, I'm going to go home with Snehali.

Vikram- *glances at Snehali over Sharad's shoulder and back at Sharad* Why are you leaving already?

Hiten- That too, with her?

Sharad- First, we got back together. And I'm leaving so we can catch up. *smiles with a naughty look*

Hiten- *laughs* Yaar, you'll never change.

Sharad- *smirks* I don't want to. Now, Vicki give me the keys. *extends his hand out*

Vikram- *handing him the keys* Here you go and make sure you guys are in your room.

Sharad- Yeah, yeah. When are you guys coming home?

Vikram- Later on. Maybe at like 12?

Sharad- Okay, see you then. *he is just about to turn around when he remembers something. He turns back to Vikram and Hiten.* Oh yeah, tell Anjali I had to go home for some reason. Just make something up, okay? Bye, guys! *he runs off*

Hiten- *smirks* He's such a player.

Vikram- I know. I could never balance out that many girls in my life.

They both laugh.

The next day-

Sharad is in the college hallway talking to some other girl. She seems like a decent type wearing jeans and a full sleeved shirt.

Girl- Yeah, we can go to your house and study.

Sharad- Yeah, that'd be great. I just love chemistry. *looks at her as if he's an innocent angel*

Girl- You're such a good guy. I don't get why people say you're bad. *smiles in a "I like you" type of way*

Sharad- Well, you're a really good girl. So how about at 8?

Girl- Sure! I'll see you then.

Sharad- Bye.

Girl- Bye. *she leaves*

Sharad looks at her walk away and a naughty grin forms on his face. He turns around when he bumps into a girl. Her books fall on the floor. It's Divyanka. She sighs and then goes down to pick them up without looking at Sharad. Sharad goes down too. He stares at her as she picks up her books. He tries to think of what he should say. Is she the modern type or the decent type?...He thinks. Before he can figure it out, he notices Divyanka getting up. He gets up as well with only one book in hand.

Divyanka- *taking the book from him* Thanks…*smiles in a friendly way*

Sharad- No problem. Are you new?

Divyanka- Yeah, it's my first day.

Sharad- Cool, well, I'm running late. I'll see you around.

Divyanka- Yeah.

In the hallway, later on-

Sharad is talking to Vikram and Hiten.

Sharad- Dude, that girl was hot!

Hiten- Then, why didn't you talk to her more?

Sharad- She was wearing capris and a shirt. She didn't seem like the bad girl type though. So I didn't know how to exactly approach her.

Vikram- Wait, are you talking about the new girl, Divyanka?

Sharad- I forgot to ask her name. I guess that's her though.

Vikram- Then, forget her. She won't do anything with you.

Sharad- Why?

Vikram- I heard that she is really mean.

Hiten- From who?

Vikram- Shekhar. He said that he tried to talk to her and she was rude.

Sharad- Okay, first of all that's Shekhar. And Shekhar looks like the bad type of guy. I, however, can pull off the good boy look. Before you know it, that girl will be in my bed.

Vikram- I don't know, yaar. I don't think she's that type of girl.

Sharad- We'll see…

At the cafeteria-

Divyanka, Riya, Sanjana, and three other girls- Kruthika, Neelam, and Rachna are sitting on a table and chatting.

Divyanka- College has been pretty good. Some guys hit on me but I yelled at them. And some guy was misbehaving. He sat next to me in one of my classes and he put his hand on my lap. I gave him one right across the face.

Riya- *laughs* Good, some guys need a big one. Did you meet any good guys?

Divyanka- Yeah, some. But I didn't really talk to them. I talked to Yash a lot.

Sanjana- Speaking of Yash, where is he?

Riya- Studying with Anjali for some major exam. *They chatted and talked some more*

Divyanka- Oh yeah, there was this really nice guy. He was polite and seemed sweet.

Rachna- Who was it?

Neelam- You sound like you like him.

Divyanka- Don't be stupid. I don't. *her smile fades as it looks like she remembers something*

Riya- *seeing Divyanka's change in mood* Guys, don't say that. Divya, they were just kidding. Cheer up! SO who was it?

Divyanka- *shows a weak smile and looks around* Umm…it was…*spots Sharad* oh him!

Everyone looks to see who she is talking about.

Kruthika- Him?!

Sanjana- He's sweet?

Divyanka- Yeah…why?

Riya- That's Sharad.

Divyanka- Seriously?

Neelam- Yeah, hun.

Riya- How long did you talk to him?

Divyanka- Like 1 minute. We bumped into each other and he helped me pick up my books.

Rachna- Oh that's probably why you think he's sweet. Trust me, once you get to know him, he's not going to be so sweet.

Sanjana- Divyanka, don't get involved with him. You know what he does?

Divyanka- Yeah, he dates a bunch of girls.

Kruthika- That's not it. He sleeps with them, cheats on them, and dumps them.

Rachna- He went out with me for a week like during the first year of college. Then when I said I wasn't okay with him being with other girls at the same time, he said he couldn't handle me. And he just dumped me.

Divyanka- He's such a jerk! I hate guys like him. He sounds just like Ro-…*she pauses but then continues* someone I knew.

Riya and Sanjana look at each other with concerned expressions.

Riya- Okay, just don't interact with him. He's not the type of guy who would be okay to just talk to. But anyway, let's change the topic.

Everyone agrees…but then Divyanka's mind starts to wander during the whole conversation.

This was a little slow. I just had to explain their characters through. Next update, Sharad will approach to her. Sorry I didn't post it up last night. I came home and started the update but then I was too tired. But anyway thank you everyone for the support. It means A LOT. I'm open to criticism so just tell me anything I should change or something you don't like. Feel free to ask questions about anyhting you don't like.

Thanks for reading=)

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