FF: Sucha Pyaar NOTE page 56 - Page 12

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Posted: 17 years ago
soo cute..loved it..continue soon
omg truck comng towards vidya?? =O save herr!! lol
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Posted: 17 years ago
MooMoo- thank u!!! i have learned besharmi from Chup Chup Ke Pyar Hogya..lol😆 and i mite update 2moro
Mushtari- thank u! an yes i had to put some sorda twist in there...it was getting boring
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Posted: 17 years ago
awww priya.....
thank u soo much for dedicating it to me hun
i loved it this update =)
like for real...
i love u hun
continue really soon =)
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Posted: 17 years ago
Sorry comented very late...i read them now...i loved it.....awww so sweet...cant wait for your next update
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Posted: 17 years ago
divz_fan--thank u!! whats ur name?
Sonali di--thanks!!
Anki-awww np...thank u!!!
Irika-thank u!!
Kalee--np...thank u!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
This one is for all my readers..thanks so much for ur lovely comments...
Recap: SV have a moment (well a very long moment,) and they are gonna go sightseeing.
Vidya comes out from the bathroom wearing a purple salwar kameez. Sagar looks up at her.
Sagar: Vidya is that what u are wearing?
Vidya: Yea!! Do u like it??
Sagar: I love u in anything...but remember ur promise??
Vidya is putting a confused smile on her face.
Vidya: Promis---Oh right...But Sagar...
Sagar: Please?? (puts on a puppy face)
Vidya: Awwww..u are too cute...ok...I'll wear something modern.
Sagar runs up to her and kisses her on the cheek.
Sagar: I love u!! He runs into the bathroom.
He comes out wearing dark blue jeans, a white shirt, and a black jacket, and he looks to see Vidya putting on her earings. When she's done, she turns around, and looks at Sagar with a smile on her face.
(She's wearing this)
Sagar: Wow!! U look....amzing....
Vidya pecks him on the cheek.
Vidya: Thank u!!! She looks at him up to down..(srry dunno how to phrase that)
Vidya: Well I have to dress up!! Otherwise I'll look like nothing compared to u...
Sagar: (taps hr nose) That's not true! Now shall we go? (held out his elbow)
Vidya links arms with him. "Of course!"
They get a cab. It's one of those with a glass between the driver and passengers, so the driver cant hear them. BUt either way, he wouldnt understand, since he only speaks French.
Sagar: So Vidya...
Vidya: Hmm? (she has her head on his shoulder and her arms wrapped around one of his.
Sagar: Where do u want to go first?
Vidya: Anywhere....as long as it's with u...
Sagar: Oh really??
Vidya: Mmm...
Sagar: (smiles naughtily) How about abck to the hotel room.
Vidya looks up at him with shock and smacks his arm playfully.
Vidya: Besharam!!
Sagar: Han...woh to main hoon.
Vidya smiles. She pulls down the black curtain in fornt of the glass. (sharam aati hogi😆)
Sagar: Aasa kyun kiya tumne?
Vidya: Woh uss driver ko sub dikh raha tha.
Sagar: Koi baath nahi. Hum newlyweds hain. Usse sumuj ata. Aur waisey bhi..hum kuch zyada nahi kar rhe the.
Vidya: KYA???
Sagar laughs. She smacks him on the arm again.
Sagar: Oww!!! Tum kyun mujhe marti rehti ho??
Vidya: Mujhe marna hai! She is about to hit him again when Sagar grabs her arm.
Vidya looks into his eyes. Sagar is staring into her eyes. They both lean in and he kisses her. Sagar had let go of Vidya's hand and she put it on his shoulder, her grip was tightning. They released, and had another eyelock when the heard an knock on the glass. VIdya opened the curtain and glass.
Vidya: Yes?
The driver stated talking in French. Vidya looked at him, confused. Then he pointed out the window. Vidya understood that they were where they needed to be.
Vidya: Oh! Thank u! She hands him his money and her and Sagar get out the cab. They are at the Eiffel Tower. They walk closer and upto the place where visitors are. There are only a few people there, including themselves.
Vidya: Wow!!! She gets the digital camera out of her purse and she is taking a picture.
Vidya: Sagar look!!
She feels Sagar wrap his arms around her waist, and his head on her shoulder.
Vidya: Kya kar rahe ho? This is public u know!! Not out bedroom!!
Sagar: Stop worrying Vidya!!! People won't mind..And besides..we're a honeymoon couple..
Vidya: Han lekin--
She is interuppted by the laughter of some kids. Both Sagar and Vidya look at them (in the same position, but Sagar lifts his head of her shoulder)
They run off. Vidya turns around, and just Sagar's hands are on her waist.
Vidya: Bhudhu! Dekha! Maine kaha tha na tumse! Baache ne dekh liya!!
She gently hits his shoulder.
Then she sees a park and runs to it.
Sagar: Hey Vidya!!! Wait up!!!
Vidya: Catch me if u can!!! (hehe is she the gingerbread girl??😆😆)
Sagar runs after her and he finally catches her from her waist. (behind her) Vidya is laughing and he spins her around. they both fall, leaving Vidya on top. They both have an eyelock when the song Tum Se Hi from Jab We Met starts to play.

Aa aa..aa aa…aa aa..aa aa.. aa..(Vidya realizes their postion)

Na hai yeh pana(she gets up and so does Sagar)
Na khona he hai(they're rubbing the grass off themselves)
Tera na hona, jaane(Vidya runs around, twirling in circles)
Kuyn hona he hai(Sagar looks up, and notices her)

Tum Se Hi din hota hai(He smiles)
Surmayi shaam aati hai(she stops twirling, and she is laughing)
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi(she's about to fall since she's so dizzy)
Har ghadi saans aati hai(Sagar runs and catches her)
Zindagi kehlati hai(Vidya is breathing heavily)
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi(She looks up to see Sagar staring into her eyes)

Na hai yeh pana(they have an eyelock)
Na khona hi hai(Vidya snaps out of it)
Tera na hona, jaane(she uses his shoulders as support and she stands up straight)
Kuyn hona hi hai (she looks at him, smiling)

Aa aa..aa aa…aa aa..aa aa.. aa..(Sagar puts both hands on her cheeks)

Aankho mein aankhe teri(he leans in)
Bahoo mein Bahe teri(Vidya puts her hands on his arms)
Mera na mujh mein kuch raha(Vidya realizes what he's about to do)
Hua kya(she turns her head and that ends up being a kiss on her cheek)
Bathon mein bathein teri(she runs to a bench and sits down)
Rathe saogathe meri(Sagar sits down next to her)
Kuyn tera sab yeh ho gaya(they notice a couple eating form one ice cream cone)
Hua kya(Vidya leans her head on his shoulder and smiles)
Mein kahin bhi jaata hun(Sagar looks at her and smiles too)
Tum Se Hi mil jatha hun(she closes her eyes)
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi(Sagar thinks of the first time they met)
Shor mein khamoshi hai(Vidya giggles as if reading his mind, but Sagar doesn't hear her, he's lost in his own thoughts)
Thodi si behoshi hai(then being trapped in that classroom)
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi(then last night)

Aa aa aa aa aa aa…(Vidya gets up and she runs over to the ice cream stand)

Aadha sa vaada kabhi(she buys a chocolate bar and a cone)
Aadhe se zyada kabhi(she comes back to the bench and sits down)
Jee chahe karlu is tarah(she offers Sagar the cone)
Wafa ka(smiling he takes it and tosses it in the trash)
Chode na chute kabhi(she looks at him, confused)
Tode na toote kabhi(he puts his hands on hers, indicating they share)
Jo daaga tum se jud gaya(Vidya smiles)
Wafa ka(she nods her head)
Mein tera sarmaya hun(she takes a bite)
Jo bhi mein ban paya hun(Sagar smiles at the way she is acting..so kiddish)
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi(she has a lil on her cheek)
Raaste mil jate hai(Sagar is staring at her)
Manzile mil jati hai(Vidya is too busy eating the bar)
Tum Se Hi Tum Se Hi(he notices her cheek)

Na hai yeh pana(Sagar extends his hand forward)
Na khona he hai(Vidya looks at him, confused)
Tera na hona, jaane(he wipes off the chocolate)
Kuyn hona he hai(she smiles)

Aa aa aa aa aa aa … (they finished the choclate bar)

Sagar and Vidya are sitting on the bench. Vidya is feeling a bit tired, so she leans her head on Sagar's shoulder.

Vidya: Sagar?

Sagar: Yea?

Vidya: I love you.

SAgar: I love u too.

Sagar: Hotel wapas chalen? U look a little tired.

Vidya: Han..Main bohut thak chooki hoon.

Sagar: Ok well u sit here, I'll go get us a cab.

Vidya: Ok.

Vidya is sitting on the bench, and she is looking around. She looks on the road, and sees a little kid, and a huge truck heading towards it. She gasps and runs to the kid. She pushes her aside and looks to see the truck coming towards her. She puts her hands up in front of her face.

Vidya: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sagar is looking for a cab when he hears someone scream and looks in that direction. He is shocked.

Sagar: VIDYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Precap: I like to be suspenseful....haha srry..actually I dunno yet either...

Ankuu thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
1st!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

omg cute as hell =)
i loved it loved it loved it...
but hun u have got to continue since i dont like tooo much ssuspense...
plezzzzzzzzz?
another update??
plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😊
Edited by anki4life - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: anki4life

1st!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

omg cute as hell =)
i loved it loved it loved it...
but hun u have got to continue since i dont like tooo much ssuspense...
plezzzzzzzzz?
another update??
plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz😊

awwwww thank u!!!! i love u ankita u r sooo sweet....and i can update ltr on 2day..i'll start working on it...and please 4give me if I am not able to post it...what say??
Ankuu thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sharad+divz4evr

awwwww thank u!!!! i love u ankita u r sooo sweet....and i can update ltr on 2day..i'll start working on it...and please 4give me if I am not able to post it...what say??



np
and i think that'll work for me...
and ill prolly update before tonight =)
and aww thanx hun.. i love u too
kmishra thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
Love it!!!!!! Aw this is sweet!!!!
but if anything bad ahppens im gonna kill you...JK.....UPDATE SOON...I CNT TAKE SUSPENSE

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