FF: Sucha Pyaar NOTE page 56 - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago
LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
sooooo flipping cute =)
continue asap hun cuz i ant wait till their honeymoon =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
beautiful job! that was really cute!
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome update!
aww sagar's smile makes vidya's frown turn upside down.
can't wait to read ur next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
OMG LOVED IT...sorry i commented late..i went out lol anyways i LOVED it ...sooooooo cute..thanks for the detication...continue ASAP
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwww^^ np
and THANK U EVERYONE FOR UR LOVELY COMMENTS!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
yesh,,..when? im soo impatient...especially fro YOUR ff
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Posted: 17 years ago
A lovely cute update......☺️
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Posted: 17 years ago
This one is dedcated to Anki...=] everyone enjoy!!! Oh and i made this one especially long coz i mite not be able to update 2moro..but i mite still if i ahve time.
Recap: wedding, SR, honeymoon tickets.
Vidya and Sagar were both in their room now packing. Vidya was still mad about Sagar kissing her this morning...but not that mad. She was pretending, to see what he would do.
Sagar: Vidya u arent wearing saris when we go there r u?
Vidya: Kyun? I'll wear whatever I want to!
Sagar: Are u crazy? Paris jah rahi ho, aur saris?
No reply form Vidya. Sagar realized she was upset. He walked behind her and wrapped his arms around her.
Sagar: Vidya?
Vidya: Kya? (mad voice)
Sagar: I'm sorry.
Vidya: Ok.
Sagar: What?
Vidya: Han, ok.
Sagar: U forgave me?
Vidya turned around, and she tapped his nose with her index finger.
Vidya: No bhoodu!
She turned around again leaving Sagar smiling. But Sagar decided to be....mischeiveous...if that's what u wanna call it.
Sagar: Nahi...main janta hoon ke tum jhoot bol rahi ho.
Vidya: Kyun tumhe aisa lagta hai?
Sagar: Bus aise hi.
Vidya turned around with a worried look on her face.
Vidya: I'm not mad at u.
Sagar: Prove it.
Vidya: (in her head, not aloud) Aab main kya karoon? Ummm...han!
Vidya walked closer to him. Sagar inside was smilling thisssssssssssss big. She kissed his forehead. (was standing on her tippietoes, remember she's a 2 or 3 inches shorter then him)
She was gonna kiss him again, but she lost her and she grabbed Sagar's shirt and they both fell on the bed. Vidya's grip on Sagar's shirt was still tight. They had a very intense eyelock when Sagar leaned closer. Vidya closed her eyes...becoz..well u know what she was expecting. Her grip on his shirt completly loosened. He smiled, and got up. Vidya opened her eyes and got up too. She was feeling sad inside, because she wanted a kiss. Sagar could tell by looking at her eyes. He said
Sagar: That looks great!!!
Vidya: I dunno, its a lil short....
Sagar: Oh come on Vidya..
Vidya: Fine....
They packed their clothes, Vidya packed modern clothes. Then they were at the airport; waiting for their flight.
Sagar: Hey Vidya, are u hungry?
Vidya: No....(he looked at ehr woth an obvious face) ok well I am...
Sagar: Ok, I'll go get us something.
Vidya: Let me come too!
Sagar: Vidya, it's ok. And besides, u have to watch the bags.
Vidya: Ok...i WANT A CHOCOLATE DONUT!!
Everyone looked towards Vidya. Sagar was holding back laughter. Vidya's cheeks turned red and she looked down. Sagar went off to get the donut. (chocolate ofcourse...she would smack him if not)
Vidya was waiting, and Sagar came back with her donut. Then they were boarding the plane, and this guy, (flight attenedent) was staring at Vidya, in a bad way. Sagar didnt notice though, he was busy showing the people their passports. Vidya felt uncomfortable so she grabbed onto Sagar's arm very tight. Sagar looked at Vidya, but she was too busy looking the other way. Sagar, confused, took their passports back and they were now on the plane, seated.
Sagar: Vidya, tum itni parishaan kyun ho?
Vidya: Aisee koi baath nahi hai.
Sagar: Vidya...I know u are tensed...and I'm starting to think you're having an affair...
Vidya looked at him, SHOCKED, and her jaw dropped. Sagar burst out laughing.
Sagar: Oh God Vidya, I'm just Just kidding!!!
Vidya smacked him on his arm very hard.
Sagar: Ow!!!
Vidya: Stupid!
Sagar: I said sorry!!
Vidya: Shut up!
Sagar: Vidya...main--
Vidya: Shut up! She turned her head facing the window. Sagar inside was laughing at the way she reacted, but now he felt kind of bad. He put on a sad face. (it was real) Vidya noticed he was very quiet. She turned and saw his face. Tears came up in her eyes. She put one hand on his face.
Vidya: I'm sorry! (tears were rolling down her cheeks)
Sagar: (held her hand) Vidya--
He was interupted by a very emotional Vidya diggin her face into his chest, and saying the words, "I'm sorry" over and over.
Flight attendent: Ahem!
Sagar and Vidya both looked at him.
Flight attendent: Excuse me, u both are acting very inappropriately. There are kids on this plane. Sagar and Vidya saw some kids looking at them.
Vidya: Um..well excuse me, but u have no right to be talking to us like this. We were in the middle of something when u interupted. I don't know about u, but I find that a bit rude.
Flight Attendent" I'm sorry ma'am. He walked away.
NOTE: This is the same one that was looking at Vidya.
Sagar: Vidya..kya hogay tumhe?
Vidya: Mujhe kuch nahi huwa! Kya sumujta hai apne aap ko? Bewakoof!
Sagar smiled: Tim bilkul pagal ho tumhe pata hai?
Vidya: Jee han! (playful tone)
They both laughed and Vidya fell asleep on Sagar's shoulder, and Sagar fell asleep on Vidya's head. They had reached Paris now, and they both got up....and now they were at the hotel too.
Sagar: Excuse me? I have a room booked for Sagar Pratap Singh.
Receptionist: Yes sir, ur room is 356 and here are ur keys.
Sagar: Thank u.
They walked over to their room and Vidya ran inside.
Vidya: OMG!! It's beautiful!!
Sagar: Not more than u..
Vidya looked back at him, and her eyes were tearing up just a teeny weeny bit, and before she could say anything,
Sagar: Aab rona mat ok!!!
Vidya got mad and she threw a pillow at him. Sagar was mad now too, and Vidya laughed and ran around the room and he caught her from her waist, and they both fell back on the bed. They both had an eyelock. The song Bakhuda Tumhi Ho starts playing.

Bakhuda tumhi ho,(Vidya gets up and Sagar grabs her hand from behind)
Har jagah tumhi ho,(Vidya looks back at him)
Haan mein dekhua jahan jab,(he pulls her down in front of him)
Uss jagah tumhi ho,(moves Vidya's hair to one side)
Yeh jahan tumhi ho,(places a kiss there)
Wo jahan tumhi ho,(kisses her shoulder, Vidya shrugs)
Iss zameen se falak ke,(kisses her neck, and Vidya closes her eyes)
Darmiyaann..tumhi ho,(turns her face, and kisses her forehead)
Tum hi ho, beshumaar,(leans in to kiss her on her lips)
Tum hi ho..(Vidya turns her head, so it becomes a kiss on the egde of her shoulder, she moved a bit back too)
Tum hi ho, mujh mein haan,(he moves closer to her)
Tum hi ho..Tum hi ho..(their bodies are touching)
Hooo….(Vidya's heartbeats going very fast)

Kaise bataye tumhe,(He pulls up her chin)
Aur kis tarah yeh,(kisses her)
Kitna tumhe hum chahte hai,(release)
Saaya bhi tera dikhe,(Vidya blushing, runs to the window)
To paas jaake,(he walks up behind her)
Usmein simat hum jaate hai,(runs both of his hands down her arms)

Raasta tum hi ho,(he pulls down Vidya's strap a bit)
Rehnuman tum hi ho,(places a kiss there)
Jiski khwahish hai humko,(kisses her neck again)
Wo panah tum hi ho,(Vidya tuns around hugging him tightly, her eyes closed)
Tum hi ho, beshumaar,(slowly wraps his arms around her)
Tum hi ho..(he runs his hands down to Vidya's waist)
Tum hi ho, mujh mein haan,(hugs her tightly)
Tum hi ho..(they release from the hug)

Tu hi ehsason mein,(Vidya puts her hands on his chest)
Tu hi jazbaton mein,(he puts his hands on Vidya's waist)
Tu hi lamhaton mein,(Vidya looks up at him)
Tu hi din raaton mein..(He looks down at her)

Kaise bataye tumhe,(eyelock)
shab mein tumhare,(Vidya brings her face closer)
Khwaab haseen jo aate hai,(Sagar does the same)
Kaise bataye tumhe,(Vidya leans in and kisses him, her hands now on both his shoulders)
Lamz wo saare,(her grip tightens)
Jism ko jo mehkate hai(both release)

Bakhuda tumhi ho,(Sagar lifts her up in his arms)
Har jagah tumhi ho,(both have another eyelock)
Haan mein dekhua jahan jab,(Vidya breaks it by looking down)
Uss jagah tumhi ho,(Sagar walks over to the bed)
Yeh jahan tumhi ho,(gently lays her down)
Wo jahan tumhi ho,(he's walking away)
Iss zameen se falak ke,(Vidya grabs his hand)
Darmiyaann..tumhi ho,(looks back at her)
Tum hi ho, beshumaar,(Vidya pulls his arm, indicating for him to sit)
Tum hi ho..(he does so)
Tum hi ho, mujh mein haan,(Vidya gets up, sitting next to him, very close)
Tum hi ho..Tum hi ho..(bodies pressed together)
Hooo….(Sagar leans in forward as Vidya is leaning back until she can't go back anymore)
Ho ho ho..(eyelock and then...)
Hoo…(scene fades)

***(next morning)

Sagar wakes up to see Vidya sleeping next to him, with a cute smile on her face. He smiles and is getting up, when Vidya grabs his arm. He looks at her. She puts her head on his chest along with her hand.

Vidya: Good Morning Jaanu...

Sagar: Jaanu?

Vidya: Yea...

Sagar: U have become romantic han?

Vidya: Kya karoon...When my hubby is so adorable then I am left with no choice.

Sagar: U think I'm adorable?

Vidya: No...

Sagar: What?

Vidya: (giggles) No u are adorable...and cute...and handsome..and hot..and all mine. She looks up and kisses his cheek.

Sagar: (smiles) Of course...but I am also the "hubby"(Vidya giggles) of a pretty, cute, beautiful wife. (Vidya smiles)

Sagar: Ok get ready we are going sightseeing.

Vidya: OK!!!! She jumps up out of bed when Sagar grabs her hand, still laying down. (she looks back)

Sagar: Morning kiss??

Vidya smiles, and she leans in and pecks him on the lips and head to the bathroom.

Sagar, smiling, sits up on the bed.

Precap: SV go sightseeing, and a huge truck is coming towards Vidya.

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Posted: 17 years ago
^^srry bout weird colors..it turned out like that
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Posted: 17 years ago
Awesome update! very romantic! Continue soon... oh my gosh.. precap is scary..

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