FF: Yeh Pyar Kya Hai?...[Part 40-Pg. 43] 8/14! - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
mushi- i'm going to start it soon...=)...i had to go somewhere....and then i came back and started my other update...so now that i posted that one im gonna take a a lil break and start it soon... 😊
shobbybee- i'm glad you like it=) whats your name?
ILL BE POSTING THE UPDATE MOST PROBABLY TOMORROW....sorry...im just really tired
Edited by kmishra - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
Omg Kalee you started one more FF!!!!!
God I'm addicted to your FF already!
The storyline is so different from other and that's a positive thing.
Wow... Sharad is really a jerk... only one night + one week guy... he only uses girls...
I really liked this new story!
Cont soon!!!
Love, Charri<3
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
omg kalee...u should write a book!!! ur an amazing writer!!!omg...sharad!!! sucha player!!! and divyanka..she sounds like the god url type...but she will stand up 4 herself, so that's good. I LOVEDDDD ITTTTTTTTTT!!! cont soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2

Finally, it was time to go home. Divyanka was so tired. She was walking out of college. She stopped a few feet away from the college and started searching through her purse for her car keys. Suddenly, she noticed a shadow over her. She looked up from her purse to see Sharad.

Sharad- Hey.

Divyanka- Hey. *Her tone was rude. She moved to the side and started to walk. Sharad jumped in front of her.*

Sharad- Did I do something wrong?

Divyanka- What do you want from me? *Divyanka looked at him with a mean look*

Sharad- I want to be friends. *He had his innocent face on.*

Divyanka- Okay, just quit your little act. I know all about you. So don't think that just because I'm new, I'll just say yes.

Sharad- Okay, well, what do you know about me?

Divyanka- Sharad Malhotra, flirt of the college. You date girls, you sleep with them, you take advantage of them, and you break their hearts.

Sharad- Okay, so what? That doesn't mean I want to do anything with you. What if I just want to be friends?

Divyanka- Oh please! Save that for some other girl. I've known some guys like you. For your type of guys, girls can't be just friends with you. You guys will make your way into a girl's heart and then lure her right into your bed. Once the girl gets serious about the relationship, you guys will dump her. Isn't that right, Mr. Malhotra?

Sharad- *Back to his naughty look* Wow, I'm impressed. One thing you might not know, though, is that I can get any girl I want including you.

Divyanka- Well, don't be so sure. *points his finger at him* You ca- *Her phone rings and she picks it up*

Divyanka- Hello?

Riya (on the other line) - Divya, where are you? We've been waiting by the car forever.

Divyanka- Oh, sorry. I'm on my way.

Riya- Bye. Hurry up, please.

Divyanka- Yeah, bye. *hangs up and looks at Sharad who was just standing in front of her* Okay, bye. Have fun with your little sluts.

Sharad- Thanks. I will. *He flashed a wicked smile and moved to the side so Divyanka could pass.*

Divyanka rolled her eyes and left.

Dinner-

Yash was over their apartment for dinner. (Anjali, Sanjana, Riya, and Divyanka all live together in one flat.

Yash- *A decent, good looking guy* Divya, why are you so upset?

Divyanka- Nothing…I'm just tired.

Riya- *knowing the actual reason for her mood* Divyanka, don't think about him. So, did Sharad talk to you?

Anjali- Divyanka, you're interested in Sharad?

Divyanka- No, I hate him.

Yash- He's not a great guy. We are friends though. Just like formal friends. Anjali, I don't get what you see in him.

Anjali- He's cute and everything.

Sanjana- Don't you mind that he goes out with other girls at the same time?

Anjali- It's college, Sanjana. Learn to have some fun! Sharad and I have an open relationship. That's it. In fact, I'm going over to his house, tonight.

Divyanka- Can we please change the topic? *They all agreed and Anjali shrugged*

Yash- Yes, please. So Divyanka, what's up?

They continued to talk. Divyanka's mood became better as they talked. Yash kept staring at Divyanka. Of course, she didn't notice.

The next day-

Sharad was talking to Hiten in the library.

Hiten- *laughs* She said that?

Sharad- Yeah, but tonight, I heard she's coming to the party.

Hiten- So…?

Sharad- I'm going to somehow get Anjali to call her into one of the rooms.

Hiten- You're not going to rape her, are you?

Sharad- No, you idiot. I still have to think about what I'm going to do. Trust me, I'm going to get her, though. Her and her stupid ego. I mean, not one girl has said no to me ever. The only time I've heard a no is if the girl was taken. I can get any girl I want.

Hiten- Why do you care so much about Divyanka?

Sharad- I don't care about her. The only reason I want her is because I like her body. And you know that.

Hiten- Yeah, I know. But you're not going to like force yourself on her, are you? I mean what else can you do to a strong headed girl?

Sharad- Make her feel bad for you. I'm going to make her feel so bad for me that she will have to go out with me. Then, slowly, I'll make her fall for me. And then…I think you know. *He winks*

Things will speed up soon. My next update will probably be longer. I'll try to squeeze in another update today. Thanks to everyone for the support! Hope it was okay…

Thanks for reading=)

--Kalee

*BTW please tell me if there is anything you want me to change in my writing. Or anyhting you didn't like*
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
first

Loved it omg yash likes Divyanka..and sharad is soo bad..love divz attitude!! loved the upd..contineu soon kalee...love your FFs

Edited by mushtari - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
Omg... This Sharad is so naughty and bad...
He is going to try himself on Divz now... I hope Divz can change
Sharad into a good person!
Oh gosh, I love Divz's attitude! That is how a real woman should be!
Don't afraid of anything and can stand up for what she will and she can stand in front of a guy's face and say mean things without being scared! I love Divyanka!
Cont soon! Oh oh oh!!! One more today? YAY!!!!
Love, Charri<3
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
omgg!!! loved loved loveddd it!!!
yash likes divz....and omg sharad!!! i would smack him...lolz...well if he was realli like that..hehe
good good good divyanka!! she stood up 4 herself...i wonder wat sharad will do
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeesh 1 more?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
Love it Kalee,amazing update,continue soon please.i so love their characters.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
OMG!
This FF is so good!
I Love It...and it's a SD Storyy!!
im like already exctied for the next
updateee..but alsoo your other FF
since it's ending soon i've learnt to deal
with it LOL buh please continue soon!!
its really exciting i wanna know who ths "Ro-" is hehe..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40

Part 3-

At the girls' apartment-

Everyone was getting ready for the party. The party was of one of the girl's in school. She invited pretty much the whole college. This was an annual party for the girl, Maya. She was rich so she made the party amazing with a lot of entertainment and things. Anyway the four girls were in their rooms. Riya and Divyanka shared a room and Sanjana and Anjali shared a room. Sanjana didn't take too long getting ready. She was the type of girl who didn't care about her appearance that much. She was really pretty but she would keep her hair in a low pony at all times. She always wore glasses. Anjali, on the other hand, stayed in the bathroom for hours doing her hair and make up. It was a formal type of party. Riya and Divyanka got ready together. By the time they finished, they all looked enchanting. Anjali looked hot, but you could tell she was wearing way too much make up. Sanjana was looking pretty with her hair down and no glasses. Riya was looking beautiful with the perfect amount of make up. Divyanka was looking gorgeous, a little more than Riya. Overall they were all looking great.

Riya was wearing, something like this with a sparkly shawl. Her hair was down and straight. - http://www.sydneyscloset.com/asp/product.asp?categoryid=34&catalogid=1634

Anjali was wearing this, except it was a little more decorated with sparkles and it was in blue. Her hair was down too but her hair was curly.-

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Sanjana was wearing this, with a nice shawl covering her back and shoulders. Her hair was in a nice, half pony.-

http://www.sydneyscloset.com/asp/product.asp?categoryid=73&catalogid=347

Divyanka was wearing something like, this but a little better and she had an elegant shawl as well. Her hair was down and wavy.-

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They all complimented each other. Soon, Yash came to pick the girls up. He came along with Trishal and Sameer. Trishal was average looking. Sameer was pretty cute. They were going as couples. They weren't dating of course but everyone took a date to this party, just to hang out with. Yash was going with Divyanka because Divyanka trusted him not to get too close to her. She knew that he would stay in his limits. Riya was going with Sameer. They were just people who knew each other. She never really talked to him. Trishal was with Sanjana. They both were into books but were also shy. Anjali was just going to meet up with guys at the party. They were all formally dressed in suits. After exchanging many compliments, they left for the party at Maya's mansion.

At the party- Sharad was talking to two girls. They were girls like Anjali. He was talking about how hot they were and that he would love to get together with them some time. The two girls were blushing, which made Sharad happy. He was wearing a suit and looking hot of course. After talking to the girls, Sharad went to the bar with Hiten and Vikram. They talked about their dates. The topic of Divyanka came up-

Vikram- Are you still doing that thing with Divyanka?

Hiten- Oh yeah, are you?

Sharad- I don't know. I'm not really in the mood. I mean she's not that great. Well, she is pretty sexy and has an amazing body. But that chick has an attitude. I'm not really in the mood to deal with that right now.

Vikram- Yeah, just do it some other time.

They talk about other things when-

Hiten- Um, guys?

Sharad and Vikram saw Hiten was staring at something. They looked around to see what he was staring at. They spotted Divyanka's whole group.

Vikram- Damn! Those girls are looking hot!

Sharad stared at the whole group. He noticed Divyanka.

Hiten- Sharad, are you still not going through with the plan? I mean, look at her!

Sharad- I'm definitely going through with the plan. Of course, I'm going to put in a few minor changes.

Vikram- What do you mean…?

Sharad- You'll see…

He leaves as Vikram and Hiten look at each other, worried.

Later on-

Divyanka is dancing with Yash. They have their distances. It's not a slow song so there is no need to be close. Suddenly someone bumped into Divyanka, dropping juice on her arm and shawl. Divyanka was irritated.

Hiten- Sorry.
Yash- Ay! Can't you watch where you're going?

Divyanka- It's okay, Yash. Don't yell. *looks at Hiten* Luckily it didn't get on my dress so I guess it's okay. Do you know where the bathroom is?

Hiten- Oh yeah, I only know of one. It's upstairs the 3rd door to your right, I think.

Divyanka- Thanks. Yash, I'll be back in a minute.

She leaves as Hiten apologizes once again.

In the hallway-

Divyanka comes out of the bathroom and is walking down the hall to the stairs while fixing her shawl. Suddenly, she is pulled in a room. She yelps. Then she is pushed to the center of the room. She loses her balance a bit with her head facing the bed on her right. Hair is on her face. She steadies herself and looks straight moving her hair back. Finally, the guy turns around locking the door behind him. Guy is Sharad, obviously. Divyanka looks at him with anger.

Divyanka- How dare you? How dare you even touch me? *Sharad keeps walking toward her with a crooked smile. Divyanka, disregards him walking toward her, and continues to yell at him.*

Sharad- Shut up! *He was close to her. She stared at him with piercing eyes. Not even a little fear was shown. This confused Sharad. He observed her features and body. His voice became scruffy and low as he came closer to her face.* Your body is irresistible. *He ran a finger down the side if her face. Divyanka just stood there. It looked like she was about to explode.* I need your body…

He was just about to kiss her when…Divyanka gave him a big slap. Sharad's head jerked to his left. He held his head as he turned it to Divyanka. His face was red with fury. He raised his hand…

Sharad- You b-

He stopped, noticing Divyanka's face. The look on her face made it seem like she was actually challenging him to hit her. He formed his hand, which was in the air, into a fist and slowly brought it down to his side.

No, this girl won't agree like this. She needs to be taught a lesson…He thought. Suddenly, an evil idea ran across Sharad's mind. He quickly changed his facial expression.

Sharad- *looking down, as if he was about to cry* I'm sorry, Divyanka. I don't what got into me. *looks up* I must be so stupid to do this. Sorry, I know I don't deserve your forgiveness but please, try to forgive me.

Divyanka- Seriously, your act isn't going to work with me, okay? Like I said, I know guys like you. If you think you're going to make me feel bad for you, forget it!

Sharad- I understand but trust me, that's not what I'm doing. I just never had a girl say no to me. And I'm not the type of guy who makes up these things. That's the truth. It's your choice to believe me.

Divyanka- Well, I don't believe you. Now if you'll excuse me? *She left, walking right past him.*

Divyanka, I'll make you believe me and then once you I'll make you regret this slap so much. You can't even imagine how much you will regret it…He thought…

The scene switches to Divyanka, Yash, Sanjana, Riya, Trishal and Sameer in the car-

Anjali is at the dance. It's like 12 AM.

Yash- I bet he was just faking it.

Divyanka- Maybe he was. But he might not be at the same time.

Riya- Divyanka, he's not the type of guy to actually apologize. He's hurt too many girls to be that type of guy.

Sanjana- I really think someone needs to give him a taste of his own medicine.

Trishal- Yeah, Sharad is a jerk!

Divyanka- Well, we don't have to anything. We just shouldn't get involved.

Sameer- I don't know, I think Sanjana has a good point. He really is a big jerk. What really annoys me is that girls, who have been hurt by him, still try to cling onto him. They never let go. They just lower their morals and are okay with Sharad's many relationships.

Yash- Are you sure, you're not just jealous?

Sameer- Shut up! I'm just saying Sharad is jerk. And I'm not jealous of any jerk.

Riya- Guys, I have an idea.

Divyanka- For what?

Riya- To give Sharad a taste of his own medicine!

Sanjana- What is it!?

Divyanka- It's not that big. He's not our problem.

Trishal- Divyanka, do you know how many friends he hurt of ours?

Sameer- Some girls were really upset. They believed that they loved him. Sharad, though, *scoffs* just broke every girl's heart. That too, all sweet girls' hearts.

Divyanka- He's really that bad?

Yash- Yeah…

Riya- So you want to hear my plan…?

Divyanka- Yeah, what is it?

Riya- Well, we can get a girl Sharad's interested in and she has to pretend that she likes him back. That girl will make Sharad fall in love with her. Then, as soon as he actually gets serious, the girl dumps him, leaving him heartbroken.

Sanjana- What if Sharad doesn't fall in love with her?

Riya- We can try…if not then okay. But there's no harm in trying is there?

Trishal- No, but who is the girl going to be? It has to be some girl who would never fall for Sharad.

Riya- I know someone…

All of them- Who?

Riya looks at Divyanka.

Divyanka- Me!?

I'll try to update this week again. Hope it was okay. I don't have time to proofread it so I'm sorry if there's any mistakes.

Thanks for reading=)

Kalee

DEDICATED TO MUSHI😳
Edited by kmishra - 16 years ago

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