FF: Sucha Pyaar NOTE page 56 - Page 9

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Posted: 17 years ago
#81
cute part plzz cont soon.......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#82
Recap: emm..o yea!!..... sagar threathen rohan....sv have their lil moment...but shalu n chinu just HAVE to interrupt..lol...😆
NOTE: The precap said mehendi, but i dont have time, so the next update will be the mehendi
Sagar is standing there, shocked. But he knows Vidya is waiting for him outside the room becasue he see the end of her duppata. When Vidya senses he's ready to go down, she starts to walk ahead, but Sagar pulls her back into the room and closes the door. Vidya's hands are on his shoulders and Sagar's hands are on her waist. This time, he locked the door.(good thinking)
Sagar: Vidya?
Vidya looks up at him.
Sagar: I
Vidya finally blinks. She was too busy staring at him. (aare, kitna pyaar karti ho? lol)😆
Sagar: love
Vidya looks down because she knows what he's gonna say.
Sagar:.....(quiet)
Vidya looks up at him
Sagar: ICE CREAM!!!!!!
He grabs her hand and says "Chalo! Sub ice cream kah rahe hain!!" Vidya is upset..because...well we all know what she wanted him to say. They both go down and their parents call them over.
SM: Aare, Sagar, Vidya! Aao yahan betho.
Sagar and Vidya both go and sit on the loveseat..(perfect for them)
SD: To aub hum chalte hain.
VM: Han.
SM: Aur mehendi ke din hum milte hain.
VM: Jee bilkul.
Everyone gets up to leave, and it's just Sagar and Vidya who are left. But they dont know that Shalu and Chinu are watching them. Vidya is walking but Sagar quickly grabs her waist from behind.
Vidya: Aare! Kya kar rahe ho?!! Koi dekhle ga!
Sagar: Jane ka maan nahi lagra.
Vidya: Toh main kya karoon? Ab jao!
Sagar: Pehle kiss.
Vidya: KYA!! Besharam!!
Sagar: To main nahi jaaonga.
Vidya turns around, still in Sagar's arms.
Vidya: Aakhien baand!
Sagar: Vidya...(whiney)
Vidya: Fine then! No kiss!
Sagar: Aacha baba theek hai. He closes his eyes, and Vidya stands on her tippie toes and kisses him on his forehead. Then she runs off.
Sagar opens his eyes. He goes to the door to leave.
Shalu: Kitne besharam hai yeh dono!
Chinu: Hann lekin they love each other alot. Aacha main chalta hoon.
Shalu: Ok bye!
Precap: Mehendi!!!
Ok that was short..but i dont have time to make it long! srry!! i mite post another short update tomorrow after I get home.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#83
hey priya!
awesome update! it makes me wanna eat ice cream now😆
anyway...can't wait to read the next one. plz continue soon😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#84
loved it =)
sooo cute.,...
hahaha i love the " i love........ice cream" part" lol
thanx for updating hun...
i feel like asking for more..but u already updated 3 times and its not fair for u...lol
so continue ssooonnn
btw i might update tonight.. =)

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Posted: 17 years ago
#85
^aww thank u ankita🤗....hehe yea ice cream. kewl u will update.. cant wate to read it!!!
well i mite not be able to tonight but 2moro i will 4 sure!! and thanx!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#86
i loved it..sooo cute..lol damn chinu and shalu....mind ur own business..grr...loll
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Posted: 17 years ago
#87
Priya Priya sweety the updates was just too good.
I really loved the both update. The both was adorable awsome amzing shit man I mean woman the update was just too good.

Please please continue soon. Shalu ne theek kaha dono bohut besharam hai aur Chinu bhi theek kaha ke dono bohut pyar karte hain. So I'm addicting for the next update.

I have a FF too, it's called Humesha Saat Saat. If you get some time then I will feel good if you read it. You don't have to comment just read. If you like then comment. But anyways I'm just loving your FF more and more...
I'm just waiting for the suhag raat. (Lol) Hahha I mean what will they do in Suhag Raat if they do earlier? Continue soon when you get some time..!!! I will wait for your next update...But hats of to you👏You have done a wonderful job...Good job keep it up:)

Okidoki see you later then***...:)=

Love S.Rina😊
Edited by LoveBMTD - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#88
omg...sorry cud not comment earlier...😳 awesome updates...wow u updated quite a few times but i enjoyed reading then 😉 haha shalu and chinu are funni i think the luv birds are actually besharam cum on in public 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#89
Great going Priya...........Thank you for the double updates....😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Recap: Emm...i have a bad memeory....i think it was the i love ice cream thing..yea and then vidya kisses sagar on his forehead..their moment...hehe lol sry...
Today is Vidya's mehendi. And Sagar and his family with a whole buncha gusets too. Oh and btw, Chinu and Shalu are starting to like each other. (As friends, not u know.) So then the girls are talking while Sagar and Chinu and their cousin Jai are sitting there watching them from the other end of the room.
Jai: Aare Sagar!! Tumne to mere liye bohut aachi bhabhi dhoondhi!
Chinu: Aare Jai, tum bhabhi pe line mat marna! Dadda bohut possesive hain!
Sagar makes a fist (he's smiling tho) at Chinu. Chinu and Raj laugh.
Over to the girls. (btw, Prachi is Vidya and Shalu's cuz)
Prachi: Aare Vidya, tumari mehendi main jiju ka naam to likha hain na! Aachi tareeke se likhna!! to unko mile nahi!!
Vidya blushes.
Shalu: Oh ho di!! Aap to badi sharma rahi hain!! Jiju ko buloan? (call)
Vidya glares at her, in a playful way tho.
The song Salam- e -ishq starts playing and the girls push Sagar and Vidya to the dance floor.
Ishq hai...(Sagar and Vidya are a couple inches apart)
teri aankhon ke matvaale kaajal ko mera salaam ( Sagar grabs her hand and twrils her around
zulfon ke kale kale baadal ko mera salaam(He runs his hand through her hair)
ghayal kar de mujhe yaar tere paayal ke jhankar(Vidya starts dancing with him)
hey soni sone teri soni har adaa ko salaam(Sagar grabs Vidya's hand and runs to the middle of the dance floor)
salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq (They do the salam e ishq move)
ho salaam-e-ishq salaam-e-salaam-e-ishq salaam-e-ishq(Same as above)

ho teri mastaani anjaani bataon ko mera salaam(Vidya starts singing)
rangon mein doobi doobi raaton ko mera slaaam(Vidya takes her finger and runs it down Sagar's face as he smiles)
khwaabon mein kho gayi main deewani ho gayi main(she walks around him and hugs him from the back)
soney soney aisse soney har adaa ko salaam(he brings her in front of him and taps her nose and Vidya smiles)
salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq (salam e ishq move)
(ho salaam-e-ishq salaam-e-
salaam-e-ishq salaam-e-) -

ho teri hathhawitch mehandi ka rang khila hain(sagar brings up her mehendi waala haath)
tujhe sapano da changa mehboob mila hain(he puts it on his heart, but carefully, not messing it up)
meri banno pyaari pyaari sari duniya se nyaari(he does a flying kiss at her)
ise doli mein tu leja doliyaan, doliyaan...(he picks her up and twirls her around and everyone is awww ing)

teri meri nazar jo mili pehli baar(vidya walks closer to him)
ho gaya ho gaya tujhse pyaar(her one hand on his chest and eyelock)
dil hai kya dil hai kya jaan bhi tujhpe nisaar(sagar breaks eyelock and dances w/ her again)
maine tujhe kiya aitbaar(both smile at each other)
ho main bhi toh tujhpe mar gayi(Vidya sings)
deewanapan kya kar gayi(vidya walks around him slowly)
meri har dhakan betaab hai(she touches her heart)
palkon vich tera khwaab hai(another eyelock)
ho jaan se bhi pyaari pyaari jaaniya ko salaam(they start dancing)
salaam-e-ishq, (salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq) (salam-e-ishq step)
(ho salaam-e-ishq salaam-e-
salaam-e-ishq salaam-e) ishq hai....
(srry if the moves didnt go with the words, i love this song so i chose it)
When the dance is over, and Vidya's mehendi is finished, and everyone is enjoying the part, Sagar grabs Vidya and runs upstairs to Vidya's room and locks the door.
Vidya: Kya hai? mujhe yahan kyun laye?
Sagar: Romance ka mood hai. (he walks upto her and puts his arms around her waist,and puts Vidya's hands on his chest)
Vidya: Besharam! Koi ajaye ga!
Sagar: Koi baath nahi! Maine darwaza lock kiya hai!
He comes closer leaning in to kiss her, but Vidya puts her hand on his mouth. He backs off a bit. (meaning moves his head back, doesnt let go of her)
Vidya: KYA?? Durwaza kyun lock kiya? Log kya sumjen ge?
Sagar: Sumujne do! Waisey hi, tum meri hone vaali biwi ho!
Vidya: Pagal ho kya? Aaj humari suhaag raat nahi hai!
Sagar: Isska mutlab suhaag raat pe tum mujhe aaisa karne dogi?
Vidya: Nahi my very besharam hone vaale paati!!!
Sagar: Yeh to dekhen ge...
Vidya's jaw drops. Sagar laughs.
Sagar: Just kidding!
Vidya puts a angry face on and playfully punches his chest. He smiles. She got out of his grip and is leaving, but Sagar grabs her wrist. Vidya looks back, slightly irratated.
Vidya: (groans) Aab kya hai??
Sagar pulls her close.
Sagar: (whispers) Gusa aah raha hai?
Vidya: (whispers) Bohut.
Sagar: (normal voice) To kya karogi?
Vidya comes closer and clutches his kurta. Sagar is shocked.
Vidya: (quiet voice, almost whisper) Dekhna jaate ho?
Sagar nods with a naughty smile on his face.
Vidya leans in, and so does Sagar so now their foreheads are touching.
Vidya: (whispers) Kabhi choone nahi doongi.
She giggles and is almost succesfull in running off when Sagar grabs her wrist and spins her so now her abck is facing to him and her hand is hin his. He puts his head on her shoulder.
Sagar: Aur choo oonga to?
Vidya: Tum nahi kar pao ge.
Sagar: Kiya to?
Vidya: To....
Sagar: Toh?
Vidya turns around and facing him. She leans in and kisses him on the cheek.
Vidya: Toh ye...tumara aakhri kiss. She turned around to leave when....
Sagar: Mutlab tumse na?
Vidya turns around in shock.
Vidya: (mad voice) KYA????
Sagar laughs and says,
Sagar: Pagal!
He walks upto her, kisses her on the cheek, and then looks at her. Vidya closed her eyes. He knows she won't stop him. But he doesnt kiss her. he holds her face, and Vidya opens her eyes. They both have an eyelock. Vidya looks down. Sagar brings chin up with his finger. He kisses her forehead. (oh and btw, it's time for everyone to leave)
Sagar: Suhaag raat ke liye, mujhe bohut intazaar hai. He smiles and leaves the room.
Vidya just stands there, smiling.
Precap: Wedding!!! But..u have to wait a lil bit b4 the suhaag raat...hehe

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